XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flinthook Illustration]

Very stylish

So this one has a fresh look fresh print and fresh all the way around now I can see you making that green gem in the middle jump out more with some transparency shine and even a sparkle. Just one idea that may work and would make everything else look good too so try it out but regardless love the freshness of this whole piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Shine and sparkle the green gem a bit

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[Vixi]

Very well done

Wow first off the colors here are fantastic and even mystical that deep red is so very nice it allows for the shine to come out a bit more I like it and I would even go with even more shine points and even brighter and as for the background somewhat darker might be better but not too dark but with all that said you have a very good design her nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some darker backround and more shine

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[Borkshire's Baby Raptor]

Wow

Wow what can I say this one is pretty wickedly good with detail and very nice sketches here love the detail and love the shades aswell you are an outstanding artist I would love to see some color added maybe just the dragon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like just the dragon

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[technoliberation]

Artistic

Well this was pretty artistic I like this and was pretty artistic if you ask me I think there was a lot of stuff here and no real focus point so my suggestion to you is put on some focus points or some lighting effects on a focus point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus point needed

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vinara128 responds:

Hey thank you for the constructive review,will do better next time. :D

[hot key]

Wow

There seems to be a lot going on in this visual so much detail it's hard to really just focus on anything so my advice is have some beam of light on some focus points just an idea though and hope you can pull it off too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[The axe effect]

Very nice work

So I have to say this was very nice work I do think it was too dark and you have to find ways of lighting up things like you do in the center maybe a rock or a plant or just something to light up areas more but that's all really this needs maybe even a beam of light from above but you do have some nice elements here and it all came fourth very nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[crush me baby-Glaucoma]

Well this was different

I have to say this was very different but you do have an idea here and it seems to work so nice work I would put more glow and sparkle on the green points of this but the visual is not very clear so maybe some polish up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bit of polish is needed

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[Flinthook for real!!]

Nice

So this was a nice charchter design you have here the gems are nice and the gem he is holding should have a much more hlow and shine even some sparkle on it just an idea that could make this one a lot better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the gems shine. Glow. And sparkle

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[Art Trade with Foxluu]

Very nice structure

Now here you have a very good charchter and show them in good expression love the clothing detail and the use of color also having the detail on her clothing is always great to see only thing here I would love to see improved would be that background it's lacking but overall you have a beautiful piece of artwork here and I'm very pleased with the outcome so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The background is lacking so add something back there even a pattern of some sort could work

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KanesakiHyudou responds:

thank you for the feed back...my recent art works have a lot of background art in them but it takes so long to make them! XD!

[3milkT]

Simple

Simple yet not and it has some beautiful colors all themes and her innocence is displayed well live the eyes I think you could improve onto this like the white border or frame could be more of a dark burgandy red just an idea to think about but you have some nice talent on this piece here so nice job indeed hope to see more of your work sometime soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The borders and or frames could be a deeper red not white

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