XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[NASA Pinup]

Nice piece

So this was anotger nice piece I like this one I like the black and white background with a colored in pin up in front that was pretty good of an idea there seems like there should be more strs in the background some brighter and some dimmer just an idea maybe even some ship flying around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light up stars and maybe a ship in background

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[Lezbian Robot Apocalypse]

Nice

So this was cool I like this the character work alone was pretty awesome and well detailed I like the texture and you gave them some really nice poses even the fire or flames or explosion in the background was really intense and made for a really nice piece but anyways good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe put this up in a frame or fancy border

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[Breaking Bad - Train Robbery T]

Cool

So I am a big fan of breaking bad and I remember that episode trying to figure out how this relates to it but besides that you did do a fantastic job on the art here the glass could use some shine and sparkle since it's out in the sun and such but I have to say it was a good idea you have here anyways good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle off the rim of the glass

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[MS INCREDIBOOTY]

Very nice

And here is another great character with your fresh lines and smooth color she has a nice and alluring look this was a great character but I do think adding some more detail in the background like to you can go a few ways with maybe some design or pattern maybe some backdrop scene or even just props in the distance

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few background ideas

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[Judy Booty]

Cool

So this was another cool pin up all of your pin up styles have a fresh and smooth look to them I do however think that on this particular piece she needs some shine on her legs and back side but that's just an opinion of advice honestly it's pretty good even without the shine so nice work here indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine on legs

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[AMMUT'S ANGEL PROMO]

Very cool guns

The guns most of all are pretty impressive and the character itself was cool I like the dark background I do think some added smoke or mist in the background would make it even better as well as adding some sparkle shine on the end or tips of the gun shaft just an idea or two but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in guns and some added mist in background

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[AMMUT'S ANGEL CHIBI]

Now this was cool

Ok so this was a cool piece of art here I love the vibrant colors and love the stylistic formulated character work it's kind of like a comic and you added a lot of snazzy splash to them so nice color here it really jumps out at you I think you could make a comic based off of this one but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some comic series could come from this

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[HOLIDAY MIKA]

Cute

So this was cute and adorable love the backside view here and wouldn't mind more shine on her backside the blonde hair was cute maybe some added texture in the dangling hair maybe even some shine in the hair even but other then that this was pretty cool so good art style and good formulated character here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine

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[Vamp]

Cool piece

So this was cool and this was just nice and detailed the visual is cool makes me want to know a story for this charracter I think if you added a moon setting with a moonlight of some sort it would be cool then you can use a light source to reflect off the camp somehow it also gives more visual to the background but you do have a nice style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some moon setting

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[Clown]

Cool clown

So this was cool this has a sort of abstract and artistic feel to it I like the subtle color use too I do think you could ad some type of background though maybe some props like flowers or some clown theme element but other then that this was a really cool piece you have here anyways it was nice to review your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some type of backround detail and or props

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