XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rabbit dance]

Really beautiful

Now this was a beautiful piece here even her post was pretty good her hat was cute I think you should ad much more shine on her hat maybe even a sparkle on her hat and maybe more depth into the backround but besides all that this was pretty good nice artistic style here and I look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the hat and some depth in the background

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[Sketch for PokeMashup]

Very nice

I really like this and really like the progress of it all you really made it come together and the progress really shows the good detail of it all so nice job on this and great finished product it was very nice work and don't see this needed any changes because it was for a contest of sorts but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it was for a contest

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[Bitchy Witch]

Notbad

So this was notbad at all the colors seem a little dry but you have a good piece of art style here my only issue with this was that make her hat really shine more it would give off a really nice effect of things and I really do like this character you did pretty well on it and my advice here is keep making stuff like this because you do have the talent for this so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here ad more shine to the hat

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[Goku Super Saiyan 3]

Beautiful piece

This was a very beautiful piece of artwork I love the deep texture in skin and outfit it was the hair I wouldn't mind more of a radiant gold feel to it and in the backround there should be a beam of light giving off that shine and light effect but besides that this was still a great piece of artwork here so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of light from the backround and more gold texture on the hair

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Lessy responds:

Thanks ☺️ i appreciate the tips and will definitely improve in the next one.

[a beast]

Wow

Wow this was beautiful a very nice creature or something here the white background but maybe having more of a scene backround would represent the creature a bit better and I think you should as much more sparkle on the characters eyes just a tad bit more. Love the purple color though it's pretty good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle on the eyes and something more in the background

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[:D]

Nice

This was a nice piece of work the background I don't know maybe that needs more of a base backround this one was notbad but just seemed off from the character itself I like all the colors used though and made this look pretty good though so nice work here I like your style here so keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a different background

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[Chōchin-obake]

Notbad

This was notbad it was a nice little piece of art here the main portion of the body seems like it could use more deeper color tones on it or something the background could also use some detail or some type of pattern but regardless it could use some nice work here. I like your effort and the energy you put forward here so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work and body skin tones

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[Nude Charcoal Statuette]

Very nice art

So nice artwork here and I like the structure you are working with it's a pretty decent piece you have here and a lovely piece of what you made of it so I was pretty impressed with this whole piece here the only thing I would add here would be some frames and or borders to make it like a gallery piece but it's nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and borders to reflect that of a gallery piece

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[Cross Contour Hand]

I like it

It's very artistic and has a style all on it's own. Love they greytone also on this and normally I would suggest some type of background but to be honest this was pretty nifty and an overall great piece of art here and hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this piece

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[Disposable People ID Matte]

Different

Well this one was very different and it could have a whole other meaning and maybe it does in it's own way but I do want to see you have more focus on the main text of it all maybe that part could be more light up with some shine and some glow just to have more focus on it the outter part could still be dark so that the light area still has that focus these are just some small ideas that you may want to try out in the end it may get you some better results for your art piece just something to think about and it is all a positive vibe either way you decide to go

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and darkening effects

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VicariousE responds:

Thanks for the review! Was kinda meant to be darkish, the trash can in the background was an old royalty-free piece of clip art, run thru some filters and effects. The logo was printed and colored by hand, then turned into a gif. I ran a transparency of some clouds, but, as you say, didn't quite fit the bill. If I had continued the show, I would've made something similar again, only higher res and framed as an actual title card... although even then, they were on their way out in favor of all digital 'super-overs'