XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober day.2]

Nice drawing

So this was cool I like the drawing here or sketch not sure but the lines were pretty decent I like the detail she is a bit too heavy but that may be the intent now all this needs is some color and maybe some props in the background but besides all that I was impressed with this piece so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work would be nice

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[Weeb]

Cute and adorable

So this one was cute and adorable I like the cuteness in her expression and the silly pose all was pretty good a nice art piece I think the onlything I would ad to this piece might be some background detail and effects but other then that this was decent work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work could be added

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[Ali]

Very beautiful

This was a very beautiful portrait and painting I think all this really needs is some frame like a fancy one with reflection of the main focus but in all honesty you have an amazing piece of artwork here so keep it up and keep making beautiful portrait styles

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some type of border or frame would suffice

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[With You.]

Amazing

So this was pretty amazing the darkness of it all seems to come alive with the small lighting from the East but I'm thinking have more lighting reflect off there dark clothing and let some light reflect some color anyways just an idea to think about I like it regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved lighting effects

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[Inktober: Samus]

Very intense

So this was cool I like the style here and you have some intense and deep shades on this one I have to say. The shading alone is so beautiful not even sure how to describe it but what I do know is that it's a beautiful piece here so nice artwork keep making great stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Keep making great stuff

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[Manny vs. Mayweather]

Very nice work

So this was cool and makes sense about that fight the graphics as smooth as ever and you pushed some nice ideas the shinyness shines through and I like that you put out real events into Sprite and even pixel work anyways nice work indeed keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes here it's just right and is in no need for any changes

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

I'm concern that the body proportion can be a little odd. I dunno if I will make a remake for this pic in the future.

[Salad Fingers Episode 2 in a nutshell]

Wow nice

So this was pretty cool I like all the different view screens of this and would make the perfect Sprite game or even a Sprite web comic and that's something I could see you turning this into but the graphics we're pretty cool and you have some nice ideas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it into a webcomic

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[Alorian Guard on the Rack]

Very nice

So this was cool I really like this the animation was really cool and the color was amazing the animation was pretty smooth the expression on her face was perfect so as for any improvements I think you have done well and this doesn't warrant any changes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above no changes needed

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PaddleTone responds:

Thanks, dude. Sorry for the late reply, but it means alot to me!

[Senya Contest: Senya's Fun Ride]

Haha nice

So this was kind of adorable and cute I love the bright and vibrant color use here the animation makes this such a better piece and the drawings are just fabulously done well so anyways nice work here very good style and submitted artwork here until the next time keep making great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I didn't find anything really to need any changes here

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PaddleTone responds:

Appreciated! The colors were definitely one of my favorite parts of this piece!

[Senya Spankmation]

Very nice

This was a good one and glad I saw the color one finally love the shine you added I think adding some sparkles on top of that shine would be cool anyways nice job on the color version no changes other then some added sparkle would be cool anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle

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PaddleTone responds:

Heh, yeah. Hindsight's 20-20, but I can see where I should've added some extra detail now.