XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Truth Or Dare Pt.2]

My daily fix of dave and carl

haha nice work here and this one had a nice ending and there for no changes needed, some moments and some chuckles to come along, I cant get enough of this comic its always so entertaining and the adventures you take the characters on always gotta have My daily fix of dave and carl because I Cant get enough of this comic its always something nifty and fun.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
nice ending and there for no changes needed

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[Fat Man]

Nifty design

Nice face everything else seems bland maybe some borders or added detail in the backround would be nice, you can clearly see and while there is no or little color it is a nice piece you have here and the talent shows off well, so keep making great black and white stuff like this, and remember some added color never hurts but its your simple idea from line work to a nifty design that shines.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice face everything else seems bland maybe some borders or added detail in the backround would be nice

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[Buttface]

A beautifull Nifty Piece

Wow this was amazing the shading detail is uncanny very well done work here, would love to see a colored version of this, I actually enjoy these black and white styles of drawings and paintings a bit more then the colored versions and thats because the detail tends to show its raw form here in the black and white line work and small details now dont get me wrong the color can be amazing but I love the raw black and white theme.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love to see a colored version of this

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[Heading Home]

Love it

Haha nice this was a great entry and tells about awarness of drinking and teleporting lol great entry no changes are needed, I do love this comic series and hope it doesnt end anytime soon, the energy and funny jokes in this is what I have enjoyed the most from this series, its a pleasure to review this and all the side stuff like the top-tens but regardless this particular entry here gave me a good fun chuckle I love the jokes in this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
great entry no changes are needed

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[Truth Or Dare Pt.3]

A fun adventure

Well this one was interesting I do have to say I love the small detailed of effects and such like the fire or flames etc makes it so much better, So here we are with another great adventure with such great humor I love how far you have taken this comic series from the very start to what it is now and it keeps going strong so props to you this particular entry was really funny and full of some adventure.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
make more soon

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[Shagrath]

Very nice

So here was a very nice piece almost feel like you could slap some borders on this one, anyways great stuff, love your style here of black and white design and drawing, And glad you have not added much color yet but when you do it will be pretty amazing stuff, the style here and design of the black and white is pretty good though and cant wait for some color one day.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
almost feel like you could slap some borders on this one, anyways great stuff

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fadedshadow responds:

yeah a border probably would create a nice effect. also dunno if you'd be interest but there's a version where i just did the line-art and it was a pretty good minimalist piece imo.

[Spartans]

Nice work here

Very nice work on this one and no major changes needed Nice work, its a black and white style drawing here I do think you could ad more to it but what you do have is pretty brilliant, and I like that its not colored or has very little colored but adding some wouldnt hurt either, but anyways nice drawing here. keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no major changes needed

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[The Origin Of Dave's Undies]

A fun mix of comic here

The origin of his underwhear lol this was for sure a funny one and once again no changes are needed, so this was A fun mix of comic here, you have some nice detail here and the outcome of this one was pretty nifty, these comic entries get better with each new one and I found this to be a delight, so really nice work here on this submission and I hope to see more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
once again no changes are needed

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[Trading Cards]

This comic series is pure awsome

I love this particular one because the color is really vibrant and a great little story here, no changes are really needed here, some really good details and effects but most of all you bring on some great comic frames with a twist of adventure This comic series is pure awsome A fine comic series here, some great frames of adventures and great characters aswell, always feeding off of eachother really makes this combo work well.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes are really needed here

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[Kiss Creature]

Very nice

The backround could have more details and maybe even adding a frame or border would accent this piece even better, these styles of black and white are notbad and they present a classic form of beauty but anyways you have a nice sketch or black and white design here, and its always nice to see something as nice as this design and drawing come alive in just black and white.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
backround could have more details and maybe even adding a frame or border would accent this piece even better

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