XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gravity Falls Fanwork]

Notbad

I think this one isnt' too bad, I am just not that familiar with this series or cartoon. I do like the vector like background at the top, but I don't understand the background they are standing on, what is going on here? I am not too sure, the lighting here is almost a bit too bright, you lost some colors and lines over brighting them and washing them out in light. I would tone that down next time and try to use more sunburst and less bright beams that ends up washing the characters out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add less brightness to the characters, try different lighting effects as they seem washed out

~X~

JessxJess responds:

That's fair, I appreciate the honesty! There's defiantly things to work on xD The feet always bothered me, but I try not to go back to old works and change them, I just try similar things in new works! I appreciate the feedback! I would recommend watching Gravity Falls, its a great show.

[Triforce!]

nice

A nice character here love those eyes and good expression on the face too, I think you could have had the armour "SHINE" and "SPARKLE" with some star sparkles or something just an idea and opinion ofcourse, but overall a great character here, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the armour.

~X~

[The Gift]

ethereal

Well this gives off that ethereal feeling and element for sure, I do love the way the girl looks up as if she is looking to god or heavens or something bigger than her. I love the braid in her hair off to the side and the shading you used with blacks and whites works really well here. I do like the subtle background with bursts of speckles in the black background as if she is beaming or full of magic. I do think this could use coloring, or a version in color, just to see what you can do there, as I always love to see things in different perspectives.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try doing this with some colors next time but good job overall

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[girls waiting in the beach]

This was nice

So I like the character work for sure but have to say that sunlight was nice I think you should have more sunlight come down like a beam on the girls assets, but anyways nice work here it was a pleasure to review this and more of your work you are very talented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sun beam.

~X~

[Female Portrait]

Realistic

Wow this is just beautiful and so realistic. I am in aw of how much detailed you have placed into this, it almost looks like a real image or perhaps a 3D piece of art. I love the amount of shading and textures and coloring you have used here in this piece, it truely stands out here with those eyes and the nails just really work. I love the bursts of different colors in the background used and blurred off to give your focus on this main character. The hair too is a shining star in your piece and I do hope to see more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to improve on, I would not change anything

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[Sexy Girls from Ooo]

Nice

I like this I especily love the "VIBRANT" colors of the outfits and the backround work is just so amazing so nice job there the character work is amazing as always, and overall just a beautiful and amazing art piece you have here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would just say make more stuff with these vibrant colors.

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[Fionna: love for the bubblegum]

Pretty nifty

So this design of the character is really nice work you have here love the lines and smooth curves you really bring out the nice style here, I really like how the character comes alive and its your talent that brings that alive so nice job indeed, look forward to even more.

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[Ranamon: I can be sexy too]

Nice line work

So very nice linework you have here this was pretty solid stuff, I really like the way this has come about you bring a character to life those lines are smooth and make up the whole piece love the smooth curves even, very unique and quality design here.

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[The pleasure of freedom]

Nice work

Just love your expressions on there faces this was cool and I like this style you have here, very colorfull and well made of the characters the crown was cool you should make the crown sparkle and or shine, anyways nice work here you have some nice talent and glad you showing it off.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should make the crown sparkle and or shine

~X~