Creative
You really bunched it all together in this one, I would love some more sparkle and shine but again I always suggest that on your work, So this was pretty good I like the creative idea on this one you added some really nice shine and detail here with some really nice view point, "THE-FIRST-VIEW-POINT" of this is very nice and you bring some "NIFTY-DETAIL" to the front lines with this one so nice sprite work here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love some more sparkle and shine but again I always suggest that on your work
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