XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Billy school work]

Awsome piece

You have the skills for sure and You can just see all the shades and fine line work that comes with it very deep textures and that really comes out very well you have some great talents and I hope you can bring more of that as your work here is always a pleasure to see and review ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see some of the backround have more detail and more shades about it.

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[WaterColour of Loss]

Very impressive with this one.

I like how this piece here alone tells a story the ghost and angel was pretty good, nice backround and overall nice detail as this one does tell a story. wouldnt mind seeing more "GLOW" and effect from the ghost So with that said, I fount this art piece very interesting, had abit of artistic value was showing the effort and time youput into this, and hope to see more stuff like this from you, your style is great so keep up the awsome art work. keep up the creative mind.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow and effect from the ghost maybe even some sprakling stars etc.

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Trixks responds:

Wow awesome feedback, love the constructive feedback as well :) yeah was trying to be as organic with the watercolour brushes as much as possible and wondered if I could stear away from the cliche "glowing" ghost and communicate her being gone with only her varying transparency and colour treatment instead. So happy to hear the tone of the piece I was aiming for was achieved in your eyes, that's awesome to hear :)

[Khajiit Dovahkiin]

Great character

And here was a great looking character the armour and furr alone come off very well and I like the snow effect you have going on here, but I think you should have more snow effect on fur and armour so it looks like it is settling on the surfaces, but other then that this was pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned more settling of the snow on surfaces.

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[Psychedelic Star]

Cool design

Wow I like stuff like this they always seem to amaze and you created a dynamic desgin here and the colors are spot on some more bright colors would be nice and maybe have a much larger canvus for more visual effect but for what you have here this was a fantastic design and piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brigheter colors and larger canvus.

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[Cartoony dragon]

Simple

So this here was somewhat simple but I do like the basic tones and colors that radiation from it very fresh colors and the drawing itself is really good and smooth lines at that now as for the backround it was really bland I can see you upgrading that maybe some trees some sand like place or rocks or something to really show us this creatures world and where it comes from so that would be something to think about and putting in a change here. But overall this was actually a pretty good art piece and I have enjoyed it very much indeed a nice art piece and hope to see much more from your skills

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little bit of backround world detail would be one suggestion

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[Hole]

Always nice

It's always nice to see what comes out of this comic with all the use of color you do so well with the different view shots and really make each frame come alive and that's what I have come to enjoy about your work and you have so much of it. But anyways nice work here nice color nice story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing with this one you are pretty solid at this

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[Inktober Day 4]

Lol

So there's something in each of these characters and it makes the whole piece pretty fun and entertaining I like the added color and the backround work is not bad either as well. I could see you putting a lil more detail in that backround wall maybe some cracks and more bricks but you have outdone yourself once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra backround work would be nice

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[Italian ...Dude]

Simple

So here with this one I found it to be simple but was pretty stylish and while it's bland it still shows off some entertaining value the smooth lines are nice though and I could see you adding some more shadowing here or there just for that extra touch and whatnot but I like what you have so far it's simple and fun

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Simple and fun piece could use more shading

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[Gyaridos]

Love the color

So here I'll first discuss the color you actually have great use of color here and make it work well these two colors work off of each other's other like light and dark do. You can actually brighten up the yellow areas and make them shine off very well with the red would create a great light effect off the yellow and onto the red. On another improvement option you may even want to think about adding some yellow to the background. Maybe just some pins or postits in the corners like it's a poster of some sort but anyways those are just a few ideas that may help and improve on a nice piece here great design though it's very cool indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some brighter points and some extra yellows

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