XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Weedle Poly Art]

Nice

You have these Pokemon down this was great but that backround could use some effort and detail at least enhance it with a deep texture of color or a scene out of the Pokemon world these are all things that can really improve on something like this so try it out and let's see what comes of it anyways I like it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well the backround cause it needs something a scene a color some extra little Pokemon or something along them lines

~X~

[Ribbon]

Cool

So I don't normally review these types as I don't know what advise to give in the first place this was a good drawing of a cute girl and you gave her some nice appealing assets there does need to be something done with that background though it's just too bland and needs to be filled in with color or props

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill in backround with color or a scene or even props

~X~

[Holy Water]

Brilliant

Now here is a good comic I could really get into you really showed off the great characters also bringing in some nice humor into this as well and the art style was just beautiful so I really got into this and kept me interest up high so nice work on this one and I hope you make more of this because this is some fancy and pretty brilliant stuff so as a sort of improvement idea maybe instead of the white borders have a light redish or a light brown but something different then the plain white. But with all that said this was a good piece of comic and I look forward to even more of the series if there's anymore

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Do something different with the frames

~X~

ZeTrystan responds:

Oh, for the borders, I usually keep it white for the integration on other websites that uses it as their background, to make it looks seemless. :) Since Newgrounds has a black background, I can imagine it's quite visible ahah.

Thanks for the comment!

[Mermaid and Piano]

Nice

These under water styles are always hard to do it seems but I have to say you could ad more stuff in this one like on the sand ocean adding more shells and such and some fish in the backround maybe even groups of fish looking at her would be a huge plus but that's my imput for the day more props more ocean creatures

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More ocean stuff including shells and fish

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ToxicMaiden responds:

Couldn't agree more! I actually went and touched it up awhile back. You can see it here: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/toxicmaiden/mermaid-and-piano-re-worked

I really enjoy that sort of thing.

[Fire Elemental Lady]

Beautiful

A beautiful piece here and I must say the red swirly things above her head could be more brighter they seem like a good focus point and more texture in the red background also but besides all that this was a pretty good piece of art just more texture and you will be good to go anyways untill next time nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter red and texture reds

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ToxicMaiden responds:

Thank you! I really appreciate all the feedback you have been giving me.

[Emi Pinup]

Absolutely beautiful

This here was something asolutly beautiful the purple texture and color here was wow so beautiful the props you added just make this that much better and everything came together we'll while still giving her some appealing assets but anyways nice piece here ad more shine that's always a big focus point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine ofcourse

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[Life as an animation student.]

Notbad

Seems like this could be the life of a student as for the art you don't have to juggle as much but this art piece was more about the meaning and idea behind it so that was a nice touch as for improvement I would actually just leave this be it's a fun piece though and I like your efforts here keep that up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldn't change a thing

~X~

[Mr. Big-Nose]

Nice idea

Alright so nice idea here with the shapes and all and they seem pretty simple but you took the extra step and took it to the next level making it your own and that's really good creative style the colors could be more detailed and polished but you have a good idea here regardless of the rest so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Colors could be deeper and more polished

~X~

[BEST FRIEND]

Cute

And here was a cute rendition of the fabulous duo that can't get matched the art is nice the backrounds are kind of plain though so I could see you adding some texture in there some how but it's not bad for what it is and is kind of cute so nice job all the way around on this piece. I liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work

~X~

[Castle crashers]

Different

Well this was kind of different seems like some of the art and line work could use some re-fining more smoothing out so its not perfect but its still pretty good if you ask me, its a start in the right direction ofcourse, and I look forward to see what else you can come up with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the art and line work could use some re-fining.

~X~