XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Le work in progress]

This was cool

I like this it was kind of cool with the structure and poses the background was really bland though the structure was really good and well detailed I like the style but you need to have more background detail and more texture in the background just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work is needed

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[Moon]

Nice earth and moon

This was cool a nice moon and earth I like the stars it was cool you should put in some texture and more effects of this like lighting maybe dim and brighter stars and such so it was kinda good but could be better with some more effects added anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some effects and lighting details

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[Geralt of Rivia - Witcher 3]

Wow

Now this was pretty interesting and a good design I love the red and live the dark clouds of the background the red could have more of a shine and a even a sparkle to it just an idea I'm throwing out at you so nice job here I like it keep up the good work


~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle

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[Madboi]

Cool charchter

So this was a cool charchter I like the large ear and the odd shape of this charracter but it was pretty cool and random aswell so nice job on this piece here good unique charchter and good design here so overall a nice creative design here of a fantastic charchter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really nothing with this piece

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[Sleepover]

Ok cool

This was cool I like poses here and you really do some nice shading and really make this come out better so nice job on this piece I like the work I like the style and you have some good charchter work here so nice job on this one you should make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything with this one

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[All Hail the Almighty Pumpkin]

Nice

This was cool I like this this was kind of cool I like the lighting in background that could have more of an effect on it like some glow or more glow to it but besides that this was cool and a nice charchter design so I've all a good piece you have here

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[The Apple X: Pixel Apples]

Nice apples

So this was pretty cool lots of apples here and some nice shine in pixel form ofcourse, the backround was basic and simple, the whole piece was ok but seemed a bit simple but I do like the idea and effort in this maybe adding some borders and frames, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above.

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[The Apple XXVII: Effervescent Apple]

Cool another apple

So here was another cool apple very deep in design, love the texture and design of it all, the backround was pretty basic, so its the backround that could use some deth some texture some more detail, so thats something to think about, but overall this was a decent art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround was pretty basic, so its the backround that could use some deth some texture some more detail

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["Am I pretty yet?"]

Awsome

So this was cool, I like the face expression here, I like the "EYE" you should have more of a "GLARE" on the eye maybe even a sparkle but regardless of all that this was actually pretty impressive design and love the skin tone even, anyways hope you make more like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should have more of a glare on the eye maybe even a sparkle

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[Render BoB omb Super Mario]

Very slick design

So here you have a very slick design I love the "SHINE" to this its just very intense you should think about adding more sparkle to this even, like a glaring sparkle to it, maybe some backround props even, but anyways nice job indeed, very good 3d style of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more shine and some sparkle and some added props.

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