XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Queen Bee]

Fresh art

So this was some fresh art you have some nice color themes going on I could see you adding more glare and shine on the glasses just an idea though, but overall this was a nice and complete visual, very nice work indeed so I do hope to see more from you soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
could see you adding more glare and shine on the glasses just an idea though

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[RING FIT ADVENTURE X PROMARE]

Nice work

So this was cool and the animation porton of this really jumps out at you with a plus of elements so nice job there as an art piece its pretty interesting aswell, I like your style here, would love more flashy effects on this maybe more in the backround, You really braught something to life here from art, a very nice piece and its stuff like this that really make me go wow amazing stuff and that exactly what you have created here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would love more flashy effects on this maybe more in the backround

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[Saidonia]

Great character

Very cute and sweet. I like the colors . Her wings make her seem innocent and angelic. Every detail is perfect. I like the flow of her hair. The blue light around her face really stands out against the dark pink. Two colors you Normally wouldn't see together. In this picture they work well. The clouds behind her are beautiful. I like the unique design to the wings, especially at the bottom.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A great character no changes needed.

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[Witch Cafe]

Very colorful

I love all the amounts of color and details of color too some really nice lighting effects aswell, almost like looking into a frame of a picture so maybe adding a frame or border would be a real plus with this one, but regardless this was amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
almost like looking into a frame of a picture so maybe adding a frame or border would be a real plus

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[A meeting]

Amazing

I have to say you do some amazing scenes love the lighting effects most of all, dont feel there is any need for any changes, The skills on these types really come out, and thats why I have come to enjoy these types as they speak volumes of success, so nice effort.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
dont feel there is any need for any changes

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Kamikaye responds:

Thanks a lot :)

[Smoke break]

Beautiful

Such a beautiful sight you have here, the view is just beautifull you are truly talented and there for do not need my advice you have created a masterpiece here and it really has come full circle of how talented you really are so good job and do make more of this style soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
None needed.

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[Leon (Animated Gif)]

Nice

So this was pretty cool nice to see an animated version here you have some nice skills and animated it very well I like the darker colors especially with the backrounds, wish there was more backround sparkles or glows to reflect the backround detail more, anyways nice art piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish there was more backround sparkles or glows to reflect the backround detail more

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[FIERCE DEITY]

Nice work

So the character here was nice the blue orms at top seem to distort the wording you have at the top, maybe no blue orb balls would sufice, this was a nice creation here, I would ad more to the backround too, other then that this was really nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
remove the blue orbed balls and maybe ad more detail in the backrounds.

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DARKRYAN responds:

Sorry for the late reply. I haven't been on here in a while, due to life getting in the way. Arigatou for the feedback. This is a very old image, so I definitely see the issues this artwork had. (Not to mention that I see that this design made him look like a younger Sesshomaru instead. XD.) To clarify what I was thinking of with this image back then, I added those blue orbs as a reference to the magic particles that appear from his sword when Z-targeting. But I do agree that they definitely interfere with the name. And yeah, I was horribly lazy with backgrounds back then. XD.


To clarify, in case you or anyone is wondering, I have since made many revisions to this series. The original concept for this series has been completely thrown out as it would've been one of the worst series ever, since it actually didn't have a storyline to begin with. It was originally going to be just a mishmosh of ideas from different games horribly thrown together. (I'm actually glad I never released the animations I had made back then. That would've been painful. XD.)


One thing to note is that the Fierce Deity and anything "Majora's Mask"-related, as well as anything containing material from timelines outside of "The Hero Is Defeated" timeline are no longer relevant to this series. I am still working on developing the events of the storyline further, but have a nice concept for the core of the series so far. It's actually one of the main reasons why I've had to put animating "The Legend Of Zelda: Oracle Of Secrets" on hiatus for a bit. (The main reason being just issues with life getting in the way. But that's about to be taken care of, fortunately.) I refined the story to stick with the original material from both the games/manga much better so the events will make much more sense now, and am continuing to make better material for this series. To clarify, everything that I have animated from episodes 1 - 4 part 1 of 2 is still relevant, and will continue from where I left off. Just that the core of the story and the future events in the series have been refined more, and are still being worked on. So if you happen to see it in the future, I hope you enjoy what I have in store. And again, arigatou for your feedback. :3.

[supasonic]

Really nice

So you cant go wrong with some sonic, I will suggest that maybe have the backround stars flicker or glow off and on just an idea, but this was a cool looking sonic character, You give us good Desire and you seem pretty Accustomed to it, Some top notch work here it was a pleasure to review and see how this all went together, Not alot of art can win awards but when the effort does show off as does this one then its worth it and this one was worth it for sure so fantastic job there, and props to you on the awards.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I will suggest that maybe have the backround stars flicker or glow off and on just an idea

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