XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Karla Shadowdance]

Nice sketch

So this was cool you should really finish this one it has so much detail all the nighty stuff would really look nice with some shine and color all over even some background would be pretty nifty a very nice charchter indeed so my advice is adding some color and some shine and even some background detail and such just some extras so it's more finished but overall this was really nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above

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[Butt.]

Very nice form

So this was very nice the form on her body is nice work it looks very realistic I have to say this is something different then you normally do and it's refreshing to see something other then juicy some nice work though and the black and white style here is very nice indeed would have liked more in the background some scene in the distance at least anyways awasome work as always

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something more in the background

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[Art trade with Koibito]

Very beautiful

So this was really beautiful I love the "PURPLE" here I think you could have done something in the backround here though, this was pretty amazing work though very nice character and welldone, I would ad some more shine on her too, but besides that this was pretty amazing work.

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I think you could have done something in the backround here, I would ad some more shine on her too

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[charlotte x angelica]

Interesting piece

So this has an "INTERESTING" style here the shading is nice the shine is pretty good the lineworl is very abstract a bit, its a nice pose of the two characters but there is some sybtle elgance about it all, Now I would suggest some backround detail maybe some props, but anyways nice work here.

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Now I would suggest some backround detail maybe some props

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[Angelic Hope]

Wow nice

so this was really I love the color you use and some very deep colortone makes this for a really nice charchter the wings are absolutely beautiful the Halo was a nice touch but I think you should have a sparkle off the Halo and while we are on that topic have the crystal on bottom have some sparkles and shine too all of the crystals should anyways nice work here this was really good work here


~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine on a few points

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[Breakthrough]

Very nice

So this was cool I love the color of the bird and the deep texture you put into these characters is really nice so here with an action scene with the rain you should have water dripping from the characters hair and maybe even the birds beak and feathers would be a nice little detail to ad overall this was a pretty good piece of artwork here anyways nice job hope to see more from you sometime


~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above some dripping drops of rain off there hair

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[the fallen]

Nice drawing

So this was a nice drawing you have here I like what you did with the "WINGS" and would love to see this finished and with much more detail and ofcourse a splash of color here and there its a very nice start to a drawing with some nice visuals here so keep up the good work.

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would love to see this finished and with much more detail and ofcourse a splash of color here and there

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[Say Cheese!!]

Really nice

Wow I have to say this was really good I like the grouped piece here seems like they are all having fun and you presented that emotion very well except that one guy seems to think too happy based on his text bubble the shades and texture is really deep on there clothing but anyways keep up the amazing work and keep making great art pieces can't wait for more

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Not really anything on this I found it to be really solid work

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[Star Butterfly and Marco Diaz!]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool here I like the characters here and in a good possibility looks like they are having a wonderful time here I also love all the use of color here as well love what you did with the background even you should frame this or put in some frames and or borders or something it was a nice piece of art and I was glad to have reviewed it so nice job indeed I look forward to more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added frames and borders

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[Youtuber's Anxiety]

Nice idea

So this was a nice idea and a good "COMIC" too I actually think you could make a comic series based off you-tubers or something like that, your art style is there and you have some deep colortones and it all comes together very well, but anyways very nice work here I like it.

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I actually think you could make a comic series based off you-tubers or something like that

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MookGames responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm currently working on some bigger projects, but I'll definately keep your input in mind