XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tioran, king of the desert and his friend]

Very nice work

And here you have some really nice work great designs and the details are just uncanny and you presented them well with a decent backround even I would suggest more shine on the horns and shields but that's me but a sparkle and a shine here or there wouldn't hurt a fly infact it would make it even better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine and sparkle

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[Signs]

Haha funny

Now that was cute I like the concept of this one with the signs you did pretty good and executed the humor well it's always nice to see how these earlier ones started out always fun and sometimes better then the later episdes but anyways nice work here on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Early stages don't need change

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[Samantha- The Mystical Dancer]

Beautiful

And here we have a beautiful piece and I am loving all the little details like all the jewelry here that you have added the color of the dress and the detail in the background really nice work here and I was very pleased with this so with this one there is no need for any changes at this time and probably not in the future it's perfect

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned no changes needed

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[Balloon]

Nice

It's always nice to see where it all started from and the black and white style is cool would have been nice if the frames we're at least in color but anyways nice work here I am pleased to review the beginning of where it all started so nice job there indeed. And I look forward to much more of your classics

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color is always a plus lol

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[Picking]

The start

Well you have it here folks the very start of things and this is where it started all the blandness of it all it all comes together in it's own way but you can really see where all the progress came into play later but it's nice to see the changes and color over time anyways nice first start of things and it gets so much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed on an older set

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[Croc]

Oh wow

Wow I have to say that was some amazing work and you really braught out the shine on this one and you pushed for a great pose on her so that was a nice job indeed I could see you adding more shine on her back side though and more sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle on her backside

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[Yet Another Character Portrait]

Awesome

Well I still think his hair should be a lime green but I'm just happy that you have been using color not too fond of the light color but hey it's color right anyways great piece here and keep being artistic keep making great stuff you have massive talent and hope it takes you places anyways great work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Green hair. Green hair lol

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mustxng27 responds:

I actually didn't add any color on most of my drawings, including this one. Again, it's probably the way the paper looks. This is meant to be an uncolored picture of the appearance of this character. His hair is naturally white, even in color, actually. Lime Green is too flashy looking. Thank you so much for your suggestions, man. You're so kind!!

[Character Portrait]

Very nice

So now you really getting into some color even as light as the color can be you still are presenting it well I wouldn't mind the background with a deep red or blue color while the main drawing has some light colored shades like you do have here now. So anyways very nice work indeed and I do look forward to even more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color ideas mentioned above

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mustxng27 responds:

Thanks for all your reviews (yes, I read them all.) Actually, this doesn't have any color at all, it's just the paper. I haven't logged into my account in ages, so I never saw your reviews so I could respond but here I am! But I just scan the paper on which I draw the pictures to the computer and sometimes they might seem colored because of the color of the paper itself. Anyways, thank you for all your helpful reviews once again.
Also, I have an Instagram on which I post a shit load more often than on here. Check that out if you feel like it.
Thanks in advance.

[Manga Eye Practice (colored version)]

Yes color

Now you don't realise how happy that makes me feel to see that you added some color and while it's subtle color it still works out very well and you showed some awsome detail with it all so it has really been a pleasure to review your work they show your talent and the detail you put into them including lots of energy

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something in the backround would be nice

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[Manga eye practice]

Nice work

I know I talk alot about color and frames and more visual but all these things would make this so much better especially with a piece like this it could use a closer up visual to show that fine detail just a thaught that you may like to expand on because these are some beautiful drawings and would love to see them go over the top

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A closer visual of the detail

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