XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark]

Great entry

and here we are its been awhile since I reviewed one of these, but glad to see some nice and nifty "ADVENTURE" here this was pretty cool, this entry had an extra dose of adventure and some good exectuted humor, and those are just the little things that I enjoy about this.

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[AVSX BOOTY CONTEST]

Bootyful

Well this one is nice and sexy with a lots of "BOOTY" going on. I like big butts, and I cannot lie reminds me of that. I like this one a lot actually and it is very good with the "BOOTY" you've got going on here. I think the use of colors and the "EXTRA-SHINES" you put on their shine in the butts and curves really works out here. I love love Mrs. Marvels "EXPESSION" and the way her butt is sticking out is a great showing of curves. Even her outfit coloring and shading is spot on. Emma isn't the best in terms of her face. I do like the face of Mrs. Marvel but Emma isn't looking as good in terms of facial proportions. I think Emma has a squished up face and it is a bit too much going on here. The way her body is drawn is great tho and overall the white outfit is very much here, but "HER-FACE-DOES-NEED-WORK". I wouldn't really include the booty contest banner, you could just put that in the title and really focus more on their assets here. I think the way they have the bootys is good and they seem to be enjoying themselves. I do really love the curves and the big boobs features you've got going on here for them. The background is also good, except that "BANNER". Interesting way of doing this one and think you put real effort into this one. I would love to see more of these contests and the overall feeling you're giving off here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You need to work on the face of Emma but that is just the main part. I would take out the banner for this and just add that to the title of the submission.

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[Jeinu]

Nice

This was cool I like the backround on this and I like the face here, good texture even and little details here and there, not sure what the white side peice is, but this was a nice character head you have here, as for changes I would remove that white bar piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would remove that white block or frame you have there.

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[Peanut Man]

Very nice

I love the "COLOR" at the end even if it was blood lol, So here they are those crazy and wild guys that never stop having fun they have jokes and have lots of adventure and thats what I really love about this series you always make a fun story with great adventure so nice work on this one and look forward to many many more comics to come.

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[Heat Dangers]

These are cool

I like these "WHAT-NOT-TO-DO" you present some funny jokes and such and using the dave and carl characters is always nifty, you have a nice style of artwork here and this was pretty entertaining I got a few good "CHUCKLES" out of this but anyways nice work here.

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[Critical]

Cool beans

so cool beans on another great submission of an art comic here this was another brilliant entry with some good laughs and some fine humor, so nice job on these, and some nice art detail aswell each one gets better and better, so keep making up some nice comics as you have done here.

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[Hame]

Good

Ok in terms of anime "STYLE-AND-FAN-ART" this one was good. I think you made a good effort to reimage something you enjoy and recreate the character here. I do like the scar details and the overall body positioning. The eyes and the facial features show his emotions and that is always a bonus and good thing to do with "ANIME-CHARACTERS". They are so filled with emotion you need to represent that "CHARACTERS-EMOTIONS" well and I think you did a good job here. I think also maybe that you need to add some shades and shines to this one. The only real thing it is lacking is the depth of the shadowing and overall shine an anime character would posses. I would add a shine to the tooth and maybe shadows around the eyes and neck area. Your basic shadowing and shading for any standard character whereever the sun would be hitting them. It allows for more realness, even if it is a cartoon, as it builds on the character and adds that depth. I think the hair needs more textures as well, not just a solid main color, maybe shading it some hairs or the way the hair would flow, but you did include "WHITE-LINES" to show the hair "MOVMENT-AND-STYLE", which I did like that you added this detail. Overall the main face and the scar is your best part of this character and I would hope that you'd add up the things discussed here as it would make it a more professional looking anime. A "BACKROUND" would not hurt either, to make it more like a scene from the anime. I do love what you've done and hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up a background and add shadows and shading details to this character.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Ah yes, depth, definitely missed that in this one! I like how the shirt flows into the white, but you're right a background would add a lot. Solid feedback.

[Duck Hunt 1984]

Wow nice

So this was really nice I love the "REALISTIC" the texture alone on this piece is just amazing and I love the "VISUAL" on this I think you should make more stuff like this of other random popular game characters, anyways good art piece here this was pretty awsome if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should make more stuff like this of other random popular game characters

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[Car]

Entertaining

Haha very nice, I think you should have thrown in the "GHECCO" from those tv comercials about car insurance, So this was cool and while alot of the comics seem simular each one drives it self with its own "CREATIVITY" and comedy, and its that comedy that you bring in all of these so a big pat on the back to you for some nice work here as I found this to be pretty amazing work indeed.

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[Where's Carl?]

Keep up the good work

I love the "EXTRA-LONG" adventure here and "POTATO-MAN" was great So you have made me chuckle and laugh manytimes and especialy with this one, the humor is really good and I really like the element of humor that you put in these little stories and while they are just a comic or two they are still very good and thats what I like from these.

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