XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Moosebox fanart]

Really nice

So this was cool I really like the top view of this and it's a pretty good action scene going on here the beams and such are cool I do with there could be some added glow and brighter beams to them but besides that this was pretty good anyways keep up the cool game making

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow more brightness on beams

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[Trespassers will bee stung]

Nice

So this was something a little different and I like the action scene you have here a nice piece indeed on this one love the running charchter I think the background bees should be more angry and in full force or something that would be cool I like your work here very good detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More action in the action scene

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[Jar of Cookies (and the Mighty Shrew)]

Wow I love it

Now here is another great piece and I love it so nice work here the opening of the jar allows for light I think you should have more light beam come down and have some of the cookies sparkle because after all the cookies are like gold but anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Amazing detail maybe adding sparkle on the cookies and or a beam of light

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[Ashenvale Improvisation]

Intense so this was pretty intense

A very intense piece here you have some visual beautiful points here and it's very amazing like staring into a whole new world of beautiful elements so props to you for a job well done and such an awesome piece here I like the style here and hope to see more of this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Amazing work this style should be framed like a gallery piece

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[Animation test - Breakfast on Charon]

Animation is good

So the first one where he is just there on left is really good but his legs need a tad bit more animation and the second one on the right is really good besides that this whole piece was nice and the animation was pretty solid on both so nice job on this one make more of these

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added animation wouldn't hurt

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[Doom City (with painting video)]

Very intense

Now this was something really intense the view shot from bottom and going upwards is just a beautiful piece so nice job here looks like flames are rising and I think with that view shot you should have a light beam comming down from sky hitting parts of building but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A light beam or source from the sky

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[Breakfast on Charon game concept 1]

Wow

Now this is something really well done a very intense piece here the texture alone is very impressive with all the detail and texture you really gone out of your way and created some fantastic character a hungry one at that very nice work here indeed so nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Honestly nothing you have outdone yourself here

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[Redwhisker Swordshrew]

Very nice piece

And here was a very nice piece of artwork love the detail of this love this as you have a polished charchter here and just fantastic piece you have here here even the background was pretty impressive so nice job indeed here make more great stuff soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very nice work here just make more beautiful stuff

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[Bullet Smash Hell Crossover]

Wow nice job

Now this was a nice job you have here all the colors and beams and even all the Bsss that was pretty cool this was another one that didn't need any changes at all it's very impressive work well detailed and needs no changes what so ever so props to you on a fine job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome job here fine detail and no major changes or edits needed

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[Nintendo Hard way]

Very nice

This was cool I like what you have here and the different animation here didn't know you can do that much animation on an art piece your works shows nice detail and really nothing to improvments here as these are pretty impressive already so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really nothing with these pieces

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