XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[UF - Helena Van Helsing]

Really nice

So this was really nice you give her sex apeal and the glasses are very cute my suggestion for improvments on this piece are that the glasses have a sparkle or two on them give them that shine, but besides that great character design nice set of colors on clothing and such.

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my suggestion for improvments on this piece are that the glasses have a sparkle or two on them give them that shine

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[Necromage]

Necro wow

I like what you have done here with the pixels for pixel day. Id use more lightning in this image so it seems more sinister. the necromancer is very good and the effects coming from his hands or "SPELL" looks really great, a good use of simple hues and shades with blues. I love the fact it is a skull face, those are my fave. Now As I wind down on this piece of art I just want to say this was actually a decent piece, some extra added effects would be nice but overall its decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more lightning in that background but otherwise very nice

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Chibazato responds:

Hey thanks so much for the kind words and the criticism! I agree about the lighting. I definitely could have done more with it and to be honest it was kind of a last minute idea to even add the lighting effects it has. So it wasn't really planned out too well. I mostly just had the skeleton mage doing his spell... and that was the whole animation. So I added the cliff and clouds and the lighting effects all kind of last minute and without planning. I actually had a lot of funky issues with this animation as well. It was kind of a pain and by the end i just wanted to be done with it! Lol

Thanks again for your opinion and I really appreciate your support! Im glad you enjoyed my art!

[UF - Fujiko Kamigawa]

Cool dress

I really like the colors of the dress it meshes well with the actual character, but again I think there lacks some shine in the "HAIR" and just a lil streak or two of shine can go a long way and show some great improvment, so just try it out and let it shine well lol, anyways untill next time keep up the great work.

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Hair needs a few streaks of shine.

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[UF - Asumi Juichi]

Very nice

So I decided to checkout more of your work and this one was different yet still unique, you like big top heavy girls I take it lol, no but really great texture in the har it lacks some "SHINE" though so adding a streak of shine in the hair would be a plus.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in the hair a streak or two.

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[UF - Vivian Juwels]

Decent

And here was a decent character she is volumptious lol or however you say it, she could use some more skintone texture and some shine in her hair, and the watermark has got to go it kind of ruins the whole deal here, but you could have added a backround aswell.

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Some backround work, and some skintone texture.

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[Madness (WIP)]

Nice

And the starting version of it all, this was good also a stand alone piece, this would have been perfect with a yellow bright moon in the backround itself and everything else just the way it is, so now I have reviewed all three of the pieces, a fun time reviewing your work here today, I look forward to even more.

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this would have been perfect with a yellow bright moon in the backround itself and everything else just the way it is.

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[Murdoc Is God]

Feel good

A good version of that character from the band Gorillaz. I think the use of the darker colors fits his personality and mood best. The background is subtle but very detailed in a way and the eyes are unique but have nice bright effect. It gives off some cover art from one of their last albums Plastic Beach. I think that was a nice call-back to it but in a more darker Murdoc way. So Finally I come to the end of this review. So always hard to end on a review never know what to say but you have a nice vision here a nice skill and you have shown this very well, keep up the nice work. and my final Overview of this is that you have some good quality here. anyways great stuff here keep it up.

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Nothing to change really but maybe next time try this in 3D like the band members are usually draw in

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Roksim responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Madness]

Very nice

Another version here I like this version even better so as I mentioned on the other one some backround work with a moon and clouds, but with this being darker you could really make those red eyes glow even more and that would show more focus on things, just some things to think about.

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So have these red eyes really glow bright red.

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[Madness Final]

Cool

This was cool. I love this pose and the red eyes, I would love to see you expand on this with say like a "MOON" and clouds in the backround it would be the perfect setting kind of like if he is on a cliff of some sorts, so some backround work with a moon and couds would sufice just right here in this situation. anyways nice job.

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so some backround work with a moon and couds would sufice just right here in this situation.

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[pear bird?!]

Perfect

This is awsome and I think you have done a perfect job here the shine the border the smile the abstract style of it all, its different and unique, I have no suggestions of improvment as you created a perfect element to a unique creation, so very well done here and nice job.

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Its perfect in its own way.

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