XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[KittyShoes Susan]

Beautiful

This was a beautiful piece of art the colors are great and matched very well and worked off of eachother even the designs on this was very cool and a nice piece over all with some artistic styles here and does not need any fixing up at all as this was a brilliant piece of artwork so nice job indeed on this beautiful piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes on this one at all it was beautiful

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[EmbarrASSing]

More shine

So this was really good I love the yellow color here made for a good theme even had a nice background on this one my only issue here is she needs much more shine on her backside and drop down her legs too ad more shine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on legs and backside

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[Risky Boobs]

This was cute

And this was a cute piece I love the colortone here and most of all love all the other characters examining things lol that background could be slightly better but overall this was a nice piece of artwork so nice job here all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some detail in the background

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[Filia Butt]

Spectacular

This was a spectacular piece of art it's literally almost perfect from the shine on the backside the hat the pose the expression on the face just perfect my advice for improvement is ad a feather or sparkle on the hat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle on the hat or even just a feather

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[Art Trade]

Prisim

So this was cool I love the reflection off the prisim effect here the circle background was nice too seems like it's missing another circle in the background but still a good piece of art here and I was very impressed with what you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another circle or frames in background edges

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[Witch]

Love it

So this was nice I like the dark look on this two things I can see you improving on first of all that green smoke or aura on left could have a more glow about it and the gem in the staff could have some sparkle to it but besides that this was such a beautiful piece of artwork and great character work so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas for improvement

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[Hero Pet Challenge]

And the final

And here you have the final piece but like I said in the other piece more brighter shine and sparkle on the weapon at least the metal parts of it all it's really nice though and a great character design here that cat was also a nice touch. Also maybe some backround scene of some sort would be a huge plus as well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter sparkle on the weapon and some backdrop or scene in the background

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[Process]

Very nice progress

I love pieces like this because it really shows what it takes to progress to each step and the final step is very awsome I think that sparkle on the weapon was nice but you should have it shine even more and brighter so nice work there just adding a little more shine would be a huge plus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter shine on the weapon

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[CharacterDesign]

Cool

So this was a nice character design I like what you have done here on this piece the shadows on the ground all though the one on the right shadow should be slightly smaller as she jumps and maybe do something with the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shadow work and backround detail

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[Blue Hair Waifu]

Cute

Very cute here I think the backround and the crown need some effcts like her crown could use a sparkle or two and the backround was too yellow have it blended with other colors and such but it's all a good portrait kind of

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blending of colors in the background and a sparkle and shine on the crown

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