XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chloe the rabbit (Commission)]

Cute

So this was a cute charchter you have here with some very smooth color on it and a nice and adorable expression on the face I think those rings or jewelry in the ears should have a sparkle and or shine on them also the background could use more detail or something other then the black background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added background detail and some sparkle on jewelry

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[icon voting]

The top

I say the top one is pretty good and I like it because the bottom one seems too blurred out but for the most part this was notbad and I do like the black and white style in this case the black and grey lol but regardless this is some amazing work good drawing and color as well so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The top

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[Biography of Hyrule Rise of Ganon]

Very nice

So this was cool I love the zelda games and the sprites you have here are just very sharp and crisp very good quality here the visual is just sharp I even like that little sparkle on links sword would love more sparkles like that on other points but it is what it is so very nice work indeed hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one

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[What if Undertale is on Cartoon Network?]

Very nice

So I was more of an 80s-late 90s with cartoons but have to say that this was a nice design you have here some cool artwork and does bring back some nice memories but anyways another great art piece you have here this was pretty cool and just a beautiful piece of art you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one it's a beautiful design and creation

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[Newgrounds in Metroidvania]

Awsome

Well first off congrats on the front page well deserved for all the time you put in on this and wow you put a lot of people in this one lots of great energy in all the different screens and mock ups really a beautiful sight and glad I got to review this piece of yours you have really made me have a new admiration for Sprite work and the effort that goes into them so props to you for all the hard work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this was a beautiful insight on all the Sprite detail and energy

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[HIGH KICK]

Very nice

So this was another cool character combo you have here some really good poses lots of detail and nice linework really nice effort that background is notbad either it has some lighting but I think you should ad some more dominant lighting coming down to that would be a nice idea but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting effect

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[Groovin']

Cool

So this was cool I like her groovy style the hair is really cute maybe you should think about adding some shine in the hair and also maybe some background detail like a disco ball since she is dancing it's just a small idea but might work well but overall a good drawing you have here anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and shine

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[FBI agent]

Very nice

And here was something cool a nice simple drawing with some now classic character work the shooting on the FBI was great I think you should have had more bullet holes or even more cracks in the logo and also some shine on the agents glasses wouldn't hurt either but other then all that mentioned this was cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things mentioned

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[the blue knight!]

Very good

Well this was very good and very impressive here with this style a beautiful visual with the ice I think you need more of a power and slash on the ice maybe some added sparkle to the ice as it's slashed and congrats on the awards here we'll deserved and hope you win many more to come your way

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle and slashing in the slash moment

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[castle crashers vs. barbarians]

Another cool piece

So this here was another cool piece I live this in battle scene you have going on maybe a more intense action scene would have been cool two things I would have added would be some sparkle on the sword and more background element props and such that's just my take on it besides that this is a top notch piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sword shine. And some background detail

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