XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spanking Widowmaker Commission (GIF)]

Nice

The animation on this seems not so fluid I do like all the detail and the graphics and artwork especially the color very deep color it's really just that animation that could be smoothed out more. But besides that this was notbad at all

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The animation could be smoother greaphics are fine

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PaddleTone responds:

Another early animation. Thanks for the critique!

[Adventurer Norman]

Very nice work

I like your work here the design of the character is great and you ad a lot of detail to this I even like the sunlight beaming down I think you need to have some sunlight on that stick weapon with a sparkle at the end that would really be a nice touch on things so try it out and let the sparkle shine on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle and more sunlight beaming down

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[Xmas catgirl 2009]

Wow this is good

I must say this is pretty good stuff the white outter shell of the piece was pretty good too I love the character with some brusing and scars shows a realistic look and very well done must have took you a long time it's a nice piece though so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is

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[Puppet Politician]

Nice

This was pretty cool I like the whole black and white theme here I think the glasses can be used as a focal point in having some glare and shine but also have the lens have a color to them while the rest could be all black and white that would be a nice change and show detail about it. Just an idea to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some glare and color on the eye ware

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[Rise of RogueStar]

Very nice

I can see you adding much more glow and shine to this piece you have a lot of light up parts and some glowing options you could really push it's a very nice rendition of your style so nice work on this very good work indeed I like that indeed and like the idea you have here so maybe some more glow and shine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow and shine

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[Knight Owl]

Nice idea

A nice idea you have here of the knight plus owel two meaning but all rolled into one idea so that was cool I wouldn't mind having more shine or dents in the armour itself but it was a nice idea here so nice work here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in the armour

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[Artificial Nova]

Nice work

Well you have amazed me with all your artwork and designs and massively deep pattern and designs so beautiful and so much depth so great stuff you have here and all great artistic style so props to you on some fine pieces of artwork and hope you keep making these fine piece as that are creative with flvour

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow

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[Azurean Domain]

Wow spectacular

Wow this is a spectacular piece just the look into this it's so deep the fine lines are just absolutely beautiful the line work is amazing the lighting effects are powerfull and I can see you brighter them up even more so they can reflect a glow of some sort but just try and make it have more depth but you already have an amazing piece anyways keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more brighten up and glow on the white lines

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[Purple Embrace]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the purple here but seems like it's missing something and could be the bland spots maybe add a little depth to those areas and make it full and filled with delight I like some of your older works because you really filled the whole canvus with depth and detail so try and get back to that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth more filling of blank spots

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[Golden Emblem]

Needs more

Well this one I like for the gold feel of it and I can see you adding some light effects to really bring out that hold too but the blank space needs touch up maybe some specks of gold in the black backround or something. But something to fill in blanks

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Blank spots need filling in

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