XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brooke - Casual encounter]

Subtle and beautifull

So this was a subtle and beautiful piece I love the "DUCKS" here and its pretty nice the character is really nice you have some great colortones and shines just well forming of everything, onlything I would suggest would be some light backround detail and or color like a scenery of some type. anwyays nice work.

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onlything I would suggest would be some light backround detail and or color like a scenery of some type

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MLeth responds:

Thank you!
Yeah I'd prefer to have a background on all my pieces but this was made last summer when I was doing a colored piece every day which limited my ability to make backgrounds for each piece hoho

[Crash the Titan]

Very nice work

Now this was a cool charchter a good fresh use of vibrant color and you have a great action scene I would throw in some more lighting effects here and there but overall this was really good work some nice quality here and stylish so keep up the good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine and sparkle and even glow effects

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[Life of the Arty Party]

Nice

This was pretty cool I like the character work here some slight background and possibly a larger canvus would be nice and I would even go with some shine and sparkle on the glasses just a few tips to improve on other then that this was pretty cool work I really like your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine effects and a larger canvus

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[The struggles of a toothbrush]

That was cute

So that was kind of cute I like the comic style feel here and all the frames and such made it fun and entertaining a good comic strip you have here very good detail and some nice well executed jokes that gave me a fee laughs so nice job indeed on this one I liked it and this was pretty solid work

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You should make a comic series out of this

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

hahahaahaha Thank you very much :D !!!!

[Hashiru Miko]

Finished product

Cool this was the finished product and looks good even like the light coloring on it I still think adding some background to this would be pretty cool and make it a better overall piece the character is really good though and look forward to much more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

I made this for the character design challenge on facebook :P but you are right i have to add some background thank you so much for your comments!! :D

[Experimentation]

Another nice piece here

So you have some good creative stuff here I like the group of charchters but you could really put more detail and effort in the background as it needed it just a little more but anyways nice work here just ad to the background other then that this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work

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[Transformation]

Nice

This is kind of like a zombie comming at you well that what I got from it but it was pretty good nice action scene you have here I like pose and the background was filled so that was pretty nice work there anyways good charchter good work very nice stuff

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Not really anything with this one

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[Old to new]

Nice idea

This was a good idea I like the old and new the new looks really good and you have a good possibility on them so nice job there and a nice element of things on this there could still be some background work and detail and some props anyways good job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work ofcourse

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[The son and The nightmare]

Really nice

This was cool I like the character work here and the birds and flame was a nice touch of things and you really have a talent at this with some more designs might even be a good tip and such maybe have the flames glowing or something but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the flame and even bird

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[Remember]

Very nice

So I like this and have to say your charchter work is well done and you have really improved from 2015 to now and beyond as I review your work I can see the improvments but as for a tip on this one I could see you adding some background detail and design in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work maybe some design even

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