XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Real Moon]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Another impressive one here, this couldnt be more perfect to be honest, you have everything i

always tell you about in other pieces, like the backround stars, allthough there was too much

of the "STARS" i still though it was a great touch in making this look real, and just a not i

have also made this one of my faves to my faves list, but anyways back to the art at hand, The

sunlight is perfect and its brightness and how it reflects off the planet, then you have the

what i think is exploding smaller planet? well that was a nice touch i thought, a few fixes

could make this even more of a perfect piece like the "EXPLODING" or firey planet needs to be

small like showing its more in the distance, and you could lose a few stars as its abit much,

maybe have differant sizes of stars not all the same size, that might give it a more realistic feel to it. So anyways another great piece by you, i cant wait for more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Start off with less stars and differant sizes of stars and such, make the firey planet smaller and seem more in the distant, just a few ideas that maybe will help to improve on this or a later version.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks for the review as for the stars thing you are right and the exploding planet is none other than Earth therefore i made it smaller so as to create an effect of watching the destruction of earth from the moon

[Tingu]

Love the texture.

~~REVIEW~~
Now i didnt see this one, i love this one, i even added it as one of my faves on my faves list, this has its own uniqueness to it, i love the texture like of the large center warp, now not sure what this could be used in but it has some really nice texture, and the four other smaller warps are also perfect in place and also great with its texture aswell, i do think this could be shown larger with a larger canvas view screen, so maybe as an idea you could show off more of the detail and even ad in a few more warps and such, I have seen alot of your stuff now, and this is one of my faves, im pretty sure you can make another version and make it with much more lighting effects, give it that lighting skill you have, that would be very impressive, The center lighting circles in each of the warps could be brighter, it will show off more of the focus and such, so theres another idea or two for you to work with, anyways great job, i loved this piece, and hope to see more like it soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvas screens, more brightness in the center circles, and maybe even some deeper texture of the warps.

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Shikhs responds:

thank you for the review next time i will make it better with my lighting effect

[Abstraction]

too bland

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one is differant, this reminds me of maybe some sorta plane crash like at an air show or something and you can see the red explosions, and orange explosions, all just being destroyed, kinda like two planes just coming together, the blue backround gives off that air show feel, i think a few more effects and lighting should be in the backround and if you go with that idea you could actually get a plane of some sort in the backround, well something along them lines, i think it would be pretty neat if you ask me, But it does need more then what you do have in there as its too bland needs more "DETAIL" like props and such, but anyhow i still liked it, so notbad with this one, not your best but not the worst either.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its too bland and needs more detail and even props.

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Shikhs responds:

Thanks for the constructive advise ill work on it

[Pure Energy]

Radio-Waves of the dead

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here is something slightly differant but yet still with your own style, its differant in the sense that it has a differant feel, like this reminds me of some radio waves but its like from some scary movie where the dead or ghosts are trying to speak to the people on the other side or something like that, so nice job on getting that part in a differant feel. now as for improving on this one, well, I would like to see more "EYES" and even bodies forming somewhat but yet still keep it like waves of energy that are just waving through, just an idea though, maybe oneday you will make a 2nd version of this, but for what it is, i really like it and it has emotion crawling from it, and thats what i like to see in artwork, such as yours.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have some eyes in there maybe a few like comingout at you.

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Shikhs responds:

Thank you very very much

[Looking upto the Sun]

Its better

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i got around to reviewing this one, Now compared to the other one this one is less cramped which i mentioned so im glad to see you take some of my advice, and i do get a pleasure in reviewing your work just as much as i enjoy getting them responded too, but anyways this has some better use of colors then the other one, I do however think it needs some "STARS" in the backround though, since this does remind me of outer space and all, I also like the being in the middle it kinda reminds me of those spirit things from avatar, now that might be an idea for you there with your lighting effects you could really make something like avatar beings or something, but anyways i thought this was pretty decent, much more improved since the last one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some stars would really light this up abit

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Shikhs responds:

thank you very much for the review.I now seem to feel the errors

[Ghost]

Ghost hehe

~~REVIEW~~
Wow ok now i didnt even realise this, now that i can see it it is most impressive, infact i like it so much that i have added to my faves list so props to you on this one, and i like how it is some sorta ghost, me liking ghosts and all heh, but other then that props to you on another brilliant idea here, now with all the differant colors you seem to really make this come alive, the eyes are just perfect and they do give off a sad look to them and all, now normally i would suggest some backround but i think its more fitting that its just pitchblack back there, In this the eyes seem to really comeout very well and really showing emotion and that this is a ghost of some sort which i really thoought was neat, so awsome job here on making something that jumps out at you not only in color but it really does look like its a ghost, So props to you for a wonderful piece, here is where i might suggest something to improve on, if anything it would probably be some brighter eyes or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes much more brighter, but other then that its pretty impressive if i say so myself.

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Shikhs responds:

thank you for finally reviewing this and maybe you can use this ghost in ghost motel 12 lol

[Darth Vulgar]

Vader = Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Awsome , and i do remember that awsome flash O so many years ago but seems like you have saved something from it, i like the backround you have here, and really good "SHINE" on the vader helm, now back to the backround, i thought you could make it slightly better with maybe some of the stars more "BRIGHTER" maybe even have a formation of Tiefighters or something, might give more of the effect of whats out there and such, And maybe for something more on the random side you could give Vaders eyes some "GLOW" to them like a bright green or red, just for the random option, But overall i thought this was pretty neat from an old flash that was just classic, i do hope to see more of your work as this brings me back to when newgrounds was in its early days, anyways nice work here, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like above some brighte stars maybe even some ships in the distance, even a lightsabre would be nice. and then theres the idea of some glowing eyes more for the random rout though.

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[Clay Tankman]

Good clay sculpture

~~REVIEW~~
Nice job on this art piece and bringing the tankman alive, you seemed to really bring it forward and show much of the detail that cant be showen on the toon form, so the clay character is looking pretty good, i think you could have done something with the backround such as some sorta "CARDBOARD-CUTOUT" like of a city drop like newgrounds has its header, also the gun seemed off, maybe if it was a grey-ish color with a few black detail points, might bringout that it really is a weapon of destruction, and i dont know if it can be done but abit of shine might have been nice on the goggles, now thats alot to be said, dont get me wrong this was a pretty good piece, i think if you had him posed like in an "ACTION-SCENE" it would show off more realisim if you will say, but really for the mostpart this was pretty impressive

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The gun could use some detail maybe if it was more of a lighter color like grey, you could have done something with the backround such as some sorta "CARDBOARD-CUTOUT" like of a city drop like newgrounds has its header, and some sorta shine on the goggles wouldnt hurt.

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PikaRobo responds:

Thank you for your review, I like how you gave me things to improve on (a very rare thing that I see in other reviews). I do agree with you that this one probably needs the most work, especially the gun. There is no background on any of them and they are in no pose on purpose because they are just photos of the models themselves, (though I should start to doing that), And the other thing is Tankman has only 2 colors, white and black, and I couldn't really make a shine if I use pure white, can I? I definitely could if possible though (such as Hank's goggles.)
Despite those problems, thanks for the feedback. :)

[Everything By Everyone!]

Love the yellowish

~~REVIEW~~
Now here was something neat and differant, i really liked the color, its what really drew me to this piece, a few of your other pieces are like this with focus on just one color which i think makes your pieces really unique, the "TANK" was neat kinda like the ng tank and you had some nice paint style and good ground and backrounds to acent the tank i think a city drop backround would fit this much more as it is negrounds and all, but if it was a tottally differant tank then that i can understand, another little thing i noticed which is nothing really but if fixed could make the whole tank look better and that would be on the "CANNON" have the end look more like its not capped off at the end, it kinda looked like it is capped off somehow, but anyways i did really like this and have since added it to my faves, love the color not too much and not too little either, but just the right touch of color.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the caannon look like missles do shoot out of it, and since its newgrounds site have a city backrop in the backround

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[Color Swathe]

Like an ocean

~~REVIEW~~
Now this here is another amazing piece, i really am impressed with the use of color and differant designs that you present us with, now this particular piece kinda reminds me of a ray beam or even some strange happening under the water, once i get back into flash i would really like to use some of your art pieces as they are great backrounds and such, but anyways as for this one i could see you improving on it with maybe a large water creature like a "WHALE" or like i said earlier a ray gun with the beam, now the beam is great but im thinking you could ad abit more "BRIGHTNESS" in there and or some "SPARKLES" that will give it that extra shine, now with all that being said and such, i think that the backround could use abit of work too some sparkles in a simple way as to not take away from the beam itself, But anyways thanks again for making some simple yet beatiful artwork, i look forward to reviewing more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some sparkle effects in the backrounds, ad some more brightness to the beam it self like with the circles, and i mentioned add some other props like a whale as this reminded me of the ocean below

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Shikhs responds:

thanks for the sparkle advise but as far as brightness is concerned it makes it look a little to lazy anyways thanks for the review