XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jap]

Interesting

This one here was a bit "INTERESTING" but in a cute way. The hole from digging you have coming out of the picture into what seems to be the city was a nice touch. I like the way the hole finds a new place, but why did you call this "JAP" if you dug to China? I think the overall city scape is fine, but it doesn't seem to be Chinese to me. I mean, you lack the cultural "ASPECT-OF-THE-CITY" in your background. I think it could have used some "CHINESE-WRITING" or maybe more cultural stuff that they would usually have there. I like the building tho as they do show the culture with the one tower building and it would appear you added some smog, and we all know that China is riddled with smog these days. I love the colorful sky lines you have going down the background and how it looks like a colorful world and sky. I think overall this is interesting, I think the pipe could have been bigger and not so small, since you are talking about digging a hole here, why not have the pip more wide to give off a person went through it? I do like the story you are telling here about getting to the other side, or digging over to it, but I would have loved to see maybe a person coming out the other end as well. Good job tho and good efforts in your execution of the idea you had going on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more chinese culture and characters to the background and make the pipe wider.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well there's the temple-like skyscraper in the background right? ;) But you're right. Not much else. I have no idea why I called it JAP either! All valid points, thanks!

[Somewhere Other, Chapter 24-6]

Love your style

So as I view these comics I like them but wouldnt mind some more detail in the frame work maybe even a small design here or there would work too, So I Love your style here on this comic, Its really fantastic to see stuff like this always entertaining stuff that you bring to the table and cant wait to see what else you bring aswell, because the element and detail surrounding your characters and story lines is always a plus here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I view these comics I like them but wouldnt mind some more detail in the frame work maybe even a small design here or there would work too

~X~

[Eye Surgery]

Another fun one

A staring "CONTEST" and many hours later ohmy must have been fun but based on the frames it wasent as much lol, Yes indeed as the title says this one is another fun one, I like the humor, and even not a lot of detail going on you bring the amusing humor it really makes a nice adventure of your characters here, lots of talent you have and make it work, I am always pleased with the outcome here.

~X~

[Summon]

Very nice

A "SUMMONING-DEVICE" is pretty cool lol, So its been awhile since I seen anything new from you on this series but I really enjoy comming back on this older comic stuff especly the black and white classics always a pleasure to find these gems more detail is always great but these are just classic. so keep up the good work.

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 25-3]

Another cool comic part

Wow this was more towards the start of things I think, guess thats my fault for viewing these out of order, but still it was nice, wish there was more frames more viewing of the story itself on this "SUBMISSION", And here we have another cool comic piece here as they bring on some really nice work, and element the characters thrive with fun and adventure, you bring a sense of adventure to the "WEB-COMIC" and I enjoy it so nice job indeed, nice work indeed here hope you make much more to this comic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish there was more frames more viewing of the story itself on this submission

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-18]

Nice comic

This was a nice comic here I like the action you put into these and really put some nice artwork here, good detail here and its always nice seeing a fresh comic here on the grounds, I will for sure look for more from you because these are pretty good artwork and comic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes on this one.

~X~

[Lucy]

Very nice

Now this was very nice, I love the "BLUE" theme you have going on here, the character is nice and welldone, good structure, And I dont think this piece needs any additions at this time its pretty good stuff, anyways keep up the fantastic work. its looking sharp.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont think this piece needs any additions at this time its pretty good stuff

~X~

[Bird in Tree]

Colorful

Wow this one is something that really uses the "COLOR-SCHEMES". I think this submission is good for showing off your use of coloring and how you pick out good colors that will compliment each other and draw your eye in. The "BIRD" itself is well executed and thought out. I like the body positioning of this bird and the expression you give off with the eyes alone. The eyes are "STRONG" and the first thing I was drawn to, and I like that kind of feature with birds. You need strong eyes with birds and you've got that down. You also need to really understand the beek and body of feathers. I think you did a good job recreating something like this bird. I know it is a type I have seen before and I really like what you have done here. Even the addition of the flowers is good and I love having a nice colorful background prop to go with the main piece. The flowers work well with the tree and it all compliments each other in a nice steady flow from brush to brush. I would have love your white space background to be filled with a texture, perhaps a lace pattern to make it appear the art is printed off on lace. I feel that would have really given this some depth of feeling and enhanced the look overall. Keep up the good work though and keep focusing on using those nice color schemes you have done so well on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the background could use some texture, maybe a lace effect to really make this shine.

~X~

[Loopkat 2]

Another cute cat

Well this was another entertaining piece of art you have here very cute and the "FLOW" of animation is really cute again I would suggest some backround work like a city scene and or park just something that represents where he is or comming from or going too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene.

~X~

[loopkat 1]

Cute cat

So this was kind of cute here I really like the animation here, it was very smooth the onlything I think this needs is some form of backround like a city view or a park, just an idea to go off of, but overall this was a nice piece here so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backdrop city scene or park.

~X~