XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Make your mark]

Artistic

I like this one for its artistic visuals. the hand painting of a hand was nice its like the character in the painting itself is putting his or her mark on the artistic world, and thats what I got from it, so a nice rendition of artistic style here, very nice job and hope you make more stuff like this its very artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some artistic painted borders of some sort.

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[Gouache Painting]

Fun

This is a nice fun painting probably something you would do for your kid and it brings out that feeling of innocence and fun. The painting itself needs more textures and more going on in the colors, it seems a bit plain in the overall background. I would also add more of the dinos to this and not just off to the corner as that doesnt seem very focused and looks a bit off being so much in the corner out of place. And so you have shown me what you can realy do with this piece here, you have showcased some awsome stuff with great detail, some small improvments could be made though but besides that you have done great here. So my ending Overview here is that this was pretty impressive, nice work. Overall good style of painting the character and dino.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More textures and details in the background and scenary.

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ArtofArti responds:

Thank you for your review!
I had more dinosaurs planned into the background, but forgot until after I'd gotten pretty far on the trees. Got attached too quickly. I'm planning on doing more gouache paintings soon, might try and redo this one eventually.

[Megaphone proof]

Nice interface

Nice interface design you have here it for some game I am assuming but looks good nice set up fresh colors nice overlook just all around a great looking interface, would have been nice to see how it all turned out, actually looks like an interesting game, but regardless great art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seems very well designed.

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[The Mighty Shades]

Nice work

Well Im not sure who this is maybe its mega man or a character from that series, I think the orange color is too bright and you could ad some texture to it including more shine and stars, and the backround could also use some more effort aswell, besides all that this was actally pretty decent stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work or color and a deeper tecture in the helm.

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[Pokemon Collage]

Very nice

So here was a good combination of some pokemon I am really enjoying the shine you added here the backround is ok but thaught it could have been a tad bit better, maybe more color and glow in the backround, other then that this was actually a good art piece and I was highly impressed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrpound work but even if you left it like this it would still be awsome.

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[Snail]

Kind of small

This was nifty and creative but the whole piece seemed kind of small, I am loving the "TEXTURE" in the shell and snail itself, the blue backround is nice too but the backround needs more to it too, maybe some other snails in the distant backround or something, but overall a good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bigger size view and larger canvus and some backround work.

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[Slicing coconuts colour]

Funny

This seems like something my best friend would do to my coconuts when i piss her off heh. The green color of the girl was nice and kind of reminded me of a female anime Hulk. I think that the background was good choice given the setting and story you are trying to tell here. I think more shadows are needed in the overall piece to show the actions of her swinging the sword and maybe more lines of emotions around her face. I love the motion you have given her body and breasts. Nothing like a nice pair of bouncers. And with all all that said I will not bore you any longer and will wrap this up, but on my ending notes here I do have to say and comment thats this was a decent piece here interesting and even entriging, so keep up the good work and always make things better with as much effort as possible. anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shadows and actions around her swinging

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Rennis5 responds:

Solid advice, thank you :D

[Raven]

Very nice

This was a great drawing or sketch, the line work and shades alone are most impressive and love the pose even its like you have captured a nice drawing here, now for me I would love to see some sort of back setting or scene in the backround, just an idea though. keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work.

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[Mermaid]

Beautifull

And this also tells a story of love and trapped and not beaing able to reach his love? ok maybe not I was reaching on that one but still this was a nice piece of work especially for Flash, I would love to see some shine or glass reflection more on this, it was a delightful piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see some shine or glass reflection more on this

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[Kasia n Dub]

Nice concept

Interesting ideas here and nice concept. I am okay with the black and white only coloring as there is dept and shadows used with the light. I just think more light is needed in certain areas and her body positioning needs a bit of work. Maybe more turned in her abdomin area and more light coming off this dub friend of hers. Her face is great and her lips are sexy. nd so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book. So try and get some more Extended efforts in this one. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light coming off her friend dub and maybe more background details but the plain grey does work with the color scheme here.

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GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks for the review! And I agree, I could’ve taken a bit more time with this one.