XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[andresa]

SHE HULK

~~REVIEW~~
aww very nice work here. this is kinda like a she hulk, love the detail you gave this and you really focused on the eyes and such which really brought it out, and some deep eyes at that, its pretty awom and some nice texture to mix in very nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could improve things with the backround light things maybe not so blurred effect might help

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[SpiralCore]

wow

Wow this is so awesome. Not just because my face color is purple and all but because this is awesome in its own right. The design itself is wicked. I think it needs more lighting effects though. Like the lighted points could be brighter.

Improve on this with more lighting effects on the already lighted points

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tdwkiller responds:

Hey, ye i tried to make it that way, but i can't do much about it, if i try to change it the rest of the colours will change to much aswell, and i'm not that good photoshop or gimp.

But thx for ur review ;)

[fart]

hmmm interesting

Hey now that was interesting and did give me a laugh or two. I like how you had it in a sorta comic strip. I would have liked to see it more in a comic book form. But this was still amusing. It was confusing at first. But like I said still funny

To improve you could make it more like comic book style and more dialog text would help

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peixeaquatico responds:

yep :>

[Inxdemia]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well you really do have something to draw about when bored and thats not a bad thing, and with pen theres lots of differant little drawings here, while you only did have a pen it would have been neat if somehow you came across a red pen aswell then you could add a touch of color, but what you do have is some creativeness and it shows, some of the stuff you have here could be touched up and cleaned up to really bringout that artistic feel, but for the most part it was alright

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
why not add a red pen in there somewhere maybe a few details or even outlines on some stuff

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MonoFlauta responds:

haha thanks nice idea of the red pen or i can use green or others colors,
thanks a lot for the idea :p

nice review :p thanks for reviewing!

[My Wandering Days Are Over]

This needs more i think

~~REVIEW~~
The art is pretty good i thought but still seems blamd like you have a nice character here but the rocks and stuff seems like its missing something i would suggest to add maybe a "WORM" coming outa the ground to help with that but other then that it was notbad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like above maybe ad a worm around or something

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[Copic Sketch - Francesca]

I think its cute

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe well i think this lil art piece of yours is pretty cute its kinda like some sorta "AD POSTER" and because it does look like that im thinking you should add some "BORDERS/FRAMES" on the edges, its an idea to go with though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
like above add some borders and or frames on the edges to give it that more poster feel

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DeliciousOrange responds:

I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it looking like an "Ad Poster", but I have to say that personally I enjoy the broken, zig-zag background against the full-body character. Utilization and activation of the space is very important though, so I will certainly be careful in positioning my subject in the future.

[Pixel Tank]

Cute tank

~~REVIEW~~
this is a cute tank, and even the little tankman hehe thats a neat newgrounds related tank thing here, the backround "GRID" is too bland unless thats how it has to be , but regardless i thought it was pretty neat, you should color the tank abit

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color the tank with some newground colors and the backround grid

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J-qb responds:

thanks for the review! The grid was just there to help me with the perspective; not really supposed to add a whole lot to the pic. I thought about different colors but decided against it since black would be difficult to shade; and orange would be a bit weird for a tank dont you think?

[Dragon Eye]

Very nice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this is like just looking right at ya, this is an awsome "EYE"
shot and you also had some really nice skin texture on the greem parts, its really detailed and nice job indeed, you should make more like this maybe more full body portions aswell, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more full body styles would be nice aswell as a mixture of some reds in there

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