XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Supernova 2]

ok the 2nd one

~~REVIEW~~
Now this seems abit better "QUALITY" then the 1st one, but its still missing something ill explain in just abit, im actually thinking that if you were to "MIX" the two styles it might make for an awsome version, so like the first one had a great "WARP" feel and this one doesnt, this one is more of like what would be at the end of the warp so if you mixed the two i think you would have a pretty awsome one, as for this one its pretty good i like the brighter feel and it just has some better overall quality to it that really shines thru, that center piece needs to be somewhat larger, and everything in the outer areas seems too bland you might want to spice that up abit with some stars and specs around, but other then that its notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like versions 1 and 2 and mixing the two would make for a neat version 3, add some stars in the bland spots so it doesnt seem so plain

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[Supernova]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well i must say you really like this "LIGHTING" style of art, and dont get me wrong so do i, this was another good one, i dont know if its your best of works but its still pretty impressive, this one kinda reminds me of what the star ship enterprise goes thru in warp mode, but anyways, i like all the stars all around, but im thinking the "STARS" themself should be somewhat smaller and have more warp to them as this is like a warp and everything should be in super warp speed, just a thought on my end though, I also think the "CENTER" area should be more brighter to reflect something special in the center, give it that super bright feel like some of your other works have, but with all that said i like what you have here, keep up the decent work, i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested make the stars smaller and with more warp speed feel to them, also make the center more brighter

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Shikhs responds:

thanks

[Divine Temple]

Love the light

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is neat, this really reminds me of a "CANDLE" lit up in the backround and the light is really reflecting off from that and somehow you got this as of a result? heh i dont know really but it resembles a candle lit up in complete darkness you seem to have captured that perfectly somehow, i really like that, as to improve on this? well maybe some outer lights around here and there, maybe even a lit up border somehow, but not sure how that would come about, but regardless this is pretty impressive so i enjoyed it and will checkout your other stuff soon, so good luck on your next entry, and may the "LIGHT" be with you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some hidden backround lights or even a lit up border or frame

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[The Wintermood]

Oh wow i love it

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was really neat, even abit dark i thought but wow you have really impressed me with some awsome texture and so much detail, i went ahead and added this to my faves list so props to you on an awsome piece of art here it is as i would call it "BRILLIANT" I love your fine detail like the hair, and also props to you on the little glow effect in the backround, that was a very nice shot there, I did however think the "BLOOD" could have been much better, maybe make the blood more "THICKER" well its just an idea anyways, well hope my review helped in anyway, regardless you have some awsome detail in this, keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained some thicker blood would be nice, just an idea though

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[ABSRACT Crture-Under the Ocean]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice bright one from you thanks for making the request, and glad you listened to me, now this one you have here is pretty differant but i still like it, and i do see what you mean about the eyes and mouth, the "EYES" have a really neat look to them, might have been nice if you put a little star in the middle of the eyes or something to give it that more eye look, but overall it does look pretty neat, and as for the mouth maybe give it some stars or shapes that make it look like teeth some sharp ones, heh just an idea anyways, but all and all its another neat pic with the neat brightness and awsome colors i liked from the last one, feel free to request a review anytime and ill be glad to review any of your work, so i look forward to more of your stuff soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well like explained, the eyes could use a more center points, and the mouth could use a teeth type of thing.

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Shikhs responds:

thanks man thanks for the review

[Board]

Love it needs color

~~REVIEW~~
WOW now this is cool, i really love checkerboards and chessboards, i have done a few myself, and this was pretty good, it could really use some color though, red and black or something like that it would really present itself much better allthough the fans seem to really like this, or what you could do is add some color in the backround only that might make for something differant, im also thinking it would look nice with maybe some chess piece or even a checker piece, i like the faded paint you gave it, but again it needs color to really bringout the image alot more, so as explained maybe a falling chess/checker piece would be a nice touch, i dont ming the black and white but atleast ad some color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color ofcourse even if its just a part of the image, then you could add some props in there like a checker piece and or a chess piece

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[Mysterious Stranger]

Oh wow

oh wow this was really fantastic the reds have a deep colour, and then you added a nice shine to the reds in the right places, i also love how the bottom cape atleast i think its a cape, tails off it was a nice little feature you have, and now for the "CIRCLES" that was a nice effect making it a more uniqie image here very neat and deep colors all around really made this into a fantastic piece, overlooking the image several times theres somany nice effects from the circles, to the deep reds, and the mask and no head, it was just awsome and i had a pleasure viewing this, i plan to checkout more of your work.

Improving on this would be hard as you already have alot of great stuff so i would leave this be, anyways nice job all around

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[Abstract Creature]

Awsome use of color

wow and awsome on the use of colors here, you really gave it a glowing effect that cameout well, and i like how you gave it some sorta brightness or some glow effect along it, i really wish you had a larger "VIEW" of it, and as for the design itself its abit on the plainside but its notbad, i do however like how it almost looks like you have your signature but its probably not unless im wrong, but still you have a nice design here though and the colors really shine through the brightness so really awsome job.

How to improve well the onlything i could see on this one would be to make a much larger design more waves and shapes and also a much much larger viewing area "CANVAS SIZE"

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Shikhs responds:

thank you :)

[Pengoon]

I love it

Wow this is very neat, the penguin and the man riding it wow i have played many games with creatures and never thought this idea would come up, but here you have presented us with a unique and very creative one, so props to you on the creativity of this, and on top of that you have a great use of textures colors and design, i think the onlything that really bothered me throughout this whole piece was that its all too "BLUE-ISH" now i know its a cold and ice place but it all is the simaular color maybe if the penguin was a differant color maybe even an orange or green it might help focus on the creature more, well just an idea there but overall you have a "FANTASTIC" art piece here, and i am looking forward to more of your work.

Change the color of the creature a red, orange or even green might help put more focus on him and away from all the blue you have

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[Captains Blaster]

Now thats impressive

Now thats an impressive weapon, it has all sorts of appeal and just stands out very nice work here, i especially like the "BLADE" on it, its great for killing when out of bullets i suppose, but for the mostpart its a pretty good idea of a weapon, i like it, I do think you could have presented it on a more "LARGER" canvas to show off the more detail of each little point on the weapon such as, the gold trimming atleast i think its gold, and the logo, anyways great piece here

maybe make the canvas abit larger to see more of the detail

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