XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[atp girl (cries of war)]

Very nice

So this was cool very nice work here I like the full body pose and standing and back view of course you have a nice style that black and white is notbad maybe adding some lighting effects in front of her like a burst of light or some beam of light shining on her

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of light shinning on her

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[sunset lovely (naked verison)]

Notbad

So the naked version is notbad either I still think that there should be some shine on her chest like the other other one but once again you do get better with these poses and like that it's a front view now very nice work nice background detail and all very artistic in it's own way

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some shine on her chest

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[sunset lovely (clothed)]

You are getting really good

So after looking at your works and reviewing them I have to say you are really getting better at these especially with the poses and here with this one I think you could ad some shine on her chest that would be very cool but anyways nice work once again nice work as always hope you keep it up

~~Things to improve on~~
Some shine on her chest

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[Coffee Girl]

Beautiful

Now here was another beautiful piece this was some smooth art the lines are very smooth the only thing that I thaught was that the face needs more emotion more expression to it but your soft colors give her that alurring visual and make it very elegant so very nice job here and that is the end here in this review but before I do head out very nice job and hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more emotion from the face more expression

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[cool fuck]

Very nice

So this was very nice I love all the fresh colors used and her pose is just right the shine on things is even pretty good too you do some nice work here and really allow for some shine to really jump out at you now I do like the background but maybe more texture or design in it even a burst of light on the background very nice artwork here keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more depth and textuture in that back wall

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[ma'lady is relaxing and elegant steamy stream]

Wow very nice

Wow I have to say this was pretty amazing I like the form here and I have to say the best back side view of all of your work it's perfectly shaped the Misty clouds could use more shading and depth to them though but besides that this was a beautiful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The mist or clouds could use more depth

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[the war of crime]

Nice

So this is one of those where the gushing blood from the head could use some red color and the rest could be black and white and that would be that also some background would be nice just some scene backdrop kind of thing but with that said this was a decent sketch

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background of course and the blood gushing out could be painted red

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[misinterruption of bath (ma'lady)]

Your style

Your style is different but that's ok I do like it and love this piece with full color and love all the background and the pose on this one seems to have come out very well this has to be some of your best works so nice job here very good work indeed keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes to this beautiful piece

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[Hunhi]

Nice sketch

So here was another nice sketch I like the view shot of this one seems like you could have a very deep background with this one but overall it's a nice sketch and I like it a nice pose indeed so besides all that a nice job hope you could make some background with this sometime

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail and scene and some color of course

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[Fading Away]

Intense

Wow this was very intense the details just amaze me with the deep views here and a look into a falling city but still with a bit of hope like the lighted up city I think you should have more light and a fog of myst the steps of the gardians but have to say you have some beautiful skill here very well done work must have took you a long time to do this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More fog and Myst with lighting reflect

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