XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gray Fullbuster MADDNES MODE]

Nice work

I like all the cuts and bruses but I think you should have a few more and show more of a blood feel to it like that one gash is all white and your backrounds are white so clashes a bit but I do like the effort here so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra blood and more realistic loo
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[WoW Warlords of Draenor by Varuu]

Very detailed

I must say this was very detailed and must have took you awhile to put it all together tobad there's no color but with some added color this would be pretty awesome but anyways a nice piece of art and I have enjoyed it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color of course

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[Salazar the Squid Knight and Rex the Slime Dragon Traverse the Trials of the Leviathan]

Love the detail

Wow I love the detail in this and glad I have come across this small little gem in the portal kind of like finding a needle in a haystack and that's exactly what happened here very nice detail all the little stuff just makes this show a strange and unique world and your drawings are so fine and we'll done so very nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More fine detail and more work like this one

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[Old Man '76]

Very nice

So not your best out of the bunch but you did bring out some nice detail here so I'll first start and suggest some improvement like the background and I know I suggested this before but maybe some pattern or design back there or some lighting effect but anyways you know also his red glasses could have more of a glow and glare to them just some things to try out and make much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Suggested a few ideas for improvement

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[Aftergold]

Very nice

I love this there's a lot of detail in the mask and character itself love the use of color you had in here with that mask or painting you have an eye for detail for sure you only really need to take some of that eye for detail and ad some into the backround as it was a bit bland maybe even just a lighted area or a backdrop scene or even pattern back there would be good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work

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[Lithium]

Love the color here

Some really nice color here the shirt the background the little detail it just all comes out pretty good very nice work here you could also ad a nice shine and or glare on the sun glasses would be a nice little touch here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A glare on the sunglasses a nice effect goes a long ways

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[All Hanz]

He looks cool

He looks cool a few changes I would recommend would be darker skin tone more texture in the background and a more expression in his face but other then that it's basic but does show off your skill in drawing so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture in places

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[Yumi Kioko (MJ)]

Nice

And this was nice I liked it the expression on the face was pretty good a scared look but was realistic the background of the whole piece could represent why such an expression so that's something you could present better like some backdrop scene or something there just to show more of that expression

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[Character Designs]

The squad

And once again the squad at a far distance the one thing it does need is some background it would be a much better piece with colorful backdrop a big city at Forrest even a beach but it does need a background of some sorts the characters are very good and I like your style and detail so just ad some background detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A backround mainly I suggested a few ideas

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[Squad]

Your best one

Your best squad pic yet nice use of color nice eyes and just a good art piece I love the use of color I think all this needs is some sort of slogan about your squad or something but for the most part this is a great pic of the squad I don't know the squad but they look like a wildly and fun bunch and you have presented them well so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sort of sign or slogan representing your squad

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