XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Malk's Adventure [Tentative Title]]

Really nice

So this was really "NICE" and I like all the use of color and there is some nice designs here nice character forms here I did think the flames could have been more vibrant and maybe even more lighting effects all around, but overall this was pretty good work here.

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I did think the flames could have been more vibrant and maybe even more lighting effects all around

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[Welcome to my Class]

A fantastic entry once again

Nice pose here on this great character and some nice form, some added shines and sparkles off the backround details would be nice, Now this was a fantastic piece of art here you really do have this nact for creative characters and smooth lines it seems to all come together very well, There is not enough words for me to say more because you have a beautifull design and structure on character work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added shines and sparkles off the backround details would be nice

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[Time for Tests!]

Nice submission

Another nice group of characters here nice backrounds and nice character work here, A nice submission here your character work is as always great stuff, I like the detaial its smooth art work and the blending of the lines and curves all seem to come forward very well, so nice job, here, a great piece of art here with some nice character work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
really no need for any change son this piece.

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[Luigi's Crazy Mansion]

Love the color

Lots of great "COLOR" in this one this piece is pretty amazing I almost think you should ad a frame and or border on this piece, Very nice work here and some nice effort aswell, allthough I wouldnt mind seeing some more effects throughout, It was a pretty good piece of work, so keep making fantastic stuff like this. so keep at it. and keep making nifty things. for all of us to enjoy. nice job here and you have shown some good detail a lot is desired here in this piece with all the effort and detail that you have put fourth in it. It does however Radiates some good artistic Expression.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I almost think you should ad a frame and or border on this piece

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[CC Style C3PO]

Notbad work

This was some really nice work you have here, I like the "SHINE" you have on "C3PO" seems like the "CANVUS" was rather small maybe you should make this bigger so that you can show off much more of the detail here on this one, but besides that this was pretty cool and a nice piece of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvus wouldnt hurt more detail and effects to be shown.

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[Cockroach Halloween 2018 (pencils)]

Cool design

Very nice work I like the lines on this I think some small glow from the candy would have topped this piece off, So this was a cool drawing and design you have presented us with these B/W versions are kind of nifty with all sorts of visual apeal to them even with no color they are pretty amazing, and I like them, I think more people should draw and design stuff in black and white.

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I think some small glow from the candy would have topped this piece off

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[The Wendigo]

Dark Valentine

Oh wow I really like this one, so dark and deep with emotion. The grey tones and skeletal body of this character is deep and he seems haunted by love and gaurded by it. I love the way the background flows with this and the overall mood it has here. I do love the bits of "RED" in this and the antler like face you have given your character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would maybe try a border that fits with this, maybe a wooden one to give off a painting feeling

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[SSSS GRIDMAN !]

Nice work

So here was some really nice work I think you could have put some lighting effects on the backround and maybe even some glow on his eyes, So its always a pleasure to see stuff like this they are both artistic and show off the Artists visions and skills, and with this particular piece you did present someneat and differant so I had some pleasure in revieing this, so nice effort here. And now I come to the end of the review sadly, I have enjoyed seeing this and as I look at your piece it just really gets better and better so nice efforts and keep making stuff like this and let the imagination soar. to new hights and new random ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have put some lighting effects on the backround and maybe even some glow on his eyes

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[Uccelli is Tired]

This was cute

So this was a cute character here I like the "TEXT-BUBBLE" here and her expression her face was "BRILLIANT" some nice artwork here I do think some added backround details just a few small details would be a plus, but regardless this was a nice art piece and some good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added backround details just a few small details would be a plus

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[The Mafia]

Very nice drawing

Well I have to say that this was a very nice drawing as it is, love the black hat and "GLASSES" the glasses could use some shine on them more then what you have there now. and the blood could have more deeper reds and such, but overall a nice piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the glasses could use some shine on them more then what you have there now. and more deeper reds for the blood.

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TheStrawberryBazooka responds:

He he... The 'glasses' are supposed to be a deep shadow... (slowly slides under table)
Thanks though! I will work on that!