XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lush]

This was cute

So this was kind of cute I like all the different elements in this one, the moon the baloons and the character, I do think you should ad some sort of "SHINE" on the baloons though that would be a cool idea and mayne some glare from the moon light, these are all just some ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few ideas suggested moonlight, shine on the baloons etc.

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[Magician]

A fantastic entry once again

Was it "COCAIN" as it may "SUGGEST" anyways nice comic, A fantastic piece here and this one is just a part of the puzzle to a bigger part of the story well thats how I see it anyways but anyways I love color so its also refreshing seeing little color like this one, it gives a sense of progress from past to present, but anyways nice work here.

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[80s Selfie June 2015]

Nice color

So there was some nice use of color in this one I love the star and you can see the little details and nifty 80s themed items I think this could use a color frame kind of like what you did with the back end star of colors but as a frame or border to reflect much more color Wich is something the eighties really pushed aswell but overall you have a real nice art piece here make more soon

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[Study]

Very nice work

So this was some really nice work you have here the blood looks real and the red marks look realistic I think some more added blood would be a plus on things here and that expression on her face was just perfect so you did present it in a realistic form here so nice job on this really nice work indeed and I look forward to to much more from you these study types are nice and show raw details just like you have done here

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DocLew responds:

Thank you :)

[Livestream Jam May 5 2011]

Nice design here

So this was a nice design I like all the sketchs and such on this and the fact that you used diffrent color was pretty nifty even so nice job there and really nice effort you bring a sense of energy to the table and thats what I really like about this piece so for me this was cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think a colored border or frame on this would be kind of nifty.

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[Vice]

Really nice character here

And love that you added a form of border with the black then color, but anyways the shading and visual effect of the character really looks good aswell as some smooth lines on top of that so no changes on this one is needed, just keep making more great stuff like this character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
not perfect but doesnt need changes either.

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[savana]

Nice

So this was cool and I like the design you have here some nice animal designs and its liek a little comic you have here kind of nifty and entertaining, love the up to down style and good framework its different and unique, and make for a good piece of art style here. Congrats on the front page

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe ad some pins in the corner kind of like its a poster but thats just an idea.

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[Lady Legasus]

Cute

So this was cute I like the different possess here and like the outfit seems really bright a yellow over a pink was bright maybe a darker background even adding some texture and design to the background would be pretty cool too some small shades would be great you have some nice drawing skills though and it shows off well with this piece so nice job keep up the good work

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[Planet Robobot X Shiver Star]

Very nice

So this was cool I love all the color used in this one the that star I think you should have had a beam of glow or have the star shine with more radiant glowing outter lines just an idea everything else was pretty cool and some really nice detail all around and a very full view point you have on this one so other then some added shine and glow this was pretty good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine and glow

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