XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shaymin Valentine]

Cute

So this was cute I like the fresh look you have here on this piece with some Valentine's love for the singles lol but anyways the fresh look is kicking good here I do think that the white outter border could use more depth or even some shine to it for the most part you have captured the style you have described so nice work indeed on this fine and fresh looking piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some depth in the outter white border

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[Contrast 4]

Wow

Wow this is really nice work here the black and white comics is really nice and in each frame there is a new and exciting scene of action the detail in each piece is very swell and well detailed now I could see you adding some color like maybe just the frames could be a red so it all accents each other somehow but anyways that's my take on things hope you keep making comics and detailed art like this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some red frames

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[Eevee: PokeDesign Challenge]

Nice designs

Yeah I have to say this one is really good it has some nifty face expression and you really braught out the design on theme I do like all three but have to say my fave here is most probably the last one the grumpy face one lol anyways nice grid like background now this is one of those pieces I would love to see a border or fancy kind of frame on it and that's just a view point anyways keep up the brilliant work

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[Let's Beat the Elite Four]

Wow

Some really nice view here and lots of Pokemon here you really pushed the limits on this piece lots of nice art pieces and this is one of the best with quality finishes here and lots of nifty Pokemon and stylish background very deep in background and some nice deep texture as well you have once again made another beautiful piece of art very nice work here hope to see more soon

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[Baron Screen]

Colorful

Wow this one right here is just great, I mean this one is full blown in details of wonderful colors. I think the blues really stand out the most here, I really am enjoying this one. The level of detail and skill you've put into this is something right out of a professional handbook. I think the concept is great too and even your font is original and colored with such a deep and vibrant red. The red really shines and comes off of all those blues and makes a nice pop that stands out from the rest, and it is important for text to stand out and not be lost in the all other business and elements going on in an art piece. The cat has this great elements of surprise that you have created by drawing these bright big eyes and the body posture of a cat that is freaked out. I love the way you allowed the shadows and shading to hide the cat but kept the eyes bright to show that element of surprise and make sure it stood out from the rest of things to focus your own eyes on this part. The red barron is also nice to be positioned as he is and the overall body posture shows you that he is your main character and seem to have accomplished a goal. Your environmental setting was also well established as a sort of run down area of the streets and you did that by creating this nicely done torn up spaced out fence. I think that by making things a bit run down on a sidewalk, you showed us what your setting was and it made sense why the cat would be there. I don't think I have much here to improve on, you have covered every area of space here with details, textures, colors, shades, and dept. You have a story going on and I am entertained by each element and each detail. You clearly put effort into this and it has paid off. I think this is perfect as it is. I hope to see more from you soon and keep up the good work, I look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to change, I like this one the way it is.

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MindChamber responds:

Thanks so much for that in-depth review! Much appreciated

[Gather]

Very Artistic

I actually love this piece you have here, it has a "ABSTRACT" and a "ARTISTIC" feel about it you have some very swell ideas here and I look foward to more, Now my tip might be to ad more seperation between all the bunched up elements but I still like it, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now my tip might be to ad more seperation between all the bunched up elements but I still like it

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[PimpsStreet]

Very nice

This was a cool art piece you have here with some nice texture and some well designed characters this is almost like a "POSTER" of somekind it has some very deep detail, I would slap some borders on this piece and let it shine like a framed piece, anyways really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would slap some borders on this piece and let it shine like a framed piece

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 23-4]

Very nice entry

Another nice entry here, I would suggest maybe a colored frame work element might accent it with the comic more, I like the "STYLE" and element you bring into this with the unique characters and content. its those kinds of web comics that I really have come to enjoy the detail and element that one puts through these such as this one, a good little adventure you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest maybe a colored frame work element might accent it with the comic more

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-1]

Awsome

Very "NICE" but would love to see these expanded longer on each submission they seem very short for each one, You bring a sense of adventure to this series and make it a fun web comic thats exciting and entertaining and just bring on some nice visual elements, and thats what I really liked and enjoyed about this one, so nice job on this one and hope to see much more and very soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love to see these expanded longer on each submission they seem very short for each one

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-3]

Nice comic

The "TEXT-BUBBLES" Are nice but maybe they shouldnt just blend with the frame maybe adding some depth and color in there would be a nice touch, You have a nice comic series here the characters the props the stylish backrounds and ofcourse the story, and its all those things that really make this as good as it is the detail shines well and I am pleased with the outcomes of this so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for the text bubbles maybe they shouldnt just blend with the frame maybe adding some depth and color in there would be a nice touch

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