XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shadow Play]

Very nice work

These comics are pretty amazing with all the adventures you give them makes me wonder what will be next, and while the older ones were black and white and the newer ones in color it doesnt make them anyless or anymore you have a good timeline of old and new all good stuff. Love how the character work and drawings look really good here. love how the work gets progressvly better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This one had more detail in the characters you should start doing that more

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[Voodoofigure]

Loved it

And here we go again with another fun comis episode in the series and boy is this a long series how long you planning, but anyways great stuff cool characters and some nice action not to mention some good humor to go along with it, very fun stuff indeed. haha funny stuff and the lego guy was cute

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this one was pretty amusing with the lego guy you should do more stuff like that.

~X~

[E.V.A]

Sexy

She is a sexy good looking drawing you have created here. I think the white dress is well done with an interesting back piece but the white dress (or shirt?) on a white background seems to lose the art for me. You get a bit confused where you look when there is so much white coming out at you. This may be why I am not sure if it is a dress or shirt, so I'd focus on fixing that up a bit and improving on it. I would add maybe a background here so your eyes focus solely on the character and that way you don't lose focus off the art. The eye seems a bit off too, the right one, so maybe center that just a bit more for a more practical look on her face. Other than that tho it is pretty well done, the hair has great detail and texture. The shadows and makeup of her face and cheekbones are a good effect for detail and the lips give off that happy feeling. Now its pieces like this that I really like and come toenjoy, You do have a nice piece of work here, and the visuals really come out well. And now comes the near the end of the review, I had a fun time with this and reviewing your work, and do look forward to seeing and reviewing much more of your future stuffs, I wouldnt mind seeing some more Polish here and there but I believe for themost-part of this you have done pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As discussed above with adding more of a background if you use a white outfit so it doesn't get lost on the eyes.

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[Relaxo - Ray]

Great and entertaining

So these are pretty fantastic and you always bring a good adventure to the table, I have enjoyed this one with a few chuckles so thats a good thing and the intent I believe, but anyways it was like a burstof energy with a bowl of laughs so thank you for that. The ending was the best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really like the ending here you should do more stuff like that.

~X~

[Wishing Well]

Brilliant comic you have dawned in us

You have a dedication on these episodes or series of comics the characters are like-able and are pretty entertaining, I really do enjoy the humor aswell, and What I like the most is how the story plays out in a funny way so there is some good checmistry. love these originals.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned I love these old originals just wish there was some added color to them.

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[Simplifying Ray]

A great comic

And here we come onto another piece of the comic and it is pretty good nice style nice adventure and you you made it entertaining as always, I have come to enjoy this comic series and your work you have an interesting style so keep that up its very good. I like it hope you make more, I wouldnt mind that beam of ray more redish just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the beam more redish so it looks more like a beam.

~X~

[Air Guitar]

Interesting

I really like your work and love how this comic plays out the comic really does evolve into something different and unique and you seem to have some success at it with your style also love the humor you bring to this so very nice work here, I will for sure look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some color in the text bubbles would be interesting

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[Red Lion]

Wow amazing

Wow this was amazing work the amount of detail is beautiful the color is just meshed so with with other colors I would normally suggest some background but this was perfect as is and was just a great art piece I like it alot and added it as a fave so nice job indeed I would love to see more of your work here sometime soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a single thing this is a masterpiece

~X~

[24th Birddy DEe]

This was cute

I have to say this was pretty cute I love the little animation you added and it makes it all come alive with more vibrant feel and it's almost like he is dancing so that's a plus I like the nice fresh colors and just jumps out at you I can see you improving on some more crazy animation to this it's a nice art piece though but anyways nice work hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation

~X~