XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flagship is Approaching Fast]

Wow nice

Now this was pretty nice I like the ship I think it should have some blinking lights on top of it but overall this was pretty good stuff I think you have done an outstanding job here with a very sleek design very smooth and awsome work indeed so nice job indeed

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[Final Boss: Destructive Flood]

Very nice

This was really cool I like what you have done here the Sprite work is pretty amazing the visuals are amazing and the small animation on these are even better it's like I'm playing those old games indeed so nice job here and keep making more as these are pretty amazing

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Not really anything it's solid work

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[Colors! 3D RPG Mockup]

These are pretty good

I like the animation on the colors and lights and the design was pretty good nice old Sprite visuals very nice work here I like the detail and I like the visual here very good stuff and pretty solid so keep making stuff like this it's pretty amazing work and hope to see more

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No changes these are pretty solid

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[Giant enemy crab wannabe]

I like it

This would go perfectly in some crazy game but as for the art itself you have out done yourself it's a giant crab for sure I think more shine would be nice like on the end of it's claws but anyways good giant crab here some nice work indeed you are talented

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small extra shine

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[General Gray's Obsession]

Very nice

This was really intense I love the design on this you really added some shine and sparkle to this so nice job there and the background element was pretty intense too you do some good work on these types so very nice effort here I for want to see more soon

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I would ad more sparkle

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[moon and dragon]

Notbad

I love dragons so this one caught my eye. You have story here and it is interesting. I think the body the dragon has positioned is good and this paper style you went for is great, but I wish you added some color in this. A deep purple or red to the dragon would make it pop and shine. I think some effects too would bring out the danger too. I love tho. I think you are good at recreating dragons for sure :)

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Just add some coloring here and you will have a 10/10 artwork

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[Aggresive Competitive Gaming Mickey]

haha

Well it makes sense, but nice shades on mickey, I do think this one needs some backround props or detail just some small things in the distant or some design, I am glad this is not just the normal stuff everyone brings to the portal, You bring a different element to the table and its unique and interesting. So with all that said this was pretty intersting, I like some of the ideas in here, I like the detail and art style the effort really did comeout, and I was generally pleased, keep up the decent art work. I do look forward to more of your style soon. So just keep doing what you do here is fine and its all a good pleasure, just to review your works here now and then.

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I do think this one needs some backround props or detail just some small things in the distant or some design

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[Magical Boy]

Love this

I love the Final Fantasy series, so seeing some pixel art in that series is always a joy. I love the pixel work and colors you chose to use. You went with an additional warm tones inside the regular coloring for a Black Mage. I wish you made a background setting that fits with this. I love it as is but really could use a good background or battle scene.

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Nothing really, maybe a background or battle scene like him attacking something.

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[Double 00 Wilde]

Cool

Some added color would be cool maybe just parts of it could be colored like the gun or glasses or even a border, So what I got from this art piece was that it was ok, could use some more effort and, could probably use some improvments here and there, but otherwise its a pretty decent piece I thought and very symbolic aswell as appropriately defined only in a way you can bring forward, Now keep up that effort in other projects, I look forward to more of that. but also want to take this time and say thank you for all the effort and energy you put forward in this and future stuff, it was apleasure to review your work.

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color would be cool maybe just parts of it could be colored like the gun or glasses or even a border

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[Spotlight - Hind To Shine]

ok then

This one was out there, not bad, the drawing style itself was good, good use of lines, good coloring, good overall picture. I would try to make the background different or at least add some textures and lighting in there. And that text is really not fitting with your art, I would try some text that is actually part of the Skylanders series, I am sure there are fonts out there to download.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
New background with textures, add some lighting, change the text

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OddyMcStrange responds:

This pic was following the same theme as others I did before this one. The text is supposed to be a play on the Skylander's catchphrase associated with character's pose. The background is based on how the Skylander character cards looked, which basically had a color scheme based on their element and a spotlight floor. There's really nothing to improve on, as this is what I was going for.