XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #13]

Great

I think this one is pretty great in terms of your artistic ability and style. The demon like creature is just spot-on good and has eyes that draw you in. The background of small lines going into each other really helps you focus on the creature. It allows you to have full space and matches with the style of the creature. I love the horns and the way you did that a bit differently. The background color of grey is also fitting because it allows for some depth to this piece. I do think this one has potential for an animated short. I hope you'll do something like that. Good work overall, hope to see you start animating things similar to this soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do like it as is but maybe animate this one next time

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'm pretty proud of this one too. :) Thank you!

[Phase Shift Assassin]

Nice

Some really nice "ELEMENT" with this one, the deep texture in the backround is really impressive I do think some added lighting and glow could be added to this piece but for what it is its still pretty impressive as it is, so nice work here and hope you keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added lighting and glow could be added to this piece but for what it is its still pretty impressive as it is

~X~

[Nude #2]

Nice

A nice drawing and sketch the "SHADING" is really nice its subtle but still pretty good, the pose of the persons backside was nice too this is one of those pieces they teach you in class and you have done well on this beautifull drawing I really like it, I would suggest some backround detail but honestly dont feel like this one needs any, but anyways nice work indeed and hope you make more of these drawings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some backround detail but honestly dont feel like this one needs any

~X~

[Inktober #16]

Best yet

You have done something really good and detailed here. I do like the One Piece tribute you've got going on here. You didn't draw it like the anime either, which is always nice to see other peoples interpretations of things they love. I do love the water splashes on the beach, the air, the way he is excited with his arm extending. I do think this one is a well though out piece. You've made a full scene and you made a smile come to my face seeing the joy he has. You expressed that feeling in a positive and fun way and all using your inktober skills. I loved it overall and there isn't much to change on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this one as is and good job

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad you like it, thanks!

[Game Character]

Really nice design

So this was a really nice "DESIGN" and good progression of the work you have here, I love the black and white drawing most because its the "RAW" drawing the other colored ones are pretty good too, I think all this needs is some backround props to accent the main focus here, but anyways really nice work here and love this little robot you here would love to see much more designs like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think all this needs is some backround props to accent the main focus here

~X~

[Inktober #18]

Theme

Ok well this is okay and seems you've got a bit of a theme going on here. I see you've decided to make another Luffy piece, which is fine. You've certainly captured that flow up effect like the pain is being sucked or he is falling losing parts of himself. I think that the white space here is your only bad part. I would add more in the background, and if not, then a border or a bit of texture lines like you did in the past. Lineart usually has a lot of lines going on and INKtober is pretty much the same deal to me. Overall it was nice to see another interpretation of this character you seem to love.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the amount of white space and add up some textures to help this flow more and seem more like an INK piece

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm well I'm not sure I agree this would actually be better with a background, the white's like a part of his fading away, in a way... but does get me curious how it'd look with a simple color; maybe something darker... might try that too! Thanks.

[Torso]

Wow very good

Wow this was very intense and I have "REVIEWED-YOUR-STUFF" before and love your work this particular "PIECE" is some of your best stuff the sweat dripping is very realistic and the body and bone structure is very deep in realistic mannor so really nice job on this one and really good work, some type of backround would have been nice but since this was more of a showcase of the torso its pretty good as is, so anyways keep up the amazing work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some type of backround would have been nice but since this was more of a showcase of the torso its pretty good as is

~X~

[Inktober #30]

Simple

Ok so this was one was decent and simple and it had a lot of things I do like going on in it. I think the clouds are very nice and create the mood you are going for, but they are really really fair and bright to the point I almost can't really see them. I would darken those ones up a bit just to make it easier on the eyes. The surfer dude is pretty nice and you can tell what you were going for with your line work, so I did like that. The water and wave splashes were well done and details that are very much needed in the kind of ink you were portraying here. I think overall this one was very simple but good one at the end.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Darken your clouds as they are a bit too bright and hard to see.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Solid advice here! Thanks.

[Come here and beat me up!]

Amazing drawing here

Really fantastic detail here like the cliff she lays on, seems like something is missing from the backround and I think you could ad something back there maybe a lighting effect or some glowing eyes, Amazing drawings here, I really love the stylish detail and the elegance of the characters or character, it can be subtle or intense but you bring out the best in the lines, So thats one thing I have come to enjoy about your work here, so keep it up and keep it going strong.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
something is missing from the backround and I think you could ad something back there maybe a lighting effect or some glowing eyes

~X~