XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[me in chibi]

Nice use of color

So first of all you have a nice sense of color and you have some vibrant uses of color thats what I like about your work here and other works in your profile, adding some backround svene would have been a great change here but besides that this is a nice character as it is, look forward to more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more effort on the backround would be a great idea here and making this a better overall piece.

~X~

[Tankmen-loves box]

Cute

Haha Well I found this to be cute yes I used the word cute, Anyways this was actually notbad and seems like you could have added more little details like "SHINE" to the glasses and some texture to the box itself, maybe even some detail in the backround, but really besides that this is your own creation and it is what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like shine in the glasses, texture in the box and some backround scene,

~X~

[The Sugar Claws Cover]

Peach

Really love the color-tone you used here it seemed to mesh very well with the whole piece as a whole, This particular piece seemed to need a pink or reddish border or frame of some sort, A really nice sense of shades aswell, and your comic should really do well, wonder how it all went since this is a bit older now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This particular piece seemed to need a pink or reddish border or frame of some sort,

~X~

[Jokes]

Interesting

WEll here we have another interesting comic and I do like it, but again nice to see what it was like before it got somewhat decent, the added color later is a huge plus, nice little story you have here though and made me chuckle, so nice job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color but I know that comes later.

~X~

[Spring]

Nice

Not sure what a lot of these are but I like the design and looks like you put lots of time and energy into this with great effort and thats what really counts the artistic shine really jumps out at you and I was very impressed right from the start so very nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames would be a plus for sure.

~X~

[Blue Martini]

Cool

And another beautiful piece you have here not too much colors in this one but you were still able to bringout some interesting styles of things and the shine on these are pretty good, so overall I was pretty impressed with your style of work here and again always artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad even more shine to it.

~X~

[Tom Fulp: The Beard]

Pixel

Pixel is always fun as this piece was to review it has all the elements of newgrounds and tom fulp aswell, you have done a great job here, my only change on this might be some lighting or burst of light on the backround, So nice work here and a good newgrounds related pixel art style of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my only change on this might be some lighting or burst of light on the backround

~X~

[Ruby haired assassin]

Comic Book Level

This is very much comic book level artwork here. Something you'd see in an older 90s comic series. I love the girls red hair and the way she is positioned. The armour and outfit is very unique and visually appealing. I love her expression in her face as well. I would say this needs a full background like a comic, maybe a fight scene or some type of scene to fit in with your character, this almost seems like a waterpainting and I love the flow of colors that it gives off, Classy and Freshness And I am Supportive of this very Majestic and Diverse piece it gives off a nice Groove about this, so nice effort on this fine piece of work here. A Polished blend thats what I really saw here today, And now we are heading to the end of this review but before I do head out I would like to say that I like your work and do hope to see more of it, it was pretty interesting and had fun reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
JUst needs a back here nothing major in term of the art itself as that is almost perfect as is

~X~

OliverBengtsson responds:

Thank for the review, I most say that is, by far, the longest review I have read in a while :)

[Song by Request]

Really nice

So this was another artistic piece of art you have here love the blend of color and theres a little story here and you tell it well your depiction of people are pretty nifty aswell very good art style you have here, And I have enjoyed this piece of art work and style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more stuff like this its pretty impressive.

~X~

[Math]

Very nice

Wow I must say you sure do know how to make some nice stuff with all these great images and detail, especially this one and its unique style of art, I would have liked if it was in more use of color but for the mostpart it was pretty good artistic style, so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color to this would be a plus.

~X~