XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Livia]

Nice character

So this was a nice character, I like the flames from her hands and love the slight shine from her arms overall a decent character you have here really nice work here, some of the "JEWELRY" could have more of a shine on them, and the "FLAMES" could have more of a glow on them, but other then that this was some good character work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some glow on the flames, and have the jewlery shine and sparkle

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[Inktober Day 28]

Nice work

And once again nice work, and here we have some more nice characters, I think you have an imprint on the other side of paper or something you can see it thru this side, but the drawing or doodle is great, cant wait to see what you come up with next, anyways its been a pleasure.

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[Inktober Day 30]

Cute

This one was pretty cute and had a little cute joke you had so well executed here, the characters as always are great, the idea about time travel was a great idea so nice effort there, some backround scene would have been nice in this one, but besides that this was cool.

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[Click Me]

Surreal

Ok this is a bit surreal, but in a way you are making people want more. You used a drawing and art with sexual themes, but hid the goods unless you "CLICK ME" which isn't possible for the art portal, but maybe this is your intention at a later time or for your website? I think omitting things makes for an interesting concept but gives off a surreal image that I am liking very much. Yes you have some good details and use of color here with great body drawing and a good anime style. I would click...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it is great work, but the shoulders and arms seem a bit off from the head, so maybe try to work on that.

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Jradgex responds:

I plan on making a revamp of this piece and selling it as a poster (or shirt, not sure yet...), so I'll keep this all in mind. THANKS SO MUCH!!

[Red Twirl]

Love it

Well this was a nice element, and this was very deep in color but I think the "CANVUS" could be larger as this was a bit small and you could have a larger canvus to make it so you can ad more detail or see the detail in a sharper sense, just an idea though, but I do love the design here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So in this case my advice would be to add a muchlarger canvus or view screen as some call it, as this one you have is kind of smaller and that only limits your detail options so with a larger canvus you can show more detail and textures.

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[Inktober Day 23]

Decent

Well this was decent I like the backround with some detail there these seem like doodles and thats ok they still give off some nice drawing detail, and they all seem to tell a small story here, but anyways it has been a pleasure to review this one, I look forward to even more.

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[Inktober Day 20]

Nice

Well this was cool, I like it, I do wish these had color because they would be very nice but I understand that these are not meant to have color but regardless good scene you have going on here, maybe adding some backround would be pretty cool though, anyways keep up the good work.

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[Sylvanas]

Wow

This is some great work here. What a good design and background. It looks just like Warcraft and the armor detailing on your lady is just perfection. I love her companion here and the look it has. A sinister but helpful creature, you captured that with those glowing eyes. I do wish the eyes had more shine and lighting effects to them, but wow great job on that. I think the theme of blues here is well executed and gives of those cool tones in your work. I love the hues and coloring. I love the detailing and textures and the background is blurred but works here for your setting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would add some more lighting effects to the eyes here, just something more sinister.

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[Twirly Green]

Nice element

This was a green element love the "DEPTH" of it, the "BLACK" backround was ok but I think you could have put more effort into this with more design and patteren in the backround, anyways nice work here I would also suggest some larger canvus or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have put more effort into this with more design and patteren in the backround. and a larger canvus would be good too.

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[Inktober Day 18]

Notbad

Well notbad this was cool, I do like the shading on the characters even the backround was ok, some good character drawings here though its always nice to see good work so thanks for taking the time to share with us, I look forward to even more, anyways untill next time keep the good work comming.

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