XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark Mischief]

Nice and dark

This was cool it's a nice and dark look but I think the candles you had up should spread out more light in a radiant way with some glowing and such so would show off a little more light on ground and such it's just a suggestion to think about and throw your way

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra lighting to show more of ground

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[Scouter]

Nice pose here

So this was cool and this was a nice pose I like the pose but it does look odd maybe have something under his leg or something but besides all that this was pretty good work and a nice style of character with some nice detail anyways hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something under his kicking foot

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[komi]

Same characters

So these are the same characters that we're in another piece and you edited the background I take it would have been nice if the characters limbs were different though that's the onlything I think should be different but other then that this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some different poses would be nice

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[the fraternal twins]

Awesome charracter work

So this was really cool and I like the character work in this one and you added some nice color even that was a good touch to this the characters look slightly flat maybe there's a way to give more emotion in the faces and such to change the Flatt look

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More emotion in the characters would be nice

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[Imp Dog?]

A very nice drawing

So this was pretty cool I like the drawing and has some nice detail seems like you could fill in the background more and ad some sparkle stuff like some effects from Photoshop but other then that this was pretty cool and a nice work of art here very nice indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some Photoshop detail and effects would be really nice

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[Winged Wrath]

Really nice

This was cool I really like the drawing seems like this could be something you could take into Photoshop and ad some effects on it with lighting and sharper colors and such things as that that's the stuff that could bring out some nice effects on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some Photoshop elements would really be nice on this

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[my best picture yet]

Very nice

This was pretty cool and I like the style on this one a good details background and a good charchter love the fine detail that sun should have more lighting beaming down and hitting the trees and grass maybe even the character but you do some good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sunlight and such elements

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[Work in progress]

Cool

Wow I have to say this was really cool and I love all the little detail like the designs on the legs and such you do need some sort of a background though as this one was lacking some background and details maybe even some color back there but does need something more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background works and efforts

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[Yin yang!]

Wow this was nifty

I like this. It was kind of nifty and you have a good idea here the characters look a little stiff though and think you should make them with more flexing of the limbs in a natural way and more emotion on the face just an idea to suggest though untill then nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More emotion in the faces and more flex of the limbs make them more life like

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[Human Robot]

Cool

So this was pretty cool and it is like a human robot I like the stitches and robot parts it's the background that I was not too fond of if your gonna have a dark backround maybe ad some lighting effects or even a backdrop scene like a city or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background or backdrop scene

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