XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[can u see L now?]

Nice version

Now this version I like alot better then the scratchy one, but again I think adding some color would be really good here, even just adding some color to the eyes would be ahuge plus, you have some skill here just need to take time with it and creat more art and experiment with colors ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color once again on this version.

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[can u see L]

Ok

Well with this one you really cant see much I have seen the other version I think this could be improved on though, Like adding some "COLOR" just to the main character then the rest in white mess, so that would give it a better visual about things, its just an idea but you should really try it out and see how it comes out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color in parts of it.

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[ASTR 1000]

A beautifull piece

So nice work here it was different but still nice, The details are very nice as they just seem to come together and depict a strange scene from a subtle World as you have created here, Nice yet strange The overall flow seems to come together and tell a strange story while floating forever on endlessly toward the never coming skies. This one has some beautifull color and I love the darkness of the tree vs the light up stars of the night that really allows for some great use of light and effects to follow, some things you could do are light up some more starts with more glow effects, that would really improve on this piece. So I am honored in this style of work here and I will admitt, I found your artwork by accident but I must say I became an instant fan of your work and your style, but anyways keep up this style its top notch stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some things you could do are light up some more starts with more glow effects, that would really improve on this piece.

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artfullyorange responds:

Hi! Thank you so much for your comments and feedback on how I can improve :) It means so much to me and I will definitely heed your advice in future pieces. I am so glad you like my artwork and I hope I can continue improving on it. Thank you once again !

[Purdy Man!]

Very interesting

And this was very interesting I am not too fond of the dark backrounds especially with a dark main focus, so maybe add some lightend up backround or a burst of light from the backround, it could greatly improve on such a beautiful piece, maybe even some design in the backround that has a design or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backround could be light up and not so dark.

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[akuma]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, I am loving the reds and yellows its kind of like a flame of hell or something I do believe this would be great for some sort of backround but you should enhance the flame abit more, its almost like theres a fire planet in there of some sort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flame more texture in the yellowish flame.

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[InnocentChild]

Nice work

Glad I was able to find your work I had only found it by accident but it has been a blessing in the art world, it is artistic and you creat stories, that back wall could use some texture though, but besides that this was a wonderful piece of artwork, and hope you keep this style going strong for years to come.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that back wall could use some texture.

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[Hands in duh air!]

Very nice

Creative styles at hard work here, again with some nice characters and some decent shades and even better shine, you have a creative style I have not seen in awhile but I enjoy it and its not for everyone but you make it work and I like your drawing style, you should really get this onto some animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes maybe just lesson on the shine.

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[Freak]

Creative

So I actually like your characters you really bring some creative styles to the portal and amke some nice shades and even better shine, I think you can refine some of the shine a lil better but regardless its still pretty good stuff if you ask me, some nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some refined shine but its good stuff.

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[Portrait]

Very beautiful

This one has a lot of detail and it shows, This looks like a blend of artistic quality to me, which makes it very beautiful looking to me. Now there is nothing that can be said here that you dont know already this is a beautiful piece, the hair line work is so beautiful very realistic and made it so real the green eyes are just as beautiful, I love everya spect of this piece really nice work here indeed. So keep doing what you do you bring style to the art portal, This was one of my fave pieces by you and I was pretty proud of the work you have done here today and hope you make more stuff like this, But nice idea here aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle from the eyes would be a nice little touch.

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Jafrie-Art responds:

Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback. Also, your "things to improve" are kept in mind for the next image :)

[Mr. Sludgy]

Creative

Well I must say you have some interesting characters throughout your profile and I will say you should really put them together in a comic or flash movie of some sort, they are very creative like this slug here its unique and has character about him, som e really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backround could be light up a bit better.

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