Busy
Ok this one here, this one was a bit too busy for me. There is a lot going on here which is fine but there is also a lot going on here with everything being the same color, black, which can really make you get lost in the work. I feel like I am looking at Where's Waldo in this type of drawing here where I am trying to find out where what is where and just getting lost. This may also be due to the size of the images and characters as they are very bunched together. Now this is not to say your art itself isn't good. I think you are talented and the things you've drawn here are very good indeed, but it would do to maybe separate them a bit and add color to give some distinction to this piece but good job and good ink.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and more spacing/separation of characters
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