Here was a nice comic idea
Nice comic some nice frame work too no changes needed here, I for one encourage you to build onto this and create a great comic as you have been, this was a very nice entry and the web comic you have here is very creative with a nice visual point of nice effort and detail, so nice job indeed, hope you make more great comics like this one.
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Nice comic some nice frame work too no changes needed here,
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