XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Poggot]

Interesting

So this was cool, I like some "BLACK/WHITE" styles and this was an interesting design you have here not too much detail maybe you could ad some at a later time I do think you could ad some deep detail amybe even some color into this, but anyways a really good work here.

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maybe you could ad some at a later time I do think you could ad some deep detail amybe even some color into this

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[Holy Crab!!]

Squidward

Can never go wrong with Squidward haha and its nice to see some "POPULAR" characters from movies and shows must have tooken you a while to make all these, wouldnt mind some shine and sparkle off there heads or from corner of the eyes, anyways nice work here, keep it up.

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wouldnt mind some shine and sparkle off there heads or from corner of the eyes

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[a new NEWGROUNDS favicon]

Interesting

So that was kind of nifty as its a decent "LOGO" it was very small though and I could see you making this larger maybe some bullet holes or pins in the corners maybe some borders but make it larger for sure, with all that said this was a nifty logo piece here.

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it was very small though and I could see you making this larger maybe some bullet holes or pins in the corners maybe some borders but make it larger for sure

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[Strawberry King]

Brilliant Clock day piece

Wow this was a perfect entry for the front page award, love the backround and "STRAWBERRY CLOCK" himself was pretty good, you should have added some fancy clock related borders or frames to go with this, This was an interesting piece, And you do seem to get your idea across the board. I have seen a number of Art pieces come through the portal daily, and I like what you have done here adding just the right elements making this something unique.

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you should have added some fancy clock related borders or frames to go with this

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[Dexter Project]

wow very nice

The "CHARACTERS" alone are really impressive and looks like you put some time and energy into these I wouldnt mind some shine on them a tad, Well this Concludes my review but there is such Exhilaration and you bring a certain Mythical and even Grand visuals here on this piece and I was pretty impressed with all that you have done here, And I will look for more of your work for sure, But before I go I do wish to say you have some decent talent here and it shows off very well, so keep on doing what you do its pretty awsome stuff.

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I wouldnt mind some shine on them a tad

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JhonatanLechar responds:

Thank you for taking the time to elaborate on your review. It helps me a lot to understand your point of view. Thanks!

[Dark Wild West Character Faces]

Wow nice

I really love how you have a "GROUP" of characters here nice deep textures and color tones and good details I could see you making some sort of web comic out of these guys, You have some very nice efforts and ofcourse most impressive details some things could be touched up but thats not too much to be honest. This was pretty Grand and Mythical my Overview Appropriately shows that you have great talent that puts you in the Spotlight and you have an Energetic and creative style about this piece and all of your art pieces. So besides all that said it was a nice entry to have seen and review keep up the brilliant efforts.

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I could see you making some sort of web comic out of these guys

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[Fire Enemy 1]

Cool

So here was another cool piece to an amazing shiip or part of one and its nice seeing another color I do wonder if you ever did finish this project that looks good, anyways nice job on here and hope you keep making these and showcasing your work, no changes on this one.

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no changes needed.

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[Air Enemy 1]

Nice ship

Another great shit here or ship "PART" you seem to know how to put the little details in effect and make them work in a great vision here as I have mentioned ad more shine and sparkle on edge points maybe even make the sprite or pixel piece larger but overall a great piece here.

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I have mentioned ad more shine and sparkle on edge points maybe even make the sprite or pixel piece larger

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[Water Enemy 1]

Cool

wondered if you had ever got this game or animation off the ground the "DESIGN" of what you have here is really intense, I like the style and in my opinion of a tip is just to add some shine and sparkle to them on the tips and edges. but anyways another nice piece here.

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in my opinion of a tip is just to add some shine and sparkle to them on the tips and edges

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[Darkness Enemy 1]

This was cool

You dont see much designs like this anymore its cool though its kind of like a "SPRITE" maybe some pixel, my personal opinion would be to ad more shine to it on the top with some sparkle even, but regardless this was a cool piece that I thaught came out pretty well.

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my personal opinion would be to ad more shine to it on the top with some sparkle even

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