XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[PJ Shantae (Better Version)]

Better version

Yes I agree this is for sure a better version the change of the see thru top was perfect I think it should be longer and have a little more mesh to it but it's a beautiful piece so nice work indeed and that background still needs work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More mesh look on her top and some detail and depth in the backround wall

~X~

[PJ Shantae]

Very nice

Now this one was very nice work the white pants and top seemed to be so fitting and you gave her a nice expression as well like she was really waking up for the morning so that was a plus of things there the background could have some depth

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backround could have some depth to it

~X~

[Mega Man 11 Roll]

This was cute

This was a cute piece you have here she brings off lots of cuteness and there's nothing you need to change here you covered all the bases and put in some nice energy here so very nice work and nice art detail here keep up the fantastic ideas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on a beautiful piece

~X~

[a galaxy behind her]

Magical

Ohmy what a great piece here, it just draws you in with all those colors and details and effects...the nebula and mist inside the hair is a original and unique touch on filling in color by giving it a background-fill instead. Those purples and blues with the stars and nebulas really pop out and make you feel galatic and at peace. She seems sad or maybe she is thinking. The top part of the hair, the details lines of the hair needs a bit of a polish, just more textures inside to showcase it is hair rather than that solid look. The background with the bright stars and tiny stars is great. I love space and scifi so this one really made me happy. Good job and keep it up. So you have an interesting piece here, there could be some cleaning up and maybe some changes but thats for later, but from what you do have here its a good start of something pretty interesting, so keep up with that. because we the fans love your work. Alright so nice piece here, and its always nice to find things like this in the art portal, you have shown some decent details that jump out at you so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More hair details in the top part of the hair maybe add some textures but really this doesnt need much changing it is great.

~X~

sylvrn responds:

Thank you!! This was a really nice, well-written review; thanks for taking time out of your day to write it :)

[Groovy Starr]

Love the use of color

This was a very artistic feel of this art piece, I really love what you have done with the "BACKROUNDS" you really have an eye for detail and the color themes in this are very nice indeed, so nice work all around I think as a form of improvment you could ad some frames on the edges but ad some random colors to reflect the main point of focus. but a nice piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think as a form of improvment you could ad some frames on the edges but ad some random colors to reflect the main point

of focus.

~X~

[Velocirapist]

Nice black and white

This was really cool I do enjoy the black and white style here I think you should ad some "COLOR" and I think by adding color in the "EYE" like a deep red that would make this whole piece look alot better, but as it is in black and white its pretty good too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eye red or another color so everything stands out more.

~X~

[Semi-cubist..]

Artistic

Now this is an amazing piece very artistic very amazing I really like what you did here even that "BACKROUND" is awsome and a fantastic piece, love the colors you used they work so well together and the "DETAIL" in the face itself are si detailed, so props to you on a beautifull piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some yellow frame or borders would be great here on this piece.

~X~

[Fear not]

Ok...

Well God is good, but this needs work. I like to find the good in all artwork and there are some positives here, but I think just writing some nice creative fonts on a background with a heart is a bit lazy. You could put more effort into this with wild colors or a nice draw out cross, maybe a celtic cross to give some details with the regilious factor remaining. I understand the main thing here is the message, which you have gotten across very well....but maybe a bit more art instead of text next time so you can showcase your drawing skills. I tend to like these kinds of entries more then others because of the style that it is, and because of the vibe that extrudes out from these types. Now what can be said that has not already been said, You have a very nice Polished blend of creativity here, you show the effort and the talent on stuff like this and just gives the viewer a sense of pleasure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less use of a font and background and add more images to the font

~X~

[Captain Raar]

Very detailed

Wow this is really good the hair alone is very well textured it has a very realistic feel to it and the skin tones are really good aswell, the eyes I think could have a lighter color to them, but overall this is a nice portrait almost but still a very good piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lighter color in the eyes.

~X~

[The Lovers]

Really deep

With this particualr piece you really do tell a story here and the "BACKROUND" is so deep and tells more of that story infact this one now kind of reminds me of the ending of "ROGUE-ONE" but very nice art work here love this one, Think I will ad this one as a favourite, but anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects would be a plus on this like with the falling flames, or even the moon you could really brighten that up with a nice puplish glow and whatnot.

~X~