XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dad 'n Me]

Simple and fun

So this was a simple and fun piece you have here the whole dad and me theme is great the little guy is so tiny lol but regardless the Sprite work looks good and very shiny love the simple backround and the element surrounding things very nice Sprite entry here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these simple yet fun pieces

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[SSMM Demake Game Pitch]

Very nice

So this was cool very nice indeed I love the designs here and the colors and that red is great I think a second deeper red would have improved on this but regardless this was a well done piece with some amazing artwork here so nice job and love the Russia theme here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More reds but. Then again it's fine as is

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[Red is not a Boy?]

Nice

Some more great screens and mock ups of some nice visuals here you really bring out some nice detail Sprite details show off well props to you for such talent that you bring to the table I really love this detail you show and the different creations so keep making great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wonder if you could present this in a gallery style piece with frames

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[Suuh Sicure]

Nice charchter

So here was another nice charchter you have here some really cool features and nice detail on the face the hair could have a sort of shine on it or something and overall this was a great piece not much should be changed if anything at all a nice art piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in the hair

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[Surrender to the Hunger]

Very good

And here was something very good the face and charchter structure was really good the blood was notbad and could be better I think having some shine on the blood and more 3-d ish on the blood would be cool anyways that's my take on this art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glistering blood

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[Aron sketch]

Really nice

So I found this to be a really nice piece of art here the black and white style is really good I think if you added some color or parts of color it could greatly improve on this piece but also it's fine as is I like the work though it's a good drawing you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color

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[Lina]

Amazing work

So you have some amazing work here I love the out fit with some gold ish looking pieces over a red the colors really accented well that gold though I think you could have added some sparkle and shine and the same goes for the element in her hand just an opinion that may improve on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Gold elements could sparkle and shine

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[Fionna]

Cute

Well this was cute the legs seem so stiff but maybe that was the intent I do like the pose and expression on the face so you did a good job there the background does need some work though it was just very bland and could use some elements maybe some props or even just a simple pattern

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Background needs some sort of backdrop or pattern or some design maybe some props even

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[Grunge Guy: The Grunge Strikes Back]

Decent

I like the grunge idea seems like some of the linework well the outter linework was very grungy I'm wondering bc if a darker line would work and also adding some background stuff and design would be really cool but anyways that's my take on this fine art piece

[Grunge Guy]

Awesome

So here we have another awsome charchter you bring some nice nastalga vibe to your art style and charchters like the long looping hair and the saggy pants it all comes together and ads some nice flavor here the bland background is not a bad thing but wouldn't mind some props or a design back there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props or some pattern in the background would be cool

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