XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Some Lady Walking]

Very nice work

This was very good the two different variations here is kind of cool I like the animation on the second one but it could have more animation to go with it great design of characters the background could use some detail or done backdrop but anyways nice artwork here I like it and was highly impressed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation on the second variation

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[egg]

Notbad

Well this was notbad at all kind of nifty if you ask me I like the animation it was a bit slow but could be smoother and I think you could do much more with the background like some deep scary woods back drop or something. But for sure something more then just that base color so just keep that in mind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on a scenery for the background

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[red green]

Nice

This was cool there was a lot of detail here and just using red and green is a plus but it's more then green and red and you added all sorts of little faces and sketches here and there it just came out very well I was very impressed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should do other versions of colors on this one

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[leak]

Strange one

Wow I must say this one was kind of strange with the whole leaking of the eye but it was still kinda nifty your skills are pretty good and you made it pretty realistic in it's own strange way but it's still pretty good so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more of a dip in the leak

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[AAH]

Pretty amazing

I thought this was pretty amazing the small animation behind this was pretty cool too the black and white is notbad either but could use more lighting effects as the animation plays through like from the eyes you could have a ray of light beam from there eyes or something but it's just an idea to try and improve on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[Ted Cruz Is An Alien]

Lol

This was kind of funny I like how you added some small animation here and it was a little bland but still pretty good I could see you adding some more background more color more depth more style to the background it just needs a design or two but you have a funny little art piece here so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add something to the background

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[December COTM - "Wizard"]

Nice effects

You have some really nice effects here the lighting effects are really good and I think you could ad a much more vibrant glow on those effects and it's something you could really push. But besides that this was a nice art piece very well done very artistic and a style of it's own very unique and I like what you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more glow

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[Pop Team Frigid (Animated)]

Cute

This is something my girl woulod like. it reminds me of my-little-pony. i am sure that is not your goal here but the cuteness just captures that type of look in their faces. maybe it was an inspiration? I am not too sure here. I would add some borders here since it is animated just to make it look more like a show. They animate very simply but I feel they need to do more than just that bounce, maybe have their eyes swint too? SOme more in the animations woud be best, This one really caught my eye, the deep style of talent really shows off well with this one, there are some bland areas that can be worked on but other then that this was awsome. You even added some Groove to it so nice effort here. So with this piece it kept me wanting more for its interesting design, but as I do end this review I would like to say its a nice piece overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation effect, try making their eyes swint like a smile and a border around the image

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[Faces]

Cool

Ireally cant wait till this gets deeper into the comics I like your character work here and like the humor but I am in need of some of that deep detail and color you have later on but I will give you that you added some nice humor on this one and thats a plus on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color like on the edges.

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[Horroscope]

Haha

Well I have to admit this was pretty funny, you do have some funny stuff that you really bring out and some jokes are good and to lay it all out on a comic is pretty nifty and I had some chuckles with this one, so nice job once again on some humor on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color ofcourse.

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