XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Edgar Allen Poe (Request)]

Cool

So this was a cool portrait you really do have a nice piece here I do enjoy the black and white style here and love the shading on this you have done a fantastic job on this one I do think if you ad some type of portrait frames and borders might make it more like a gallery piece but overall this is a cool piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders would be cool

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[Sin and Punishment Star Successor Arcade Mockup]

Really cool

Now this was really cool a giant turtle comming at you with all sorts of fire power that's pretty intense I think the tips of the spikes on his back should have more shine maybe even just a sparkle at the tips would be cool too and more fire shooting would also be another nice touch but anyways nice work here indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small shines and sparkles but maybe not needed

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[Phyrnnas V day Revolution]

Cool

There's lots of blue in this piece I think you should have some shine on some points to change up the accent of the colors a bit but honestly this is another nice piece I really like the work you have here and you have some brilliant art style here so anyways just ad some sparkle to some points keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shine points

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[Vanguard There She Is Vs. Sonic]

Nice mock up

So these are always cool I like the background even on this the one charchter in the background was kind of random and funny but all together this is a pretty good set up here the art is well done and very swell very subtle art but still looks pretty good for what it is. It's a nice piece overall I like it regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes just make more

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[Goat]

Goat

Well that was cool I like it I think it's still too dark and doesn't show off the details it should I like the lines but seems there could be some smoother elements and not so dark in it also seems unfinished or something but anyways nice work here hope you make more of your great designs for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more

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[NASA Pinup]

Nice piece

So this was anotger nice piece I like this one I like the black and white background with a colored in pin up in front that was pretty good of an idea there seems like there should be more strs in the background some brighter and some dimmer just an idea maybe even some ship flying around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light up stars and maybe a ship in background

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[Lezbian Robot Apocalypse]

Nice

So this was cool I like this the character work alone was pretty awesome and well detailed I like the texture and you gave them some really nice poses even the fire or flames or explosion in the background was really intense and made for a really nice piece but anyways good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe put this up in a frame or fancy border

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[Breaking Bad - Train Robbery T]

Cool

So I am a big fan of breaking bad and I remember that episode trying to figure out how this relates to it but besides that you did do a fantastic job on the art here the glass could use some shine and sparkle since it's out in the sun and such but I have to say it was a good idea you have here anyways good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle off the rim of the glass

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[MS INCREDIBOOTY]

Very nice

And here is another great character with your fresh lines and smooth color she has a nice and alluring look this was a great character but I do think adding some more detail in the background like to you can go a few ways with maybe some design or pattern maybe some backdrop scene or even just props in the distance

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few background ideas

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[Judy Booty]

Cool

So this was another cool pin up all of your pin up styles have a fresh and smooth look to them I do however think that on this particular piece she needs some shine on her legs and back side but that's just an opinion of advice honestly it's pretty good even without the shine so nice work here indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine on legs

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