XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bereavement Cover]

Nice and creative

So this was pretty creative work here I really like black and white style here you have some nice detail and the perspective of the view is really nice work, I think adding some borders and or frames and some touch of color would be nice, just a few Ideas I am tossing your way. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think adding some borders and or frames and some touch of color would be nice, just a few Ideas I am tossing your way.

~X~

[Beef Boy]

Love the red

I love love all the red and creepy elements to his face here, and the great lighting effects in the background really pop out at you, especially the detail of the particals in the background for added effect was a nice touch too. This was pretty cool, I do love the way the eyes pop out and the teeth sit. It is a creepy yet funny piece but could use more blood on him, those spurts you used in the corners, I'd tie those in with more blood on the boy himself.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think more blood spurts around the boy himself.

~X~

[Too Lazy for a Neck]

Wow this was nice

I really love the art style here on this one, you really braught out the style in this one, the blue "TEXTURE" is really nice and deep also the blue color tone is not so bad either, I like the effort here really nice and artistic style you have here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wish the whole piece was larger in canvus size.

~X~

[Katamari on Roids]

Impressive

This one had all sorts of design on it, I love the "RANDOM" about all this I think the only suggestion of improvment I could offer with this one is that by making a lerger canvus of the art piece then you can have more details and more focus points aswell, so make a lerger canvus with more of that nifty detail. but anyways nice work here a good character and random detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The canvus could be larger on this, and even more random details all around.

~X~

[Man at Coffeehouse]

This was simple

And so this was kind of simple the art style is very simple but I could see you improving onto this a little better more smoothed out art more formulated character more shades and more detail more effort overall but this was notbad work you have here just needs more to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you improving onto this a little better more smoothed out art more formulated character more shades and more detail more effort overall

~X~

[Polaroid Camera]

This is interesting

Well this here you have here some nice idea here, you seem to be going for an abstract idea with a common drawing and you did that very well here. The thing I would do here is add some kind of background scene, maybe just some lines or shepes or bursts of lights going all over from the flash, as that will make this feel more complete, maybe even those flowers on the picture to tie it all together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add a background, maybe a backdrop scene

~X~

[Lego Killing Joke]

Cool idea

So first off I have to say is that this was a cool idea I like the art style you have here, the color is very "VIBRANT" and you really do bring things out and you have a sort of comic here and they look so much like lego guys so this was pretty cool, dont see any need for improving on anything except make more of this.

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dont see any need for improving on anything except make more of this.

~X~

[Flapjack failed contest entry]

Colorfull

This was good and colorfull I like how you really filled the whole piece here it has lots of things going out and very good in detail nice visual, I almost feel the "CANVUS" should be larger because then you could ad much more but anyways nice work you have here, keep up the colorfull work and detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvus would be pretty cool for more of the detail and more visuals.

~X~

[Lilith and Lili]

Nice

This was cool this was cute the baby holding the finger was notbad and the deep red hair was nice, a very well designed character you have here, I like the texture even, the "BACKROUND" is lacking just maybe a prop or two, anyways nice work you have here hope to see more of your work sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props would be perfect for the backround.

~X~

[GuessWhoImproved!Clock]

Cool

So this was pretty cool I like the skull and the black backround was perfect, I think if you put a burst of light around the skull it would glare off the skull with a nice visual, but besides that this was a pretty good drawing and design, so nice detail here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you put a burst of light around the skull it would glare off the skull with a nice visual

~X~

CorpseGrinderClock responds:

I'll get right on that nine years ago