XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The future is here!]

For 13 you are good

So for thirteen you are very good and this drawing is just an example of that I think you could outline this in ink with some dark linework and really make it come out well I love all the detail and would be nice to see the detail in ink even more anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some inked line work on this would be nice

~X~

[A Crib]

Very well done

This was a very well done piece and I can already see that there will be no suggested ideas for this one because you covered it all with great charchters very nice textures deep colors and most all some very nice lighting effects that worked very well on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this piece what so ever

~X~

[Spider-man and Iron-man selfie]

Nice piece here

Here was a nice piece of art I really like that background almost seems like they are in a bathroom so in that sense there should be writing on the wall or something it just looks too clean but your character work is amazing and I love Spidey

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some gerfiti on wall or writing

~X~

[MOAR PUMPKINS!]

Oh nice

Now this was nice I really liked this it was kinda nifty a good drawing a good sketch some nice shades some color or effects could be added I do think that if you had some glow come out of the eyes it could be almost perfect but that's just an idea to think on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow from the eyes

~X~

[gunner]

Very nice

Here was a really good charchter love the different view shots and the gun it's like a good progress here I do think you could use some shine on the gun parts and even putting some shine on her hair as well that would be nice and looks like she would be more improved but overall you have some great talent on this charracter maybe adding some borders and or frames would be nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames

~X~

[Demons]

Very dream like

Now here was something realistic cause alot of us have these demons but you presented us with a dream here the colors are nice the demons are well made I do think as a small improvment you could have more glow in there eyes more red glow other then that this was a really good visual of dark dreams but anyways keep up the beautiful art work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow on the eyes

~X~

[Spectral Sorceress]

Wow

Now this is absolutely beautiful the color is nice the black and white tones are perfectly done the background is nice but maybe the background needs a sunset of sometime I do like it though but with a sunset in background it could show some lighting effects off the character but just an idea keep up the great charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light beam or sunset in the background

~X~

[Nicky Dyn]

Wow amazing

It's stuff like this that truly amazed me I use to draw stuff like this when younger but you really put in the detail and effort all the little details and styles just so much life here all this really needs is some effects like shines and sparkles some glows and it will really be something even more so just something to think about anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shines. Some sparkles and some glows

~X~

CarolinaRei7 responds:

Thank you very much!! I really lack skills when it comes to coloring do you have any tutorials or works you did or that someone else did that could help me?

[in progress]

And another part

And here was another part of the puzzle as you added more on the other but again it's a progress piece and is always nice to see the progress of these types so nice job there hope to see a finished project but anyways nice work indeed keep it. Going

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed

~X~

CarolinaRei7 responds:

Thank you very much :)