XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Woods]

Nifty

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow this was very neat i thought and i am really loving the {BLACK-WHITE} style with this one, love all the great line-work with the trees and how this goes off into the {DISTANCS} very nice detail and great effort on your side there, very impressive indeed, now as a possible tip, maybe you should have a sorta {FOCUS-POINT} or something and to go over the edge, have it some {COLOR} but only that one focus point would be color, but other then that this was very good i thought and i rather liked it, so keep up the awsome drawings and paintings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe as mentioned ad a focus point or prop

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itsKris responds:

Thanks for the advice :)

[The Bird]

Needs more detail

~~REVIEW~~
haha this one was interesting, you really put the effort into this one with him showing lots of {EMOTION} the character is great and shows all the great details i love about your style but the {BACKROUND} i thought could have been much better as these were ok, just needs more of that wacky style, maybe because it was more of a solid and bland feel, but other then that the character himself was fantastic, great detail, nice shades and awsome linework, so awsome job on this piece and anything new you got comming out, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more detail in the backround would be a start

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[Smurfette]

Nice style could use more though

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow this was pretty interesting the {COLORS} were pretty good the one thing that bothered me about this piece was that it was much smaller then expected, maybe if you made it larger you could show off more of the color {DETAIL} just a helpfull tip there for either this or other new stuff you may be making, also maybe some {BACKROUNDS} would also be nice, maybe a fantastic world of where this character comes from, and maybe even abit more {SHINE} on the characters body, these are just some tips they may or may not help but regardless of all that i thought it was pretty good drawing and character just wish it had abit more of the details, anyways nice job i like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like more shine, some backround, and a larger scale model

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JinnPixel responds:

You know it is pixel art, right? Make it larger would be a pain in the ass.

[Captain Jack Sparrow]

I like

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice indeed, this was a very good piece here, love the colortone and even texture especially in the {SKIN} very welldone there, the hair was great too so some awsome line work there, it all came together well, the {}EYES{ though were kind of bugging out i think you should have gave him a more drunk state, i just saw the movie yesterday and this was a pretty close likness of him, a more one of his stranger moments, but you still did good and i was impressed, so nice job, make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
something with the eyes maybe more sofetr feel on the eyes.

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[Fire Dragon]

Great dragon

~~REVIEW~~
Nice dragons and i do love the dragons, this was another great one i have seen on here, great color great texture, i love this dragon and thats comming from a fan of dragons, i love all the spikes from the head, and even the backround was great, i would love to see some fixes and cleanning up though such as maybe some {GLOW} from the eyes kinda like what you did with the inner mouth of flames, and this whole piece of art would look even better with more flame comming out, and while this is just a head shot a whole {BODY} in the distance would have been great aswell, anyways great piece i love it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated, some extra efefcts on the eyes, and even a fire flame, and then even a body in the distance.

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[get it checked]

Nice drawing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, the large eye was a great idea, and i do like the black and white style, but you should think about adding some {COLOR} but i do like what you have here, with getting this checked out and all haha that was cute so nice job on that aspect of things, i mentioned some color would be nice, like, you could leave the drawing itself black and what then have the back scene colored somehow it would still leave focus for the drawing, so other then that i thought it was pretty good, on a last note you maybe even want to make the larger eye colored, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and back distance ideas were suggested.

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CloseToGhost responds:

Fair comments! I usually stay away from colour but wish I could use it sometimes, perhaps I will upgrade some of these old drawings.

[Scribble Art]

Needs some color

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was intersting, i think you said something about adding color to your works or even newer stuff, this drawing or sketch could use some of that color, maybe not {FILL-IN} but probably just adding differant colors with with the sketch lines and such, it wouldnt over kill on color but at the sametime give some color to the linework,just an idea there that would make this somewhat even better then it already is, something you should think about trying, so some extra color would be nice key, other then that i thought it was alright, so untill next time, good luck on anything new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color {LINE-WORK} would be a start

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saramary3 responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback!It's much appreciated. Yeah, I think with this one some color would be very nice as well. I'm not sure if this is a style that I'm going to pursue further, though.

[Smile]

Could be better

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok i thought i would review this only piece of art you have, its notbad, it could be better though, it was kinda {CUTE} now ways this could have been improved and mayb it can in the future would be, {LARGER} canvas, so that you can add something in the distant backround, the colors were kinda too bright, more texture and shades within the colors aswell, and also a {SHINE} on the top of the hair like in a half moon shape as so it gives off that shine feel, these are just a few ideas that would have and can improve on this, so it would be interesting to see you work on some more stuff even this one here anyways good luck on anything new comming out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as stated above make the colors less bright and with more shades, make a larger canvas so you can draw some type of back setting, some shine in the hair aswell as other little tid bits.

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NekoMika responds:

Thanks for the review. I shall look into doing those should I make more art to post in the future. <3

[D.Duck]

Decent black and white

~~REVIEW~~
cool duck, is it possibly Donald duck? or maybe even that other duck darkwing duck? lol, regardless it was a good piece, now i love the black and white theme here, and one of the few times is where im going to say that the backrounds are just right, now it wouldnt hurt to add a {TOUCH} of color some red or green here or even in the distance backround, now the duck doesnt look very scary, his weapon of choice does look killer and anyone he comes across will kill, lol, so anyways good black and white drawing good sketching nice shading and well drawn , kinda like he is comming out of the dark, anyways nice piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Giving your art piece some color wouldnt hurt, and im not talking about full on color, just a touch here and there, or maybe some focus point, like a center point could be colored, or even a signature, just one two or even three spots colored, would make the drawing more detailed, without taking away from the linework of it all.

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[Teapunk]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
ok so here is something {DIFFERANT} every once in awhile we will get stuff like this on the portal and this one was pretty {UNIQIE} glad you got a good grade on it, and this is art you see alot of this type of stuff in art shows and stuff, so this was interesting, now i think this would have been better if you had a differrant backround the one you had there kinda didnt allow for the picture to be focused on it was more of hard to see with the {PATTERN} backround it should have been probably just a white sheet or something, so ther then the backing it was alright and i thought it was pretty nifty

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just the backing should be a more {SOLID} not a patteren.

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Araelyn responds:

Hahahahaha. It's my wallpaper.