XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Volpina]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I actually like these animals so that was interesting way you made one into a lady. I wonder if you are a fury fan? You have some decent skills with the brush work as you blended from color to color well and kept that animal fur look and a good amount of detail, the only thing I would suggest would be ad some more background details, the green is interesting and draws you to focus on the animals lady but it needs a bit more, or if not, try a border around the entire piece to just balance out your white space. I did like your name above the tail tho, that was a nice way to sign off the art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background with more detail or try a border to get more white space off of this, but good job

~X~

lukisart responds:

Thank you for your advice!!!

[Phoenix]

Nice

I love this, it almost reminds me of a dragon but your "PHOENIX" is really good the pencil portion is very nice and welldone, I feel like you should have flames or a fire glow on the outter shell of the phoenix or something like that, regardless you have an amazing deawing here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should have flames or a fire glow on the outter shell of the phoenix or something like that

~X~

[Imaginary friend]

A nice B/W

Maybe you should ad some backround detail like some simple props or a city view or even just a tree, And this was a nice black and white drawing and sketch you have here, I love the detail and effort you have put into this piece, there is some "GOOD-ENERGY" surrounding it and your deep effort "SHOWCASE" there hard work so really nice job on this fantastic piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe you should ad some backround detail like some simple props or a city view or even just a tree

~X~

[don't go]

Deep work

Wow ok this one was deep, don't go is the title and I see that here in the work. The purple glow in the eyes was my fave part here and the whole world looking polluted and doomed. I like the use of the mask to tell the tale of how she lives and the pain she is in. The colors work right for the story you are giving off here and I am sucked in wanting more and more details of the tale. I do love the purple and the girl herself is very nice and drawn out well. I want to say I love how you colored this, the flow of colors to colors is unique and solid without a blur or brush to brush feeling. I do love this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a border and more sun effects in the background, but really good without that.

~X~

[when aliens go obese...]

Artistic

So I found this piece to be very "ARTISTIC" the grunge look of color and the form of the character is really good, I do think you could use a wild frame on this like a fancy border of some type and such, but besides that this was pretty amazing and artistic work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could use a wild frame on this like a fancy border of some type and such

~X~

[Crimson]

Very nice

This was some very nice work the red hair really drew me into this and made me want more, I love that you put her hair in a pony-tail, but made it unique and flow like the wind is hitting it. The brush strokes and coloring was a nice touch, reminded me of watercoloring in a digital sense, you really know how to make some good stuff and the talent shows here. I think adding a background tho would make this really pop, something bigger, and maybe, make her a full body character, because I want to see more of this girl. It says this is a sketch in description, so think about expending on this for next time and we can get something awesome going on here with your already obvious talents.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background and make her full-bodied.

~X~

[cloun]

Cool

So this was a great character not the "TRICKY" im use to seeing but this madness one is pretty "NIFTY" love the backround, but the character design is pretty welldone and a sharp design, I think you should have the eyes glowing or brighter that would be a cool effect, and overall a nice piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have the eyes glowing or brighter that would be a cool effect

~X~

[A Slice Of Pai]

Notbad

Well ok this was a bit different and I don't really understand this one but I do think your skills for comics is down-pat. You have the panels well thought out and the signatures are in places that don't impede on the art itself. I like the shine on the Reese cup and the variations in the cups and how you did different perspectives of positions for each of the cups. I love the little effects you used here and there and the overall look is good. The text is even very comic like and fits in with that comic theme. Now, I just don't like the writing too much here, maybe it needs a bit more, but I am not sure I enjoyed the subject matter. To each their own, but otherwise a good art work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more dialog and more context with the dialog, just found it a bit confusing.

~X~

[City]

Very cool

So this was very "COOL" I love the amount of "DETAIL" you have added in this from every point there is some kind of nifty detail and you really bring it forward, I would suggest really filling this with some color even adding some frames on it, so really nice job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest really filling this with some color even adding some frames on it

~X~

[Friendly]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the style here and a nice painting style the "HAIR" alone looks very realsitic and has some very fine strands that make it alive the rest of the portrait also just comes out in a pleasent way and you make it all look so beautiful so nice work here indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Throw a fancy frame or border on this piece.

~X~