XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stan Lee]

RIP Stan

I remember writing to him as a kid a great father of comics in my opinion, love the webbing in the backround maybe some of should have like a silky look and shine to it, A big Applaud for you as These pieces always make me think and make the mind really wonder what is going on and what can be, a picture tells a story as this does. it was even a tad bit Majestic. I hate to end here because this piece was different and I like what it represented in an art type, it was interesting and does give off a unique vibe. and I hope you keep making stuff like this because it was very good.

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love the webbing in the backround maybe some of should have like a silky look and shine to it

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[Chain Chompettte]

Great character here

So you do some amazing work this one was great with lots of detail, that crown would be nice if it had a sparkle or two comming off of it, So your ideas seem to come alive in this piece and you really show off the details, and its those little details that make this what it is. You could Polish some small areas but probably not needed as much, Finally I will finish this Extended part of the review, So I will say keep making stuff like this because it brings a creative mind and sould to really bring it out and thats exactly what you have done here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that crown would be nice if it had a sparkle or two comming off of it

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[Fridge-O-Matic]

Great use of color

I am more amazed with all the use of "COLOR" and as a suggestion more vibrant colors used, love how you filled all the space, And now my Overview Finally, I dont know what to say about this picture or much to say aside from what I have already mentioned above, it is very nice, detailed, structured and provides a a creative outlet for not just you but us the viewer, so very nice work here, I was pleased with the results here. Some areas could be slightly Polished but you have done a great job sofar, And I am sure I will review more of your work in the near future.

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as a suggestion more vibrant colors used, love how you filled all the space

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[Lola Bunny]

Cute bunny

So this was a cute bunny you have here the onlything lacking here was some backround detail but you have done some amazing work maybe just some props here or there some small scene or something back there, your bunny character here was pretty amazing though and I was pretty impressed.

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onlything lacking here was some backround detail but you have done some amazing work maybe just some props here or there some small scene or something back there

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[Kona]

Notbad

So not sure who kona is but this was some nice work and a "CHARACTER" design you have here I love the dark colors here and there and a nice form of the character, I found no changes that you need for this piece you have done an outstanding job here and I look forward to even more.

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I found no changes that you need for this piece you have done an outstanding job here

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[MegaTankMan Spritesheet]

This was cool

So sprite work is a dime o dozen but but this sprite work here of yours was very "NIFTY" you have some pleasent visual here with some really nice flavor, I like what you have done here and its this kind of sprite detail I really enjoy seeing, so keep making sprites.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small color added would be cool.

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Lambtaco responds:

Colour would have been nice, but off-model.

[MechaNakedZilla]

Cool

Well here we have another good drawing or sketch as some may call it but I found it to be good work even with none or little color to it, its really good stuff, now adding color later wouldnt hurt either, but I like your drawing and design here with all of its black and white style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added detail in the backrounds.

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[The End of the War to End All Wars]

Beautiful

And this was a beautiful piece you have here the "ROSE" growing full of life while the black and white backround is not so alive but you did good, more water points would have been nice and more glare from those water points, you have done some amazing work here.

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more water points would have been nice and more glare from those water points

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[Basquiat]

Love the color

So with this one you have some really amazing use of color here and just all the different colors really jumped out at me more with this one then anything else, maybe adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus, I love your creative use of color.

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adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus

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DocLew responds:

Not to be rude or anything but you're leaving all these reviews to 'help me improve my works' but they're just your personal opinions, not real constructive criticism.
And no, sparkles and shine won't be a plus on Basquiat crown.

[Shoot Nick Shoot]

Different version

so this one was a different version of the "SPRITE" you have a nice sprite and this one shooting I still think some added sparkle on this piece and your other one would be a small yet good addition, overall this was pretty good stuff and nice animation on the sprite.

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I still think some added sparkle on this piece and your other one would be a small yet good addition

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