XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Grattriss 2005]

Nice

Ok so what language is this? I feel like I need to get out google picture translator and investigate, but regardless it is a nice little addition. Is this a lottery card? I feel like it is but you need to add some $$$ signs into it to imply the winning of money, or maybe the symbol you used here is that sign? I am not too sure, but it does look good and has great symmetry overall. I think the orange and green coloring was good and the line work was good as well, but I wish the lines were thicker and heavy in some areas as the symbols themselves were heavy and thick and that should really match with the lines themselves, especially when you use the boxes or stratch box area with such a large thick line intself. I think that is really your main issue here to just keep things flowing in a nice way from line to line and not make it look like too much of a sketch if you want a realistic looking lottery card feeling here. Overall I did like this one and I hope you'll do more, but maybe an English version for us boys in the USA? Nice job tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just change up your border line thickness to match the boxes and give it a flow overall for this piece.

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Cyberdevil responds:

If you read the description you'd know the answers to most questions above. ;) Good point with the winning implication though. The symbol's the official brand - 'triss' being a wordplay on three and clover/slang for money. Don't think a translated version would make much sense, and it's old work now, but thanks for the continued reviews!

[Teleporter]

haha

Haha funny one the people should probably read the sign, And once again you make another great entry with some suprising suspense and some nifty details, the comic is still as vibrant as ever with an "ENTERTAINING-STORY" to make you want more, and that there is wahy I really have come to enjoy this web-comic you have here.

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[RoboDave 2.0]

This was cool

So this was pretty cool, love all the use of "COLOR" the shades are actually pretty good and the "FLAMES" are really good a good entry for "ROBOT-DAY" but anyways nice art piece here I really enjoyed this version and it looks really good indeed, hope to see more from you.

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[Skywriter]

A Chazz Comic cool

Took him awhile to realise what was going on, lol, "ENDING" secne was great, Another chazz comic you have here and as always this one was really funny especially the ending dont think there has been one that has been boring, as you bring some full fun entertainment to these "SUBMISSIONS" with some nice and nifty story and crazy adventures that these characters go through.

~X~

[Bigfoot]

Wacky outcome

Really love the "YELLOW" Backround, So this one has a Wacky outcome and thats what really made it fun for me I really like the style here and this comic keeps on going with new stories of adventures for these wild and crazy guys with a bit wacky-ness so it was all "FUN-AND-ENTERTAINING" for me I really enjoyed this piece.

~X~

[Dinky]

Haha nice

So this was pretty nice I don't know anything of this charracter or the background behind him or her but it's a nifty design with some little extra package there lol the dumbbell weights I think you could have added much more sparkle on this with more shine comming off the end just my opinion of a small idea but anyways that's my review for this nifty charchter you have and hope to come across your work sometime soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine and sparkle on the weights

~X~

[Commission - Kira the Lioness]

Really beautiful

So I found this piece to be really beautiful very soft colors and smooth lines you really put some time and energy into this piece with the soft colors and smooth elements great charchter design and I love the soft view points with the background just a very beautiful piece here and no changes needed for this fine piece of art so keep making great stuff such as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Can't change what's already a beautiful piece so no changes indeed

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[blue orc]

Wow very nice

The one thing that jumped out at me on this piece at first was the fresh cartoon color but they are crisp and sharp as are the line work I think a few extra details could be added like some shine and sparkle on the horns and more blood on the orc dripping maybe even on his chest or something just an opinion and idea for a better view of the detail here but anyways great work here very nice indeed

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[Full House]

Wow nice

So this was a real intense piece you have here the flames on this was especially good I think you should have wrapped the flames all the way around making for a good frame along the edges wouldn't mind some glowing eyes on the black and white characters even as this was a really nice job and very nice detail here but anyways a fantastic entry you have prepared for us here hope to see more from you anyways keep it real

~X~

[The Razorblade Dolls]

This was notbad

So first of all I like the wording here and with all the slash in the letters very nice touch that would make for a killer don't there and I do like the artwork below it is pretty intense and you bring on a nice view here very deep detail and most of all some really nice colors and well blended only thing I would change on this might be adding some frames border on this fine piece you have here

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