XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Apple XXVII: Effervescent Apple]

Cool another apple

So here was another cool apple very deep in design, love the texture and design of it all, the backround was pretty basic, so its the backround that could use some deth some texture some more detail, so thats something to think about, but overall this was a decent art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround was pretty basic, so its the backround that could use some deth some texture some more detail

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["Am I pretty yet?"]

Awsome

So this was cool, I like the face expression here, I like the "EYE" you should have more of a "GLARE" on the eye maybe even a sparkle but regardless of all that this was actually pretty impressive design and love the skin tone even, anyways hope you make more like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should have more of a glare on the eye maybe even a sparkle

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[Render BoB omb Super Mario]

Very slick design

So here you have a very slick design I love the "SHINE" to this its just very intense you should think about adding more sparkle to this even, like a glaring sparkle to it, maybe some backround props even, but anyways nice job indeed, very good 3d style of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more shine and some sparkle and some added props.

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[The Apple XIX: Apple Constellation]

apple

So its cool I like the apple theme you have going on here and seems like you have went apple crazy since most of your art is "APPLE" based and such but other then that this was pretty cool and I like this one as it shows the basics and a good little idea you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in colors and depth would be nice.

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[Whatever It is...]

Interesting piece

This was pretty cool the depth of detail was pretty intense and so much deep shading so you have really gone out of your way on this one so nice job indeed on a beautiful piece I feel all you need on this piece is some background depth to it but overall it was pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background depth and detail

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[The sound of silence]

Very nice

This was cool and was very nice I love the blue theme going on here that light comming down on the character could have more of a beam and more flow to it but besides that this was pretty cool and love all the added detail you put on this so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow and shine on the light beam

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[Fairy Dust]

Really nice

This was cool and some really nice charchter work I like the style here love the smooth charchter work and your shading is well done I don't think you need to do anything more with this one but maybe adding more depth to the background anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above

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[Experiment]

Very nice

So this was very cool I like the background and the top view of this was really nice I think you did pretty awesome with the experiment and the background is deep in detail the characters are really nice work too so nice job here and hope you make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Honestly this was a beautiful piece

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[Birthday gift for user from DA]

Very cool

This was cool and I really like the style here I think some extra added shine and sparkle on some of the edges and glass points of the ships maybe even characters would be a huge plus on this, but overall this was pretty good work and some really nice detail added, anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some sparkle and shine.

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