XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flapjack]

Oh loli pop

Haha I really love the loli pop eyes that was really creative, I feel that the actual canvus or size of it all should be bigger maybe the baby a tad smaller, but this was pretty good stuff, you have a good cute piece of art and love the use of color here.

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I feel that the actual canvus or size of it all should be bigger maybe the baby a tad smaller

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REAL

Wow very real, gritty, and speaks to me. The pain here and overall exposure of the human body really shines out in this piece. The eyes tell a story and the body does too. The use of red really brings out that "PAIN" aspect of the art and makes you feel interested and sympathetic to the creation. The eyes coloring of red really draws you in to them and work
well with the overall piece, more so the size of the eyes and the pain you can see in the face especially in those cracks under the eyes. The way the head isnt quite on or the arms moving around give this character and makes you wonder what they experienced or what you've been dealing with. Normally I'd say add more of a background but the burning like effect you have here really covers a lot of the picture so it doesn't really need to be added but maybe a full red or full fire background would add to this. You are a very black/white artist with some color but I think maybe try around with backgrounds and see if they suit you. Otherwise this is great art here. Alright so here is another fine piece of art, it is intriging yet somewhat dry but i still think its the kind of unique style that I have come to enjoy from artists like yourself, There are Unlimited possibilities that you can do here and with some more creative ideas. anyways good job on this piece and future pieces. We for sure need more artists like yourself that bring out the best in pieces like this, This has a nice blend of srtistic styles and Radiates with your own style aswell, so props to you for such a unique piece.

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Nothing really but maybe a different background or play around with backgrounds.

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shittingpie responds:

Thank you so much for your kind words I really appreciate your thoughtful and constructive criticism! Thanks for your time and Yessss I might have to experiment with some backgrounds in future! Thanks agen :D

[New Year]

Entertaining

An entertaining piece here the comic style is at its best when you bring a new entry about, and this one is just as good, I do love the effort and detail you show us in this one and the end results of the story are always some crazy funny thing and all together its a great entry so nice job here indeed. ad some backround detail in this one.

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So as mentioned ad some props and such in the backround.

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[Brainstorm]

Awsome

Another awsome piece that you bring us here in the audio portal and I must say this one was pretty impressive love how this story plays out and does pretty well from start to finish, dont think you could make it better but its a good story so keep up the good work. Now the comics are really comming alive and that extra adde color is awsome.

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Really good stuff here and love that extra color you should ad color to the header also.

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[Fire]

Very nice

This was pretty nice you have another adventurous story here and the characters are as always funny and amusing with some good adventure going on and that never gets old with this one, so props to you on another beautifull art and comic series here, hope to see more soon. the ending is great on this one.

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Love the ending and love the color you should make the flame even bigger

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[Hangover]

Love your style

And here we have a nother great part of the ever growing comic series that brings us some adventure with these two crazy and wild guys always with a bit of humor and the story allwats excells to the best, so nice work here and look forward to even more from what you have to offer us in the future.

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The humor was on in this one now if there was color I think it could have been pulled off even better

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[Taurus]

Unique

This here is something a bit different in terms of how you colored your piece. The coloring and textures and details in the hair are great, lots of colors to give off a hair look, but then youve aded this cool line coloring effect that make it pop out a bit more and make it unique. I also foudn the constelation on the cheek to be a great additonal touch for this "TARUS". I love the nose piece and her overall expression seems fiting for a tarus. I would fix the one horn as it appares the hair is transparent from it when it reality it would be going around it. Your shading and blending or mixing of colors for her skin was a unique touch as well. The background is a good sky space setting with details and stars. I love this one and keep it up. Ok well to really get into this review, this was not a perfect piece, it was interesting and could be even better then it already is, I think for the mostpart this was a unique and interesting piece of art, so thruout the review i hope you will find some fun and possitive ideas. I will for sure look for your work in the future as it sparked an interest with me so it was a decent effort and it was different. It may need some small Polished points here or there but you gave it just the right Expression that it needed.

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Maybe more glow off those stars in the background, a bit of a sunburst inside each star and just fix up that horn

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artfullyorange responds:

Thank you for the review! I always welcome critique that can help me improve my art :) I'll keep in mind what you said and make a few changes. Thanks again!

[Pool]

Enetrtaining comic

Not sure howmany of these you do plan on making but uts a fun little comic series you have and probably the longest running comic series on newgrounds, but you bring some interesting situations about and make it funny, not like other comics but you ad your own twist to them. love the cannon in this one.

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As for that cannon maybe have more of a shoosh out of the cannon.

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[Staring...]

This was nice

Now this one was pretty nice I love that they are just sitting there looking the backround is nice now you know me i love some color and I could see atleast that tree in color or maybe a few tid bits here and there regardless this is a classy piece of artwork and I really enjoyed it.

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As mentioned a small bit of color would be nice.

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[Shadow Play]

Very nice work

These comics are pretty amazing with all the adventures you give them makes me wonder what will be next, and while the older ones were black and white and the newer ones in color it doesnt make them anyless or anymore you have a good timeline of old and new all good stuff. Love how the character work and drawings look really good here. love how the work gets progressvly better

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This one had more detail in the characters you should start doing that more

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