XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[3/3]

Like a forrest

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad at all, i saw a bit of the other artworks that were simular to this aswell, but it was neat it kinda has that dark forrest, maybe even some sorta burrning trees in the back so that in that aspect makes it pretty impressive, needs more {FOCAL} points maybe like a scared little animal somewhere but something like that to focus on aswell, it would be a nice touch there now if it is a burnning forrest highlight the fire a bit more aswell, so it standsout more aswell, just another idea or two. but anyways it was a rather dark and neat piece you have here, but still i could see it improving with more visuals and extra effects like animals and lighting effects, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things i suggested were more fire highlight in the backround if its a forrest, and maybe a scared little animal in front for a more focus point.

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CptBeefcake responds:

well it doesn't actually stand on its own; it's part of a triptych. the focal point of the piece is in the second panel. btw it isn't necessarily fire, you might taking it too literally. Other than that I agree, the warm colours sit back instead of jumping forward, and this piece didn't incorporate the same obvious lighting the other two did

thanks for the review

[war]

Could be larger and indepth with some more detail.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was something very impressive, you really gave the skin a nice texture giving it that real feel to it and all, would have liked to see more with the {EYES} maybe abit of red in there for that extra detail or something, and as for more improving on this, maybe some sorta fake {BLOOD} just an idea though, now i dont mean to complain or anything like that but you should give an even more fuller {VIEW} of the whole art piece, it would bring out the little details abit better, and just overall making it much better, now these are just one reviewers opinions and ideas, but really for the most part you have a really nice piece here and would love to see much more of your work in the coming future, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe instead of just the white eyes add some red in there just for more detail to the picture as a whole, maybe even some fake blood out of the wounds.

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ramymagdy responds:

thx man ...really appreciate your comment .... you have a point here ..

[MC Comics - Christmas '10]

Its decent

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well now that was funny, very amusing i thought, it was short and to the points, now there are probably a number of things you could do to improve on this but first i want to point out how it was very amusing and gave me a laugh off right at first so props to you on that, and hope to see more humor like this, now for the improving part I wouldnt mind seeing more into this like maybe a second line of strip or something, and maybe you could work more on the color aswell, brighter colors could be a start of something just a few ideas there, but overall it was pretty entertaining, i liked it though, hope to see more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i suggested, more brighter colors, maybe a second strip and so on

~X~

[Imperial Inquisitor.]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Love all the reds you have on this, this was actually a pretty ood rendition of a character alot like starwars ones but seems to comeout very well, the blacked out ground area seems like it could have used more shading and stuff just to give the effect it was more dirty and dusty, just an idea that could show more of the detail, since you did present an awsome character here with lots of detail, the glow on the sabre was pretty impressive aswell, all around this was well done and i enjoyed reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained you could work on the ground area maybe some scratches here and there or something, something that shows more detail.

~X~

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you.

[Bearded Frog Lizard]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is pretty uniqe, its got some nice color all around and you really made it come alive with the color and such stuff, allthough it would have been nice with some backround stuff going on maybe some other little characters running around and stuff, would have been nice, would have been nice with more little details like more roses here and there, So things to improve on this might be soe backround work, maybe more details like more roses and such things like that, but for the mostpart its pretty entertaining, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As sugested some backround detail if not setting, and some fine detail in the front like the roses

~X~

[Character Select]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
Ok thid was noitbad, kind neat i thought, it has a lot of blues i know its for a game, but i would have liked to see maybe some differant colors, not just dominant blues, maybe the text itself could be maybe {WHITE} or something that could not be blue but still balance out and not take away from the style you are talking about, also for some reason the characters seem somewhat bland maybe you could ad some more texture like for mary her blue hood, just a tad more, as for Lucifer, maybe more deeper {REDS} or something like that, and last but not least, jesus, maybe he could have more of a glow around him since he is, jesus and a god would be better to present more aura there, now these are just ideas and like i said this was just for a game so i can understand it, just wanted to throw out a few ideas that might jump out at you, or not, Maybe a more {BORDER} base would also be nice aswell, seems like you didnt have much of a border and adding maybe a white one would sufice i think, well anyways a good little art piece from a game and i liked it, thought it could have a few more things here and there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few things with borders and too much blues, also some more texture and shades in the chachters also adding a glow or aura to the jesus one would be a nice idea of improving

~X~

[M-Bot Reinterpretation]

Awsome as always

~~REVIEW~~
M-Bot is pretty cool, heh you should make X-Bot haha and he would be the ultimate reviewer, heh anyways but i like this one and love all the {BEAMS} here and you gave it that extra touch too which is also very nice indeed, the {STAR} could have more of a glaring shine to it though, its ok but just felt its the center peice and is kinda like his badge almost, you should make it really shine, As an extra touch on this poster i think you should ad in the backround some sirins or some sort maybe from a police car and or a police ship, it would ad abit to it i think anyways, but really for the mostpart you have a really good poster here, maybe not as impressive as p-bot but still really good, i love all the littel details you put in this, it really shows off the effort like the {M} on his arm and a few other things, its those little things that really bring the robot out, so props to you on an awsome job. but anyways keep up the awsome work on these posters and all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give the {STAR} some shine to it a sorta glaring shine, also suggested maybe a police car or ship passing in the backround with the red and blue lights that would be a nifty backround scene

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

I don't think I'm doing other M-Bot... yet who knows. If I do I'll keep this in mind

[Star rings]

amazing

~~REVIEW~~
wow i really love this, i forget the guys name but this reminds me of his work he is also here on newgrounds and does alot of this {LIGHTING-EFFECT} Style of art and you do some amazing stuff here, particurly with this one and the turning of this, i could tottaly use this in a flash, something of like a {VORTEX} or something but really awsome for what you got going on here i really do enjoy this, now if i can offer any suggest of improvment, it might be give it more of a {WARP} in the middle somehow, maybe like some more twists and turns, but also wouldnt mind some, more lighting effect, and as for the outer {4-CORNERS} of the whole image they were abit bland, so this reminds me of outer space why not fill those bland spots with some {STARS} or something of that nature, it might make the whole piece abit more fuller and all, but anyways other then that it was a pretty good lighting effect based art piece and would hope to see more of your work soon, anyways keep up the good art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said just a minute ago, more use of lighting effects, fill in the bland spots this art pice had the 4 corners more bland, and maybe to spice up the image give the center abit more of a {WARP} feel.

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