XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Character Art]

Very detailed

Now this one was very nice and the amount of detail on all the characters was wow so much detail so much shading just a beautiful bunch of charchter work here now while this is a white background for the detail of the characters this could use a darker border or frame of some sort but just an idea here or there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A dark tone of borders or frames

~X~

lamgiang responds:

@ XwaynecoItX: thanks for the feedback. I will try that next time.

[Train Station]

Love it

Love the lighting effects on this and all the characters with all the different little details it's like a real world is taking place so very realistic and you show some style here and just a nice art piece overall now as for that white border or frames I'm not so sure about all that as it seems out of place I could see something darker or with a wood frame like

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A different border frame then the one you have

~X~

[Viking]

Now that's a sight

Wow I must say that's a sight just the idea of what's going on and the moon and it's an adventure that is taking place now with that blue moon I really think you could push more of a lightning effect and more glow behind it so that it just jumps out more with some lighted up glow but with all that said very nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light up moon

~X~

[Articuno]

WOW

This is some really well done fan art. The pokemon has a great detailed background that really comes at you and brings the pokemon to life. The expression in the eyes is also good and keeps with its character traits. The sparkle and shines all around this as a foreground are a great addition to make it really pop and look like a battle may occur. The glow in the wings is really eye catching and really gives this art something special. The colors are good too but the green feels a bit limited. Overall a good piece and a good fan art. And so this was a good piece I found today, and will start this review off with saying that you know what you are doing, you have a good idea of what you want to do and it all seems to workout well. I like the progress you have done here, And I Applaud you for the good effort. So it was a pleasure reviewing this piece and I hope one day to review more of your work as I thought it was a unique piece, This just Radiates a blend of unique style about it, so keep up the positive ideas and effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The green part of the background just needs to be bigger and maybe have more green in this.

~X~

EdoNova87 responds:

I really glad i love my work :3

[Pixel Pico and Friends]

Cute

This was a cute piece of work with all the newground characters and there pixel formation, One thing I wish was better about this would be that the whole "CANVUS" was much larger in size that way you can ad more details in the backround. just something to think about though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a larger canvus for more detail.

~X~

[Sally]

Sweet

A very sweet and nice piece here, you have done a good job recreating "SALLY" and her innocence and charm with this art. I like the use of the graveyard as the background from the film. The added jar of her materials is a bonus too. The skulls and details in the background really make it come alive. The blues you used for her are also great and match with the film. The textures you have included in her clothing is also very wonderful and adds some realistic touches. I love the use of snow over the entire piece to really give that feeling of a cold night. The legs and arms seem a bit big tho so I think that is really the one thing to watch out on cause that character was very very skinny but perhaps you are going for a more realist size display here. Another good find, of some decent art we have here, now im no expert but this is pretty good if you ask me, and its clearly nice visually, you have some good ideas here and I like what you have done here today. wouldnt hurt to add some flair or abit more flair then you already have. I have been Accustomed to all sorts of styles this one was different, Ok well time for me to end this review but must say it was a fun experience reviewing this piece because of the talent and effort that you gave us. But glad I Finally got around to reviewing this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More proportions on her and maybe some light beaming off the moon hitting her.

~X~

[SlattenFatty]

Wow nice

Really nice character here I love how the reds blend into the greens on this one, and those eyes very intense I do wish the eyes were a bit larger, but you do have some great talent and have shown some awsome detail here. maybe a little work on the backround too, just some small details here and there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some detail in the backround just something small.

~X~

[Newgrounds Spamfest]

Colorfull

Wow this was pretty colorfull I love all the different characters and all the different color really brings this out, this is a pretty good piece, I wouldnt mind some more shades and sparkles here and there on a few of the characters, and even some huge borders on this would be cool too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shades, some sparkles, and some frames on the edges would be cool too.

~X~

[emo girl Standing full body]

EMO

Good lord not those "EMO" girls. I do like the look of this girl and the slight reveal of her breasts is sexy but not too slutty. The outfit you made here has good coloring, gotta love red. Her expression and smile are great and that detail textures and shadows in her face make it really look like a cartoon or a possible animation to be. The legs are a bit off at the bottom as they seem too short after the knees, maybe work on body proportions. The background is a good use of color for the girl but needs a bit more I think. Good job overall, beware dem "EMOS" Pieces like this always keep me interested there is always some nice detail or even simple method of how it was created,but this was notbad at all. And so there you have it, the review is shortly commingto a finish here, I was pretty pleased with the outcome here, it was pretty interesting, there may be some adjustments but maybe not much just depends on the direction you really wanted to go with this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the legs a bit and maybe give more details in the background.

~X~