XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Neon Pylot]

Nice bike

So this was pretty cool and the bike was nifty the neon could be glowing even more especially on the rims of the bike but other then that this was a really nice draw you have here brilliant piece of art work here hope you make more slick designs such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the neon

~X~

[Mencere]

Faded

Where is the art going? it is so whited out. I mean, I see something "GOOD-HERE", but it is soooo faded! The texture details are almost whited out here, they seem lost in this. I wonder why you picked to make it so much white covering it up and overall masking the details? I think you over did it on the amount of whiteout here, but it is an interesting piece. This is very abstract as you say, but things are just so subtle and hard to make out. I do like the texture effects you've got going on here. The way it looks almost peace like, like sand inside a snowstorm. I wonder what inspired you to try this out? I love the overall feeling you get looking at this as well, like you're lost in a dream, so that part works out well for you in terms of the look. I would have changed your brightness/darkness settings and made it a more darker and maybe fixed up the contrast inside this one. I think you have really good ideas and you're always trying things, and that is something I like about you. You're different and edgy and for abstract this does work well. I think you were using the darkening brush in this as well and that did help you in some areas, but overall it was good to see something different from you. I would keep trying this out and next time do something that isn't white?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, this is far too white and faded. Try to get more darkness and less white next time. Even try playing with your image settings.

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Cyberdevil responds:

I guess I like white. :) Bright colors. Haze. Not sure what inspired me anymore, but I like the impressions you got from it! Lost in a dream sounds particularly nice. Might've been something like that I was going for.

[Timelapse Video: Pink]

Wow beautifull

First of all I love all the color used here, im an instant "FAN" here you have captured the color and emotion of this whole piece, I do think you could have had more lighting come off the top of the helmet and have a glare off of it, but anyways really nice work here on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could have had more lighting come off the top of the helmet and have a glare off of it

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-19]

Cool beans

She is one tough "COOKIE" I like her "BOLDNESS" I like the comic here you really push some nice ideas in this one and the detail is showing off really good, the characters as always a nice touch, and you bring some nice stories about and all together this is some nice web comic you have here, so keep making more adventures in this fine web comic of yours.

~X~

[Somewhere Other, Chapter 22'6]

Nice web-comic

This was a nice webcomic you have here I have reviewed a few of these now and this one was pretty good love the characters and the different style of art work you have here it all comes together and makes for some nice style of art and hope you keep that effort and energy up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more of these great comic entries

~X~

[Canoness Superior Obdulia]

Really nice character

You have some really nice work here some very nice detail lots of nifty little detail and nice and shiny elements even the backround was really deep in "TEXTURE" I wouldnt mind seeing more glow and shine effects though especially on all the nifty elements, anyways nice character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind seeing more glow and shine effects though especially on all the nifty elements

~X~

[CyberD Top]

Interesting

This wasnt too bad for another paper sketch, So for this one I gave 3.5 stars because of the sketch itself and is much more "RAW" artistic value, I would really love to know who all the characteristics may or may not be lol, I feel like you have a lot going on here and could use more detail and direction on where to place characters. They seems really squished together and unable to coexist well. I do like it but each character is a different size than the other which is fine but it isnt very consistant for some of them right beside each other and their placement is off at times like some characters look like they are floating. Id definately try to get this converted to a more digital style with thick ink lines like you usually do and then add up color for more style and a better means to tell everyone apart. I like the characters and I notice some NG ones and ones I am not sure of but overall a nice piece. I also love the one character hitting the other with that key lol I did enjoy it just put more focus on the elements of finishing this as oposed to a sketch and youll have a great NG history piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up some changes in porportions. Add color. Add ink lines in a digital setting with your art program.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I wish I could remember who they were too! XD Not sure if the guy with glasses is NG Staff or Steve Jobs... or could it be a buffed up, more sinister (in the name of competition) alternative you? The dude in the middle might've been gluttony from Fullmetal Alchemist, and the CD guy at least is 100% most definitely me! Alien Hominid in the metal mask...? I'm just guessing now. Also I'm pretty sure that key's a flag! ;)

[Somewhere Other Chapter 23-10]

Love it

The "FLAMES" entry lol well this one was nice the ending frame was the best when they realise what really is not fine I think, My suggestion here might be to ad more red flames, So this is a good comic and you really bring some nice design to it with all that you do from story to characters to color or not color but what you bring is some adventure into this whole series with some really nice element and fun adventure so keep doing what you do here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My suggestion here might be to ad more red flames

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 25-9]

Nice comic style

And "LOVE" the fresh and subtle art here, adding more frames would be awsome, So you have a nice comic style here I am always looking for whats next on this web-comic and I am glad you continue to make it and bring out some different adventures in this little web comic of yours, so keep making more and keep bringing on great stories just like this one here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding more frames would be awsome

~X~