XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Napoleon and his girl - COTM Feb'18 PimpMyClassic]

Neat

This is cool and has one of those rag doll effects to the body parts and characters. Lots of nice shades and coloring. I love love that you actually have a backgrouond and use the space to tell a story here and not just focus on the characters. You even have a nice neat border here. I like this very much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change, good job here.

~X~

[Alicca]

Beautiful

Now this was an elegant piece I love her "EXPRESSION" on this kind of like she is looking deep into something the sunlight was nice behind her, I think you could even have more domminant lighting effect come off the edge there, but anyways nice work here I like this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could even have more domminant lighting effect come off the edge there

~X~

MatthewLopz responds:

this is such an old piece lol

[Neutrality]

Awsome as drawing

This is one of my "FAVES" from all of your work I do think you could ad some lighting effects into this, So here was once again another great find of a black and white drawing here, good shading and a stylish visual, even though no color here its still pretty amazing, so props to you on some nice drawing and sketch here now maybe one day adding some color or even just a little would be a good improvement for this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could ad some lighting effects into this

~X~

[Raiden!]

Subtle

So this was notbad it was a subtle peice of art good toony cartoony here, I think the white "WORDING" blends too much into the pink backround so thts something that you could change up a bit maybe darker wording or darker backround either or will sufice, but other then that this was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the white Font wording blends too much into the pink backround so thts something that you could change up a bit maybe darker wording or darker backround either or will sufice

~X~

[Old Moss Back Gorge]

Wow amazing

Now this was pretty amazing, the "DETAIL" is so realistic and the backround is just as good so nice job here very realistic style here, and this is one of those pieces that you dont need any changes its a beautifull art piece as is, so really fantastic job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this is one of those pieces that you dont need any changes its a beautifull art piece as is

~X~

[Old man's face]

Very well done

Wow the "DETAIL" is amazing here love the linework its so "FINE" and such detail I almost think you could ad a fancy frame on this and have more like a gallery piece, but anyways thats my take on this piece its a beautiful piece of art here and hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I almost think you could ad a fancy frame on this and have more like a gallery piece

~X~

[Unfinished Comic Page 3]

Very good design

Wow you create "STORIES" in these art pieces and I love them, you should ad a fancy black and white frame on these b/w pieces, So I call this drawing a design but have to say this was very unique and different its a drawing or a design a sketch its a brilliant piece of art here with some nice line work that makes this as artistic as it is even its black and white theme is just as fantastic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should ad a fancy black and white frame on these b/w pieces

~X~

[Fortress]

Neat design

This one here is neat, but seems a bit rushed. I feel like there could be more going on here. This was some nice detail some really good shading to give off that robot design, that sci-fi reference was apparent in your work. I love how you used color and detail and that was all talent on your part. I would love to more of a full background and integrate more elements of what is surrounding the robot, because I honestly don't understand what is around them, but it seems to be connected to them in some way.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more background details and more details on the element surrounding the robot

~X~

BlurMarsh responds:

I wasn't expecting a review on this drawing! I haven't drawn her in a while but I'll try to keep in mind what you told me in the next one. Thank you!!

[Three Year Old Sun]

Ok

Ok I am not sure what you were going for with this one. I had to read the description to even start to understand your concept here. I think maybe you wanted to make something that looked like a 3 year olds work in 3 minutes because the theme was 3? Like keep it all in 3s to fit this idea of a 3 year old drawing something. I think the sun is nice, the way it is positioned is most likely something a 3 year old would do. I think the font is just messy enough to think a kid did it. I mean, when I first saw it, I was like this cannot be his art, his fonts and text style are usually so well done and I enjoy them but this is, Not to say anything negative, it was just not what I am used to from you. The dirty ground is the only thing I think that you got lost in. It is just so plain and just this brown thing that is sitting here. I look at it and thing a kid would draw more, maybe a flower or something. They don't see the world as this brown earth look, well it is more grey now that I think about it. The bushes are your most detailed and do not look too much like a child drew them because of the texture you've put inside them. Most kids dont go for texture but just color things inside the lines. Overall not a bad piece, just different, and I see what you were trying I think lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Think more like a child and do more grass type then the grey and add a flower next time.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Rated three because of all these threes right? :P Hmm yeah, you're right about the ground, although indeed there's no brown there at all, it's all dark gray, and a bit much detail anyway huh. I did go for different so glad that comes across at least!

[shadman]

Notbad

Well this was an interesting piece here I love the dark character "DESIGN" here the orb he holds could have a much more radient glow about it but overall thats the only change I would ad here but this was still an amazing character design here, so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the orb he holds could have a much more radient glow about

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