XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #15 A Bowling Baller]

Cool

So here was a cool character really nice original and detailed and new idea to use a bowling ball to be someone's head. You have a very simple and plain yellow background that was very bland besides that cool character and I don't think the brown outfit works with a yellow background since they are so close in hue it seems too similar, but overall this is good and not too bad. I would say I really will remember the character you've created.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background details that is a new color and maybe has shading.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm I think the one color that doesn't really match here is the blue, but good notes!

[It's Over]

Nice art piece

So this is a nice "ART" piece I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more, this was some nice artwork here and I really liked it and was some nice detail, theres a alot of blank space in there and that was the intense.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more

~X~

SPLATTERBRAIN responds:

Was gonna put the shadow of a giant hand coming down on him as if to press him out of existence, but I felt it'd be too much

[Feel the Wind]

Very nice

Now here was something a little different and something more unique I like what you did with the tree here and like how you added some birds in the distance I do think adding more props such as birds and maybe adding to this some leaves just floating around from the wind or something very nice brush strokes here and once again another beautiful painting so nice job indeed and I do look forward to more of your painting style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added props like a floating leaf or two

~X~

[Assassination]

Wow nice

And here was something nice I love background work and you did a pretty amazing job on this city scene now I do think more sparkles and shines are needed like more lights glowing and his weapon could have some more shine about that as well but overall this was some good paining work I have e really grown to enjoy your paintings and glad I had the chance to review some of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter city lights and maybe even a shine on his weapon

~X~

[Smiling Man]

Notbad

So a smiling man nice idea I wonder where that idea came from but regardless this was some nice strokes of paint and his smile is pretty good I was impressed with the brush strokes on this one I do think some birds or a sun light would have fit well in the background here but overall this was a really nice piece here anyways keep at it and keep showcasing your work for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background props and such

~X~

[Bob Ross Practice]

Wow nice

Now I have to say this was some nice work here and I guess you can't go wrong with some Bob Ross he always has a great tip or two I think some reflection off the water and some shine off the mountain would be a good element on things here it really is a beautiful painting you have here and some nice work all around so for me just need some shine and reflection effects anyways keep up the amazing work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some reflection off water and some sparkle off mountain

~X~

[Quick Face Paint]

Cool

So this was pretty good I like the face portrait you have here and it looks really nice I love the paint strokes on this the background being just white was ok but wouldn't mind more of a something back there even a small related pattern or design back there but regardless this was a nice piece here and some nice overall artwork that you have here keep up the fantastic work you have created

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background pattern or even color design

~X~

[Headed Up]

Wow amazing

Now this was something different and I love the style here also love all the blood but I do think you need much more dripping blood from neck and even from the knife and since the background is black I would go one step farther and ad some blood splatter in the back round just for some nice and extra detail but regardless this was some pretty amazing work here and I liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added splatter

~X~

[A Fox]

A fox

So here was something nice I like the whole fox element I think some added background is needed though something you can show off the world of the fox maybe some Forrest backdrop or some scene simular just an idea of course but it would accent the fox very well overall this was an amazing painting of a fox and I enjoyed it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background or backdrop scene

~X~

[Why]

Very nice

So this was really nice and it has an artistic quality about it with some nice use of colors and some really nice structure in an abstract way of course it has some nice elements and shows off your creative side here with this stylish piece sort of a portrait with the face and it just blends into some abstract elements and that's pretty nifty and artistic anyways keep up the great artistic work as you have been doing here

~X~