XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-16]

Nice web comic

As always great comic, my suggestion this time would be make them longer with longer comic pieces just an idea, So before I start I will checkout more of your stuff infact Ill probably review alot of your work, but have to say that this is a good web comic series you have going here and look forward to all the crazy antics of your characters, so keep up the good work.

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my suggestion this time would be make them longer with longer comic pieces just an idea

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[Bugs and Bugs]

Haha very nice

So this was very nice indeed, I could see you adding that one "CHARACTER" in the backround that loves to hunt the bugs from both eras lol, but regardless this was very welldone and its a nice idea you have here on this one and I really enjoyed this piece brings back great memories.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes other then adding on that one character as suggested.

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[Robbery]

Nice entry

This one was well "EXECTUTED" on the joke but feel sorry for the guy lol, And another nice entry you have here, what I have enjoyed the most of these is the comedy and jokes that your characters go through and these characters are funny and amusing the endings always leaving me with a smile and chuckle all together making it a fun filled experience in your comic entries.

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[Crisps]

Notbad

These "CRISPS" can get very dangerous it seems lol, And again you bring the magic of comedy humor and an adventure into this one, while these are some early entries and you can see by the little detail and even little color, you can still get the little jokes and attitude of your characters as they are pretty entertaining, and the story is pretty amusing at the end like this one here today.

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[New Arrivals]

This was cool

So this was a cool group of characters you have here, all the different "SHAPES" and sizes but still some amazung character designs wish this whole piece was a tad bit larger, but this was a cool piece I would even suggest a frame or fancy border, anyways good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish this whole piece was a tad bit larger, I would even suggest a frame or fancy border

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[Cheese Puffs]

This comic is amazing

Very nice indeed, the "CHEESE-PUFFS" is a good idea looks painfull on last scene though lol, So This comic is amazing and it brings out some nice elements especially in these early stages with the plain and black and white style here, the characters are classic the jokes are funny as ever and while theres not a lot of detail there is still a huge value in these.

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[Squidward's Suicide]

Very well done

wow I am really taken back by this the "TEXTURE" alone is very detailed and deep, I love the look on his face a great emotion for the character, so it looks like there is a dark frame I would suggest adding some lighting effect on it and also adding something in the backround to show what he might be scared of, anyways nice art work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
it looks like there is a dark frame I would suggest adding some lighting effect on it and also adding something in the backround to show what he might be scared of

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[Spring Cleaning]

Nice black and white

I have to say "SPRINGY" looks like it would hurt, So here was a nice black and white entry maybe not the intent or maybe it was but as I look back and review these old ones its always fun to see what you bring to the table and even without all the color or even detail its still pretty amazing and I got a thrill reviewing this one.

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[Kitchen 1 pt Perspective]

Very nice

So this was really nifty very nice work for ten minutes the lines are just right the visual of this room is pretty cool I think some added shading on this would be really cool it would look really intense with some shades and running it thru a gimp or Photoshop with some enhanced effects all about so anyways nice job on this one I really liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some enhanced effects on this would be nice

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[Selvi's Selfie!]

Wow nice

So here was a beautiful charchter I love the no eyes on this and the horns are magnificent I do however think you should ad some shine on the horns with a bit of sparkle at the ends also this piece could use some kind of visual in the background maybe some distant on looker or a prop or two just an idea I'm throwing at you anyways nice charchter design here

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