XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #8 Eightball]

Love this

I really do love a good 8 ball piece. I have one or two myself that I have done. I do think your version of this is interesting. Books piled over it was a new take on it I have never seen before. I do think that there is still too much white space and the overall 8ball is a bit too small but the colors in the books and their positioning over it with a slight tilt was nice to see. Very creative piece here. I did enjoy it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think this one here could use a background of sorts to limit the white space and make the 8ball bigger but it is pretty good so far

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Ah yes, I remember those! Knowledge weighs heavier than luck... maybe? ;) Thanks for the review!

[Sketch 1]

Notbad

A very unique piece here, So this was notbad at all, I like this style of drawing it is black and white but thats one of the things I like about it, and I think you could ad some slight subtle color to it but honestly you have enough detail it may not need any color, but some color might be a plus.

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you should make more of these types and such.

~X~

[Sketch 4]

Good drawing here

Another nice drawing here the backround could use some detail some props or some backround elements, I like that its black and white but that color would really bring this out more, This was actually really good sketch and or drawing as some like to say, but yes a bit of color would really bring this one out, anyways keep making these awsome sketches and drawings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround could use some detail some props or some backround element

~X~

[Animal-Clown-Ruler]

Very nice

another great group of fine characters this particualar one has some deep detail not as much shine but I think you could have more shine and more sparkles here and there, and ad some fancy frames and such, anyways nice work here and I look forward to more of your work as its a beautiful sight.

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I think you could have more shine and more sparkles here and there, and ad some fancy frames and such

~X~

[Inktober #9 Cloud Nines]

Nice

Another nice piece of art you have here some good coloring and very nice visuals with the 9s. I would for sure like to see this as an animated short, maybe just have the nines floating downward in a gif type display with the window staying still. I think the use of the red and yellow curtains was a nice touch too and made it feel more realistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice art here but needs to be animated

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Animation required every time there's something falling huh. ;) Thanks!

[Inktober #10 Clear]

Nice work

This was cool and this was a one in terms of quality here and your line styles were pretty consistent. I wouldn't mind even more colors as there was one the one color and it tends to get lost with the rest of the work when you have only one solid color going on. I think that this one is pretty nice as it is tho, but yes, definately needs color. I hope to see this next time with my suggestions as you have repeated designs before.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more color other than the only one you have going

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Feels like when I start using additional colors it easily messes things up, sometimes best to opt for simplicity, but I shall experiment; see what happens in the future. :) Thanks again!

[Megaman RWBY]

Nice

So here you have a nice group of characters here and they really stand out well, very sharp and crisp details, my tip here is that you should ad some kind of interesting frame to surround this whole piece I like what you have done here though, very nice work indeed.

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my tip here is that you should ad some kind of interesting frame to surround this whole piece

~X~

[The Gorgeous and the Grotesque]

Black and white stylish

Really nice with the lighting effects I think you should ad much more lighting effects would really improve on this piece, The Black and white stylish stuff here is nice I love what you do with the lines to formulate some nice shades and detail, its un-canny what you can do to make these things truly formulate all with just black and white line work, and its pretty smooth linework if you ask me.

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I think you should ad much more lighting effects would really improve on this piece

~X~

[The Most Haunted Forest]

Very good

Wow this is a great piece of artwork and captures that haunted feeling right down to each detail. The erie way you drew the shadows of trees and the use of fog effects make you really feel this is creepy and perfect for a haunted setting. The blues and cool colors really make it seem haunted too because it isnt using bright happy colors. Good choice there. I would say this needs some characters but you said it was a background for a piece you are doing. I look forward to seeing this from you.

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I am just looking forward to when you add some characters. Good job overall.

~X~

[Inktober #24 The Greeting Card]

Card?

I think one here is more of a morse code than a card but this piece here is very interesting. I mean, it isn't like your others and say is a saying. I am trying to work on what it says actually, because it is bothering me, so you have my interested in that aspect. I think the lines you used for the text is good, but too basic. You have much white space surrounding them and you could have cropped this a but so the lines are bigger and easier to read. Apparently this translates out to "HELLO". is that correct?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less white space and make the text bigger to read the code more

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's a card with morse code. The pun's in both title and code itself, so if you actually know the code... heeey, you actually looked it up! :D Yes indeed, it's a very literal greeting card! Thanks for that effort!