XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[UF - Asumi Juichi]

Very nice

So I decided to checkout more of your work and this one was different yet still unique, you like big top heavy girls I take it lol, no but really great texture in the har it lacks some "SHINE" though so adding a streak of shine in the hair would be a plus.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in the hair a streak or two.

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[UF - Vivian Juwels]

Decent

And here was a decent character she is volumptious lol or however you say it, she could use some more skintone texture and some shine in her hair, and the watermark has got to go it kind of ruins the whole deal here, but you could have added a backround aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work, and some skintone texture.

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[Madness (WIP)]

Nice

And the starting version of it all, this was good also a stand alone piece, this would have been perfect with a yellow bright moon in the backround itself and everything else just the way it is, so now I have reviewed all three of the pieces, a fun time reviewing your work here today, I look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this would have been perfect with a yellow bright moon in the backround itself and everything else just the way it is.

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[Murdoc Is God]

Feel good

A good version of that character from the band Gorillaz. I think the use of the darker colors fits his personality and mood best. The background is subtle but very detailed in a way and the eyes are unique but have nice bright effect. It gives off some cover art from one of their last albums Plastic Beach. I think that was a nice call-back to it but in a more darker Murdoc way. So Finally I come to the end of this review. So always hard to end on a review never know what to say but you have a nice vision here a nice skill and you have shown this very well, keep up the nice work. and my final Overview of this is that you have some good quality here. anyways great stuff here keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to change really but maybe next time try this in 3D like the band members are usually draw in

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Roksim responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Madness]

Very nice

Another version here I like this version even better so as I mentioned on the other one some backround work with a moon and clouds, but with this being darker you could really make those red eyes glow even more and that would show more focus on things, just some things to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So have these red eyes really glow bright red.

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[Madness Final]

Cool

This was cool. I love this pose and the red eyes, I would love to see you expand on this with say like a "MOON" and clouds in the backround it would be the perfect setting kind of like if he is on a cliff of some sorts, so some backround work with a moon and couds would sufice just right here in this situation. anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so some backround work with a moon and couds would sufice just right here in this situation.

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[pear bird?!]

Perfect

This is awsome and I think you have done a perfect job here the shine the border the smile the abstract style of it all, its different and unique, I have no suggestions of improvment as you created a perfect element to a unique creation, so very well done here and nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its perfect in its own way.

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[Make your mark]

Artistic

I like this one for its artistic visuals. the hand painting of a hand was nice its like the character in the painting itself is putting his or her mark on the artistic world, and thats what I got from it, so a nice rendition of artistic style here, very nice job and hope you make more stuff like this its very artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some artistic painted borders of some sort.

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[Gouache Painting]

Fun

This is a nice fun painting probably something you would do for your kid and it brings out that feeling of innocence and fun. The painting itself needs more textures and more going on in the colors, it seems a bit plain in the overall background. I would also add more of the dinos to this and not just off to the corner as that doesnt seem very focused and looks a bit off being so much in the corner out of place. And so you have shown me what you can realy do with this piece here, you have showcased some awsome stuff with great detail, some small improvments could be made though but besides that you have done great here. So my ending Overview here is that this was pretty impressive, nice work. Overall good style of painting the character and dino.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More textures and details in the background and scenary.

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ArtofArti responds:

Thank you for your review!
I had more dinosaurs planned into the background, but forgot until after I'd gotten pretty far on the trees. Got attached too quickly. I'm planning on doing more gouache paintings soon, might try and redo this one eventually.

[Megaphone proof]

Nice interface

Nice interface design you have here it for some game I am assuming but looks good nice set up fresh colors nice overlook just all around a great looking interface, would have been nice to see how it all turned out, actually looks like an interesting game, but regardless great art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seems very well designed.

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