XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Filia Butt]

Spectacular

This was a spectacular piece of art it's literally almost perfect from the shine on the backside the hat the pose the expression on the face just perfect my advice for improvement is ad a feather or sparkle on the hat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle on the hat or even just a feather

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[Art Trade]

Prisim

So this was cool I love the reflection off the prisim effect here the circle background was nice too seems like it's missing another circle in the background but still a good piece of art here and I was very impressed with what you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another circle or frames in background edges

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[Witch]

Love it

So this was nice I like the dark look on this two things I can see you improving on first of all that green smoke or aura on left could have a more glow about it and the gem in the staff could have some sparkle to it but besides that this was such a beautiful piece of artwork and great character work so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas for improvement

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[Hero Pet Challenge]

And the final

And here you have the final piece but like I said in the other piece more brighter shine and sparkle on the weapon at least the metal parts of it all it's really nice though and a great character design here that cat was also a nice touch. Also maybe some backround scene of some sort would be a huge plus as well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter sparkle on the weapon and some backdrop or scene in the background

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[Process]

Very nice progress

I love pieces like this because it really shows what it takes to progress to each step and the final step is very awsome I think that sparkle on the weapon was nice but you should have it shine even more and brighter so nice work there just adding a little more shine would be a huge plus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter shine on the weapon

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[CharacterDesign]

Cool

So this was a nice character design I like what you have done here on this piece the shadows on the ground all though the one on the right shadow should be slightly smaller as she jumps and maybe do something with the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shadow work and backround detail

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[Blue Hair Waifu]

Cute

Very cute here I think the backround and the crown need some effcts like her crown could use a sparkle or two and the backround was too yellow have it blended with other colors and such but it's all a good portrait kind of

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blending of colors in the background and a sparkle and shine on the crown

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[TINKERBELL]

Ad frames

So this is one of those that I think you should ad frame work on or some borders something to reflect off the beautiful shading and design you have I love the color here very nice shades and we'll done character structure so all in all this was a beautiful piece and it shows off very well so nice work it was fantastic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned frames and or borders would be a plus

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[OPERATION MISTLETOE KISS]

Haha cute

Well what can I say this was both sexy and cute and you showed the detail all though that backround really needs work I would love to see more depth into the backround maybe some scene I something but overall it's a nice piece of art from a very talented artist so keep up the brilliant work you have shown us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more depth in the background

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[Vampire Christmas]

Wow intense

This was pretty intense the line work is very amazing and you really showed us some smooth colors and skin tones very nice work and a nice style of art and character design I love how the Christmas tree is slightly dim maybe add more sparkle there but overall a nice job here looks great

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small sparkle from Christmas tree ornaments

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