XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Selfie]

Cool

I really love the "ENHANCED-COLOR" the characters are really evolving in "DESIGN" Cool once again another fine submission of this fine comic you dawn on is, I really dont know how you make somany but over the years they just pop up here and there so really nice job on these, This is a long running web-comic and has some really nifty outcomes such as what you have presented here today.

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[Interspecies Cat Fight.]

Nice

Well not sure what this is but the design is very good and looks like there is some action scene going on, lots of detail in this one, lots of nice detail andjust some really cartoony style stuff a comic style character here so nice work overall, hope to see more stuff like this.

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Not really anything this was somethig pretty creative and nice effort.

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[Egosuntric]

This was really cool

Now this was pretty cool, I love the color theme here with yellow and red this one here could use a Yellow "BORDER" and that would accent the other theme well, just a little suggestion though, but anyways nice work you have here, just love the color theme you use here on this one.

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A border or frame. nd that would accent the other theme well

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[Le Painting]

Something different

Well this one was nice I love the "PAINTING" style of it all and you made it kind of funny too also love all the little details like other characters and whatnot, overall this was a really nice art piece you have here so nice job indeed, not sure i would change anything about this its pretty amazing, anyways nice work.

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not sure i would change anything about this its pretty amazing

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[Hexmaniac shake]

This was cool

So this was really cool, love the character first of all love the animation that you added as well really did come off well and made for some good animation here, I like your style here, I wouldnt mind some lighting effects to really show more effcts and such but other then that this was cool.

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I wouldnt mind some lighting effects to really show more effcts and such

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[Rising thunder with Badkill and Gianni]

Nice art

So this was a nice "ACTION-SCENE" here with all thats going on And I really like the fuzzy moment in there to represent some action I would suggest more scuff and markings on the metal to represent much more battle scene, but other then that this was a pretty solid art scene.

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I would suggest more scuff and markings on the metal to represent much more battle scene

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[hornedgirl]

Nice character

So really nice character you have here, love all the "PINK" maybe too much pink so as a suggestion maybe adding more meshed colors in the hair but thats just an opinion of things other then that this was a well made character you have here hope to see more from you soon.

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some texture would be a plus.

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[Necromancer Commission (Low Res)]

Necro-WOW

I love a good necromancer now and then. I think your facial detailing and armour/outfit detail is good. I do like the facial expression being given off here using just the facemask and the weapon is a nice match to the mask. I love your detailing inside the armour with the finer details and colors here and there. I do think the background of pure black is fine but you could add some stars in there or a mystic spell mist of some sorts. The halo could use a big burst of glow effects to really bring that out and that would work well with a background or a spell.

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This really just needs a background because everything else is great

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Carebearpuncher responds:

thank's for the feed back I appreciate it

[Deadpool and Harley Quinn Crazylove]

A really nice piece

So this was a really nice "ART" piece you have here, I love the combo of characters you have here it is really a nice view point here some really nice work and the structure of the characters is amazing, love the use of color aswell, I do think you could ad a frame on this might accent the whole piece much better, anyways nice work.

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I do think you could ad a frame on this might accent the whole piece much better

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[A Drawin' for a Drawler]

Interesting

That hat is scary, it looks like it is gonna eat that poor kid. Also this kid needs some sun, very very pale. Is he canadian perhaps? I think you did a good job here, but it seems very whited out, like the lighting seems off and it is too bright, almost faded. I work sharpen and darken this up a bit more and add more color to the face. If you are going to give everything else color then why not try it for the male too? That is just a suggestion, because otherwise you obviously have talent and an ability to drawn well, but I would work on your use of coloring. Good efforts.

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Work on coloring in the face of the male here, but keep it up

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Zaccura responds:

Haha I definitely agree about it being too bright, he is not that pale lol. I was quite new to painting realistically so I was a tad afraid when adding the shading to his face for fear of "messing it up". However the lack of color in his skin is intentional as I suppose I was trying to do some fancy shmancy thing where it's monochrome except for his clothes, not sure I pulled it off properly haha XD

Thank you so much for the constructive and honest review, I really appreciate it! :D

And indeed his hat is quite scary.