XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somewhere Other, Chapter 24-8]

Nice energy in this one

Very nice I really like how this is going "STORY-WISE" you should have some logo or title at the top or bottom just an idea, It is really fantastic to see stuff like this always entertaining stuff that you bring to the table, I like the idea behind this and all the stories come alive in each entry of this web comic, so nice effort here and nice entry here very good quality of characters and story.

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you should have some logo or title at the top or bottom just an idea

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 25-1]

Fantastic

Notbad with this one it was a "SHORT" one this time but overall you have a decent entry of this portion of the comic, theres lots I love about this series but the stories play off well for themself, and you bring some really good stories and ideas and make them work, and its a simple idea that you bring alive, and for that I am impressed with your efforts here so props to you for a job welldone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would have liked to see more frames to this part

~X~

[Grumpy Professor Texture]

This was nifty

So you have a nifty "DESIGN" here Its like the design for the cutout and you have all the deep texture and rich colors to go with it, very cute design here, really no changes here for one its older and two its a solid swell piece you have here with this one anyways nice work.

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no changes here for one its older and two its a solid swell piece you have here

~X~

[Angelina Jolie as Lara Croft]

Really beautiful artwork here

Wow this was really beautiful artwork here the skin-tone color alone is amazing the deep texture is really nice and I really like the realistic visual on this she even has a nice and alluring expression on her face very nice work here indeed I love the style here and love you energy you pushed forward in this so nice job indeed I hope to see more of your works

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[Punk Devil Girl]

Nice

I like this and like how you have the shoelaces hanging like if she's hanging on an edges or something and nice design in the stockings too all very nice and a good structure of the character here so nice job indeed on this one it was it was a pretty good and well structure of a character I like your work in all the detail that it is maybe some added background would be good on this one

~X~

[Come Along with Me]

Very nice

So this was really cool I love the "COLORS" the bright colors love the skyline backround some really nice elements here, The sun in the backround I think you could ad some more light comming down on the character, and as for the awards you won here congrats well deserving, No entry gets the perfect award, But what this entry does offer Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are a nice fit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sun in the backround I think you could ad some more light comming down on the character

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[Morsdagen 2005]

Editorial

Wow ok I love this one it is like something from an editorial or magazine piece. The coloring and the positioning of the borders and text makes it feel like an ad or front page piece. The cloud like grass at the bottom spiraling out of the main box border really give it an original design feeling and some great depth of a piece. The flower alone by itself makes it the star of the show and the central character to your point here and your theme. I do love the way it is focused on and the overall background it goes along with. I think the shadows and elements around the flower also help focus on it and allows for a good perspective. The sun off to the side, hiding a bit, also helps you focus on the flower and even the text it comes off alive with the positioning. I love the different colors inside each letter and the shading in them really lets it pop with your gradiant color choices. I think overall there isn't anything to really improve here, as it all works together and flows very well. I think you are doing a great job with these types of submissions

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Nothing really as I think it is good the way it is.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Thank you!

[#Yokaitober - 16 - Ikiryō]

Wow amazing

Wow this is a beautiful piece you have here love the reds and yellows here and especilly love the "LIGHTING" effects that you swoosh through, the "YELLOW" flowers are very nice indeed, You should ad some fancy frames along the edges on this piece might accent the vase and flowers just right, but very nice work indeed.

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You should ad some fancy frames along the edges on this piece might accent the vase and flowers just right

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[RPG Challenge - 14 - Medic]

I really love this piece here

Wow I am amazed with this piece I especially love the "GLOW" in the "EYE" and all the extra little details like the bottles and stuff, I do think you could have added some of that same glow to the bottles and hanging lights and such, but anyways nice work here you have a nice style with lots of detail.

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I do think you could have added some of that same glow to the bottles and hanging lights and such

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[Man In Car]

Comical

I did think this one was funny, but this piece right here has the elements of a comic strip or comic sketch. I think the guy is a bit too blended into the art tho, he seems lost in the background when his head comes out. I think he needs some shadows and depth to show us he isn't part of the road or the background. I do like your background tho and it is always nice to see you make those in your work when you use your ink or drawing style. I see a lot of your work without backgrounds and I am always pleased when you add one up, but this one is good and I found the character to be comical with his big "YO". I don't understand why you didnt make the font of the "YO" yourself as usually your fonts are much bigger and original with your own hand writing. I would hope next time you use your own drawing text font skills to add to the pieces you do with any speech bubbles. I do like this one and it made me laugh. I hope to see this character again sometime and I am impressed with the direction that you took with this.

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Just add some more depth to his head sticking out so it doesn't get lost in the background and maybe do your own font for the speech bubbles.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm well I guess it was a bit rushed since the font's a basic one, or I was just experimenting with styles back then. Good points on depth there!