XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gym Class]

Nice characters

So here was some nice chaeracter detail the shine on the skin-tone was nice, I think some even more added shine and even a pinch of sparkle would be nice aswell as some more backround detail like props and such, but beyond that mentioned you have done a swell job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some even more added shine and even a pinch of sparkle would be nice aswell as some more backround detail like props and such

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[Disgruntled Neko Girl]

Very nice indeed

So here was something very nice indeed love the pink hair and allwoed for a really nice shine on this one it was a cute piece and her expression was pretty good the backround was bland but that was also ok the focus is the main character, anyways hope to see more of your work sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nice added detail to the backround but even as it is now it was pretty good.

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[Kantai Collection - Amatsukaze]

Beautiful character design

A beautiful character designs here you always bring in the color here and make for some nice visuals here, the little details are nice as for the backround maybe not your thing but would love some added elements maybe even just some subtle color design just an idea ofcourse, anyways nice work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added elements maybe even just some subtle color design just an idea ofcourse

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[Pacemaker]

Awsome

Wow the visual view point right down the center is amazing, wish there was more lighting effects down the middle, So I do look forward to new stuff you have. Glad I found this creative and nice piece of artwork here well rounded So this was a great outcome if you ask me and it was a pleasent piece of art and design

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish there was more lighting effects down the middle

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[Dark Room]

Love this piece

This one is ok. I like it, but then I don't. Mainly because it's too dark. You can't really see what's going on in the picture. My suggestions are to add a source of light somewhere. Maybe in the room, in the corner, or make the view outside the window a little more brighter so it would appear that the light was coming in. Other than that it's a really good picture

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wish there was more lighting effects with the window or somewhat light up more.

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[mmm pepsi]

Cool

So theres nothing more refrsshing then a good ol soda, onlything I might change might be some skyline back drop details, it seems to have something of a theme a little anyways, there was some nifty things I have not seen done before, so glad you put in some effort to make things different.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I might change might be some skyline back drop details

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[Shark Eater]

Very intense visuals

very cool. First thing you notice is the glowing eyes. They really stand out and are very haunting. Everything is perfect. I like how there's really no light in the picture. The dark of the water really makes the creature look more menacing. The details of the teeth are good as well. The black hole of the mouth makes you believe it's actually going to swallow something up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wish there was more glowing specs and effects in the ocean backdrop.

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[Eri]

Jump jump

Well as some art its amazing as the animation goes its pretty good too wish there was more animated stuff like in the backround maybe some bugs or stars etc, the effort shows, and hope to see what else you bring us. hope to see more down the road but dont wait to long because I admire your imagination.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish there was more animated stuff like in the backround maybe some bugs or stars etc

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[Bridge Baby]

Nice

So this was an amazing piece here something very different and even random you really know how to push something like this and make it just come alive, only kind of suggestion I might suggest would be maybe some added backround detail overall this was something special.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
only kind of suggestion I might suggest would be maybe some added backround detail

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[Sasha]

Very cool

Very cool indeed I like her outfit. Reminiscent of kill la kill. The fireworks in the background are a nice touch because they add a splash of color. I like the angle the artist used here. The details are incredible. I like how they made it seem like the outfit is contorting to her body shape. It's a really cool picture and I don't see anything wrong with it. I think a lot of people will like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe and just maybe some sparkle and more shine

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