XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yoko Pinup]

Nice

Wow nice and a big congrats on the front page that's a nice achievement to gain but your hard work payed off like this piece I really don't see any changes or improvments that need to be changed because you created a masterpiece here great color great pose very nice backrounds it all worked out so well so nice job here. Props to you for a beautiful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvements needed on a masterpiece

~X~

[Halloween Cream]

Very cute

This was very cute and simple and you can see it didn't take long I can see you improving on this with much more texture and a better don't with more style but as you said it was a quick piece of work so I guess it is what it is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture some improved don't

~X~

[Going for a Dip]

Very nice

Now first off I really love your work and you have a very good eye for detail like the waterfall in the background or the snapping of the undergarments lol and the backside of beautiful views but you really do put some effort and energy into your work and it shows just like this art piece and I was very impressed with your style here as for improvement not sure because you did so good on this only thing I can really think of is a burst of sunlight beaming down on the girls

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of sunlight

~X~

[Nuclear Girl]

This was cute

I will say that this was kind of cute her expression in her face is cute and her pose is nice it's this background that really bugs me because you have this great charchter work and a bland backround I would ad some background or backdrop some scene or something to reflect her expression too but besides that this was really good stuff and I have enjoyed it lots anyways keep up the fantastic work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work would be cool

~X~

[Don't Move]

Very well done

Now here is something very well done and the view shot that you posted this in is just absolutely beautiful love that sun beaming down I think you could have a little more light beam down and I would even go farther and put some shine and sparkle on the end of the sword at least a sparkle star or something but besides all that this was great work great structure of charchter design so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More beam from the sun and a sparkle or two on sword

~X~

[Spoopy Amy]

I like this

This one reminds me of a friend I once had lol. But anyways this was very nice I love the water and love the darkness of it the girl was cute I think the only thing this needs is maybe a light at end of tunnel or something kind of like a beam of light or something but besides that this was very well done and love the darkness

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A light beam from end of tunnel

~X~

[Nicole]

Very cute

These furry creatures are very cute you always have a nice one or erotic one indeed I like the props too the only thing I have an issue with is adding more background the base color ones are ok but with some sort of backdrop. It would be so much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a backdrop for the backround maybe a sun set or City view but at least something

~X~

[Tenis Peach]

Nice action pose

You have a nice action pose with this one you really do know how to put poses in the right position but anyways this one might be better with a tennis court in the background so besides that this was pretty cool art though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A tennis court in the background would be perfect

~X~

[Blaze Outfit I Drew]

Awesome

And once again another awesome piece you have here some very nice work some nice style a great charchter I like the background in this one and that little flame is a nice addition you should brighten it up a tad more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter flame would be cool

~X~