XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Char Beacon]

Wow nice

And here was another amazing piece the beacon is awesome and very deep detail you have impressed me with some very deep detail and beautiful design the lighting I thaught could have more of a radiant area of lightning surrounding the area but just my opinion

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more area light with lighting

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[A Christmas Carol in pixels]

Holiday pixel

So a holiday pixel was cool I like the idea was hard to visualize it all but what I do know is that this was sharp and clean sprie work you have some amazing talent to make sprites and pixels so nice job on this piece very good looking sprites as always

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Keep making amazing sprites and pixels

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[Big Hero 6 Welcome to DIE!]

Nice visual

More great Sprite work we really don't have much dominant Sprite artists as much as maybe 10 years ago so it's nice to see you make the sprites shine with coolness a six support player thing would be really cool anyways nice work here once again keep making great Sprite stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Keep making great Sprite stuff

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[Moosebox fanart]

Really nice

So this was cool I really like the top view of this and it's a pretty good action scene going on here the beams and such are cool I do with there could be some added glow and brighter beams to them but besides that this was pretty good anyways keep up the cool game making

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow more brightness on beams

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[Trespassers will bee stung]

Nice

So this was something a little different and I like the action scene you have here a nice piece indeed on this one love the running charchter I think the background bees should be more angry and in full force or something that would be cool I like your work here very good detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More action in the action scene

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[Jar of Cookies (and the Mighty Shrew)]

Wow I love it

Now here is another great piece and I love it so nice work here the opening of the jar allows for light I think you should have more light beam come down and have some of the cookies sparkle because after all the cookies are like gold but anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Amazing detail maybe adding sparkle on the cookies and or a beam of light

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[Ashenvale Improvisation]

Intense so this was pretty intense

A very intense piece here you have some visual beautiful points here and it's very amazing like staring into a whole new world of beautiful elements so props to you for a job well done and such an awesome piece here I like the style here and hope to see more of this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Amazing work this style should be framed like a gallery piece

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[Animation test - Breakfast on Charon]

Animation is good

So the first one where he is just there on left is really good but his legs need a tad bit more animation and the second one on the right is really good besides that this whole piece was nice and the animation was pretty solid on both so nice job on this one make more of these

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added animation wouldn't hurt

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[Doom City (with painting video)]

Very intense

Now this was something really intense the view shot from bottom and going upwards is just a beautiful piece so nice job here looks like flames are rising and I think with that view shot you should have a light beam comming down from sky hitting parts of building but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A light beam or source from the sky

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[Breakfast on Charon game concept 1]

Wow

Now this is something really well done a very intense piece here the texture alone is very impressive with all the detail and texture you really gone out of your way and created some fantastic character a hungry one at that very nice work here indeed so nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Honestly nothing you have outdone yourself here

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