XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Breakthrough]

Very nice

So this was cool I love the color of the bird and the deep texture you put into these characters is really nice so here with an action scene with the rain you should have water dripping from the characters hair and maybe even the birds beak and feathers would be a nice little detail to ad overall this was a pretty good piece of artwork here anyways nice job hope to see more from you sometime


~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above some dripping drops of rain off there hair

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[the fallen]

Nice drawing

So this was a nice drawing you have here I like what you did with the "WINGS" and would love to see this finished and with much more detail and ofcourse a splash of color here and there its a very nice start to a drawing with some nice visuals here so keep up the good work.

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would love to see this finished and with much more detail and ofcourse a splash of color here and there

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[Say Cheese!!]

Really nice

Wow I have to say this was really good I like the grouped piece here seems like they are all having fun and you presented that emotion very well except that one guy seems to think too happy based on his text bubble the shades and texture is really deep on there clothing but anyways keep up the amazing work and keep making great art pieces can't wait for more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything on this I found it to be really solid work

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[Star Butterfly and Marco Diaz!]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool here I like the characters here and in a good possibility looks like they are having a wonderful time here I also love all the use of color here as well love what you did with the background even you should frame this or put in some frames and or borders or something it was a nice piece of art and I was glad to have reviewed it so nice job indeed I look forward to more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added frames and borders

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[Youtuber's Anxiety]

Nice idea

So this was a nice idea and a good "COMIC" too I actually think you could make a comic series based off you-tubers or something like that, your art style is there and you have some deep colortones and it all comes together very well, but anyways very nice work here I like it.

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I actually think you could make a comic series based off you-tubers or something like that

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MookGames responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm currently working on some bigger projects, but I'll definately keep your input in mind

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-3]

Cool

Another nice one here, I love how you fill these with "COLOR" wish these were a tad bit longer, So here we are and here I am reviewing another fine piece here with this one, its another brilliant and fantastic entry this is a "UNIQUE" web comic im glad I came across it a while ago, you have some interesting characters and interesting "STORY-LINES" so a nice comic here.

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wish these were a tad bit longer

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[Samurai Jack]

Awsome

Wow and here we are once again you can never go wrong with Samurai Jack one of the old "CLASSIC" toons but you really did some nice "ART" on this one its pretty amazing and I really enjoy this one very nice use of colors and just filled the whole canvus on this one so really nice work indeed, you should make a series of Samurai Jack art pieces like this form, anyways nice work here.

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you should make a series of Samurai Jack art pieces like this form

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-16]

Nice web comic

As always great comic, my suggestion this time would be make them longer with longer comic pieces just an idea, So before I start I will checkout more of your stuff infact Ill probably review alot of your work, but have to say that this is a good web comic series you have going here and look forward to all the crazy antics of your characters, so keep up the good work.

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my suggestion this time would be make them longer with longer comic pieces just an idea

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[Bugs and Bugs]

Haha very nice

So this was very nice indeed, I could see you adding that one "CHARACTER" in the backround that loves to hunt the bugs from both eras lol, but regardless this was very welldone and its a nice idea you have here on this one and I really enjoyed this piece brings back great memories.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes other then adding on that one character as suggested.

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[Robbery]

Nice entry

This one was well "EXECTUTED" on the joke but feel sorry for the guy lol, And another nice entry you have here, what I have enjoyed the most of these is the comedy and jokes that your characters go through and these characters are funny and amusing the endings always leaving me with a smile and chuckle all together making it a fun filled experience in your comic entries.

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