XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hat Girl]

This is cute

Well another cute piece you have here some nice idea here you have a nact for creating great cuteness and that's what you did right here only thing I would really change here would be adding a background scene like maybe she is running to something or even away from something but just an idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background or backdrop scene

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[Christmas Blaze]

Wow beautiful

Wow I must say this is very beautiful love the deep colors uou use on this and all your pieces you have a sense and an eye for creative color that makes this whole piece come alive and I don't see any achanges that this one needs it's pretty perfectly done in my eyes so that's my review and nice work indeed here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really on this piece

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[Blaze Lingerie 1]

Love the color

Love the the color theme you have going on here nice style makes it all come together with those vibrant color and deep tones I think this is one of those you could use some shine of light or burst of light from behind to make that color even more vibrant but anyways just something to try out a bit

~Things to improve on~
A burst of light or shine from the back end

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[Blaze Lingerie 2]

Very nice work

You have some very nice drawing and with this particular piece I really love the deep blue theme you have going on I think that chain was just about perfect you should have it sparkle just a tad so nice job there

~Things To Improve on~
A bit of shine and sparkle on the chain

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[Curly Brace]

Very nice

This was very nice I like the red but think with the darker background you could have a deeper red or something anyways nice job I like the drawing and you have some nice drawing skills would love to see more though

~Things To Improve on~
Some deeper reds would be nice

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[Soldier in the rain]

Very nice

So this was some really nice work the shine was a nice touch the rain was an even better touch but you should represent the rain hitting the ground better maybe some puddles or something that jumps out more that would be a real plus of things anyways nice character design I really liked it so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better rain effects when it drops

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DovahFeyn responds:

Wow, I wasn't expecting to get any more feedback on this. Thanks for your feedback. Weather effects are something I have barely done, so I will definitely try to do some more work on it.

[Prince Of Persia Process]

Nice work

Well this was cool could use more effects like on the flame and have it flame with some brightness even a small animation on the flame wouldn't hurt either but I like the progressive showing of your work is actually notbad at all and you have a nice style of work here keep up the good work and keep the energy going

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more flame work more detail

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[Rogue Star]

Decent

Well this was notbad I thaught this could have been better maybe more design on it more color you should really take this through Photoshop and enhance it with some brighter colors and more effects to it it's a nighty piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some Photoshop effects

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[Hero & Pet]

Nice work

This was cool the background could use some detail or some design of some sort the twirling circles could be hlowing or brighter light up or something but you have a nice character design here very good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small effects that could be added

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[Kanon - Ayu]

Cool stuff

So I am going thru your profile and looking at both old and new works you have a fantastic style of artistic ideas and creations I'm not too fond of this but only because I'm not use to it but I love what you did with the sky you should ad some bird or a flock of birds flying through but anyways nice work once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A flock of birds would be cool

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