XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somewhere Other Chapter 22-4]

Another cool comic

The "LAZOR" Shooting into the chest was pretty good, I would ad more glow to that beam, And once again another cool comic here some nice ideas with this one and love how the characters jump out at you with some stylish visuals, the story as always a brilliant one you seem to always know in what direction to show these characters off so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad more glow to that beam

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 22-1]

Nice characters

I really love the "COLOR" in these very deep color funny characters too, I could see you adding more frames for more of the comic, the characters are unique and different the comic brings adventure and a sense of stylish element, you really make a good comic series here and makes me enjoy it more and more every day, so keep doing what you do because you have some nice ideas on this comic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding more frames for more of the comic

~X~

[A Set of MILFs]

Notbad

Why milfs? These do not seem like a milf, just some female characters. They represent no features to show they are mothers or have been mothers. They are all drawn in a young fashing without wrinkles, scars, or imperfections. Having children isn't a walk in the park, so I think you need to add a few imperfections to these "LADIES". Nothing drastic, just something to make them seem like a mother. Anyone can be a mother, any age, but I would like some more details to establish this here. This also really needs a background, a simply color is okay, but you could do so much more with a setting in the back or even just something of a pattern. Your facial expression design is good tho, it reminds me of Steven Universe and has a unique consistent flow. Your eyes are particularly good. I think you are talented but just keep at it and things will improve.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on more details and adding a background.

~X~

[end ritual]

Nice drawing

Very detailed black and white drawing here, love that inner "BORDER" I could see you adding some color to this, So you have a nice drawing or sketch here, nice piece and it could have some added color but also its just pretty good on its own. Allthough the little or no color is still pretty good, it stands alone on its own with its own style of sketch and good detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding some color to this

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[PRACTICE :)]

Great

Now this is art. This is something I'd see in a gallery. The vibrant colors and depth of lines and patterns are wonderful. The use of space and story telling here is also wonderful. I think you have captured something unique and full of color with your piece. You can see the story inside all those patterns and with your character. The body image of the nude girl serves a purpose of beauty and not one of simply pleasure of the body. This girl is resting in her world and letting the color take her over. Her face even has a pop of some colors to really bring her alive in this. I also love the textures inside your patterns to give off that feeling of cloth and fabrics that are different in each part of this room. Over some great visually appealing work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really, I think it is fine as it is.

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[Sapphire (Headshot Image)]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool, I especilly love the extra deep texture and colortone very "DEEP" very rich colors that really make this jump out at you, I like the shine and glare on the "GLASSES" maybe the glasses themself could have a sparkl off the end just for extra measure, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe the glasses themself could have a sparkl off the end just for extra measure

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DJEvilNeon responds:

Maybe glares and glows would be neat in some future stuff :P

[Sapphire - x64]

Very cool

So I found this to be pretty interesting, I been getting into sprite work myself and understanding I love the "COLORS" you used here, wouldnt mind more in the backround with this piece though, for the mostpart its pretty good, just needs more in the backround a bit.

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wouldnt mind more in the backround with this piece though

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DJEvilNeon responds:

Thanks for your insight! I made these few images as sort of pixel reference art or simple pixel pinups so I can show my sapphire off :3

[Diabeetus Degu (animated)]

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Cute little "GIF" you have here was it made from scratch of pixels? but anyways its a cute little thing and has some good formation, I do wish it was a tad but larger that way more detail can be shown within, but honestly besides all that this was actually pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be larger.

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