XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hero and pet]

Nice color

This was cool I like the color use here as you have alot of it and the character you have here was notbad but could have more structured design to him and make him more of a focus rather then all the color and such but overall this was cool hope to see more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved polish and structure on the character

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[Beautiful Realistic Eye!]

Nice

Well a good eye you have here I do wish it was a bit larger and had more of the canvus filled maybe even adding borders and frames I would even go with some color even on this it's a beautiful drawing and well-done piece you have here so keep making good drawings

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more filling of the canvus and some borders and frames

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["Try Me" - MAY COTM]

Beautiful piece

Now this this is a beautiful piece of art very nice color and some even better lighting effects and such I think you could have had more light comming down on the dragon itself but for the most part this was some brilliant work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting beam comming down

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[Alfie and Sophia]

This was cute

So this was pretty cute and I like the style I love the subtle look on this actually reminds me of the old kid books and you draw it so well so this was nice and a good piece very artistic and a nice visual here so keep up the good work I look forward more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe an outter shell border

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[some roses here and there]

Really beautiful

Wow I must say these are beautiful you have some real talent and it shows off well in the paint and such a beautiful painting style at that I like the detail I do however wish it had more background to it though maybe some design or props and such would be pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props and design in the background

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[House with some trees :?]

Nice painting

So this was a really nice painting you have here I love the view shot of it all was pretty cool and the visual was just great would have liked for you to bring some sunlight or a Sunbeam into it but other then that this was pretty cool nice painting here hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sun beam or more sunlight

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[The Angels of Death]

Very nice

This was cool I like this the character design is pretty good the black background could have some depth and some scene in the background I would even ad some glowing red eyes to the characters but overall this was pretty cool design here very nice indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small effects and background detail

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DovahFeyn responds:

Thank you very much for all your comments. Yeah areas I'm working on at the moment are effects and trying to give my characters more form and depth.

[Sonic and the Black Knight]

Wow very nice

So this was cool very nice work I like the sword and the crown pieces on the heads I think you could ad a nice effects like a shine or something on the sword and the crown pieces some sparkle would be cool too anyways nice work hope to see more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle

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[Joryoku]

Nice dragon

This was pretty cool I like the dragon and we'll detailed love the design on it very nice skintone a good dragon design here I think you could ad some type of backround here like a Forrest of trees or something but some form of scenery would be nice anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work

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[Clash of the Timezones]

Nice scene

This was cool and a nice scene here I think more lighting effects on the gun fire would be pretty cool more effects and more props in the background like buildings and such in the background just an idea or two for the background anyways nice work hope you make more art soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More background more props and scene

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