XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ed Ed & Eddy The Holy One]

Nifty

So this was nifty the sun or light beam could have more of a glow about it, So to end this review I thought I would say that this was pretty decent piece, could be improved in a few areas but thats discussed more in improvments, but regardless this was pretty good I thought, and look forward to more of your art-works and hope to see much more pieces from you as they are pretty impressive. I really enjoyed your work here today and hope you keep making us some beautiful pieces such as this one, And Ill be on the look out for even more from you, so as I end this review keep it real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the sun or light beam could have more of a glow about it

~X~

[assault]

Different

This was a cool I can see the struggle of the characters here and the use of detail is wonderful. You have lots of elements going on but you don't lose yourself or the theme in this piece. I do I wish it had some more vibrant colors but you were going for something darker to fit the theme here of assault, which is a very dark theme. It doesn't need much improvment since you have a cool different style here anyways nice job on this and hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more colors please in this that a bit brighter, maybe some deep reds.

~X~

[BEHEMOTH LOGO HORSENWELLESIZED]

Nice

Now this was cool kind of like a larger chicken or something, I feel the backround could be more colored or textured but regardless this was cool, This style was pretty interesting, Infact I would call it pretty Stellar you bring some Blending But at times it could be better with a few more details and effort, But I can see you are Dedicated to some Refreshing and Endless energy and effort, this was a Large-Hearted piece, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. because they will help ofcourse and bring some better resluts all around. But anyways nice work you have here, and I for one lok forward to even more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I feel the backround could be more colored or textured

~X~

[Heart Kirby]

Pretty

What a pretty image you have here for V day. I love the sparkles like items flowing from the heart to Kirby. The joy you have put on Kiby's face too was excellent to see. I think the coloring was good and you have good blending from image to colors. You can tell this is the pink lil kirbs so bravo on capturing the likeness with a bit of heart and soul. I love the heart itself, it has some neat transparent aspects and solid blending of pinks/reds together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see more of a background here, just something other than the solid grey.

~X~

[Nightfury and Lightfury]

Beautifull dragons

I have to say the dragons together was perfect the light from the moon was amazing, I would suggest some dimmer and brighter stars shinning. You have shown some good Insight into this world, You see a lot of stuff in the art portal but its always nice to see stuff like this as its different and unique in its own way. I also like the Ambition here it was very interesting. And then we come to find such a piece of art and or design like this and then it amazes me of how I have not seen everything the art portal has yet to offer, but you have shown me this is not true and bring us something cool and nifty as this entry here so it was a pleasure for sure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some dimmer and brighter stars shinning, maybe even some more lighting from the moon.

~X~

[Emi Lingerie]

wow beautiful lines

So with that said, I fount this art piece very interesting, Blending some good ideas here show off well, had abit of artistic value was showing the effort and time you put into this, and hope to see more stuff like this from you, your style is great so keep up the awsome art work. This is Sinisterly very well done and yearns some good critique and praise, its a Gnarly and stylistic piece, So keep up the creative mind. You have a Stellar piece of art here. And honestly this was a pleasure to see in the art portal. Very good character work here, love the shine in the hair even.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind even more shine.

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[Vikings of the Interstate: Page 04 Amish]

Very cool here

This was pretty cool I love the two worlds comming in together old and new your art style is smooth and fresh and it all seems to work well, very beautifull style and lines here, the element of both worlds is just amazing I really like what you have started here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing here with this one.

~X~

[Hot sweaty mess]

Really amazing

Now this was really amazing work you have some nice ideas and the small animation on this seemed to come out well with a breath of fresh air the lighting effects was even pretty good, I was really impressed with the detail and freshness of this so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest having the light flicker with animation just a bit.

~X~

DocJoshimitsu responds:

Thanks man! Yea I actually had the light flickering at first but I found it too distracting. I tryed making something thats relaxing to look at and having the whole screen flashing (even if its very suttle) was just too much.

[Paint practice]

Very artistic

amazing, This was kind of Majestic and you bring some Diverse visuals, Great stuff here and nice style of art work here, its these kinds of pieces that really draw my attention and glad I came across this one, very nice indeed. This was a good art piece, these types can be hard to review and stuff but have suggested a few ideas to improve on it, and if not just keep trying new stuff and see what works, but with that said this was pretty good I thought. so just keep up what you do because its pretty good stuff, And Enjoy reviewing stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wow I must say this was nifty and a good desgin you have here I would ad some shine on the glass just a bit more.

~X~

gatekid3 responds:

Thank you and noted.

[busty glynda goodwitch 2]

Alurring

And here we have another cute and alurring piece of art that teases you with her expression and direction you do very nice visual of the female clothing so nice job there I like the work and like the effort here I wouldn't mind more sparkle off the leggings

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little shine comming off the leggings

~X~