XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cthulhu Taking Tea]

Very nice

Wow this is nice I will ad this one as one of my faves, I like the black then the white backing but then seems like it needs a black border again, this is a very creative character kind of reminds me of some old poxnora characters of that game same name but anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An extra black border on the edges.

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[The Powerful Long Fist]

the Power of Chi

the Power of Chi you represent it well in this drawing I think this is missing only one thing thats some type of patteren in the backround or some design representing the "the Power of Chi" maybe even text in the backround anyways nice work here its most impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some patteren or design in the backround.

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[Haro Bikes]

Nice logo

So this was cool a nice logo I like the black and white stuff you have here but wouldnt hurt to have some color in it aswell, maybe even throw in some borders aswell, but thats just me you have a nice design and good logo here hope you make more of these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some color and some borders.

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[Into The Deep (Steven Universe Inspired)]

Very good

The show Steve Universe has always been one to enjoy, a relaxing funny cartoon. You captured that relaxed feeling here with the way the female Garnet has her facial expression and hair flow. The colors are spot on for this background and the bubbles around her are pretty neat but id make them a bit more consistent in flow and size as they seem a bit rushed here and there, And so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book. So try and get some more Extended efforts in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More details in the purple bubbles to add some consistentcy maybe make them less blurry

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jiasenART responds:

Hi, thanks for your detailed in-depth comment.
The bubbles you mentioned are not rushed. They are intentionally made blurry, scattered and less detailed to create an illusion of depth to make her face more into the focus. You can say it was a bit dramatic on my part. I often mix detailed features with less detailed erratic features to give a contrast of focus in my piece. I hope I explained the reasoning properly.
cheers

[forest of beauty]

Very beautiful

And this was very nice the texture is deep with greens giving that realistic feel of in a real forrest, I would ad some things like some bugs crawling up the tree maybe even a snake hanging from a tree branch or something, just a few ideas that could improve on this. anyways keep up the great texture and deep detail these are nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
put in some bugs, snakes and other creatures.

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[island of 3D]

Very nice work here

This looks cool almost something out of minecraft so you did give it that realistic feel from a far I would like to see some sunlight comming out from the back end and shining on the little lakes on the isle, that would be a nice little change to this fine piece of art you already have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of sunlight to shine on the ponds and lakes.

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[Four Eyes]

Very nice

This was cool and I honestly dont have any improvements here for you since this was a concept design, the red over the face was cool your line work is very detailed very fine and brings out the detail wich is a plus so very nice work on this poece and character looks really good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes at this time.

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[Bear With Mayo]

Mayo

lol this was kind of funny I like the jar of mayo atleast i think thats what it is, nice sketch overall all this really needs is some backround scene of a picnic or some place that he found this jar of mayo from that would be interesting, I do like the style of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene or backdrop.

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[Open Adopts : Rabbit (Update)]

WOW

This is really very detailed and drawn in such a beautiful way. The face has such good detail it looks as if it is based on a video game still or maybe off an anime. The colors you have used are great and the rabbit ears and cute and realistic for dressup. The subtle mirror background fits in with your overall theme and character. And what can I say more about this interesting and unqique piece of art, ofcourse there could be improvments but from what I have seen on this creation you have impressed this reviewer. You have Extended your efforts in this one and pushed the desire to create a fantastic piece. I think that maybe you just need to lower your prices in the description as most artists aren't going to charge that high on an adopt like this, but I could be wrong.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe lower the price you are asking by 10% but otherwise a great cute piece here

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[Not a chicken!]

Very colorfull

Wow I like this for alot of things you did very nice on the shine and polish, but the color alone is very impressive and brings the whole piece out much more, the green bike is beautifull maybe adding a bit of sparkle and shine on bike would be a nice touch aswell, overall a great piece of colorful art here, I look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small extra shine here and there.

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