XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adoptable #18 - Teddy]

Very cute

So here was another cute one and I have to say you have done a fantastic job on these some really nice charchter work some nice detail as I may have suggested before make some fancy frames or borders for these types so that you can showcase your work alot better and have focus on the main character but that's just an idea overall you have some really nice work I look forward to even more from your work of art and imagination

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fancy borders or frames

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[Adoptable #16 Neko]

Cute

So this was a cute piece here I like the background work that displayed a larger image of the main focus you really do some nice charchter detail and it really comes out well I like the detail in each character you push forward and like the adorable and cute style you bring to the table you do some really nice work as for improvments I don't think you need any on this piece it's pretty solid work here and a great charchter design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing major you already prepared a nice charchter design here so nice work here

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[Adoptable #15 Snow Wolf]

Cool

So this was another great one with all these types and you showcasing your work you should have them framed and such just a fancy little frame would do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a framed or border

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[DELTARUNE]

Very colorful

So this was very well "COLORED" I love how the vibrant just jumps out at you with this one, I think some more fancier borders or frames would reflect more focus on the main piece, First of all this was a nice piece, I always get pleasure from these types of artwork, and its always a nice blessing finding these types from the art portal. Well I hope you keep making stuff like this as it was pretty nice, and its nice to see stuff like this come thru the portal, anyways keep up the great work. because you have some nice talent and would love to see much more of it grace our paths.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some more fancier borders or frames would reflect more focus on the main piece

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[Chameleon assassin]

Very detailed

So this was something "WELL-DETAILED" here and love the darkness and the moon just above my suggestion might be to ad more lighting beating down on the trees and character, Something like this goes from a simple idea into a complex design, and thats what you came up with it really just jumped out at me and I am glad I had a chance to see this. So here you have a unique style as I have mentioned, and I will look for more stuff from you soon especially if its like this stuff you have here now. But I will expand on this just a tad, and say this was a pleasure to review and really enjoyed your efforts and ideas here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my suggestion might be to ad more lighting beating down on the trees and character

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[Kantai Collection - Iowa]

Really nice work

so this was some really "NICE-WORK" and its america themed so that was cool lol, I normally would suggest some added backround detail on these types but this one was ok as is, so nice job, These types of art styles are always my favorites because they bring something else to the table rather then the same ole same stuff that people randomly make. Infact I would even call this a bit on the Symbolic side And my Overview is it was Appropriately done pretty well you gave it style a unique style at that and you kept going so nice work on this one for sure. But untill next time keep up the solid work.

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I normally would suggest some added backround detail on these types but this one was ok as is, so nice job

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[Swimming dragon]

Cute

so this was pretty "CUTE" and even "ADORBLE" I love the character design here the bubbles were a nice touch I even think you could have took it one step farther and ad some sparkles on the bubbles, but besides all that this was a nice character design here really nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the bubbles were a nice touch I even think you could have took it one step farther and ad some sparkles on the bubbles

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[Parappa n Lammy]

Cool combo

Great character "COMBO" here and I am loving the cartoony feel with colors even that yellow guitar seems to mesh in the yellow backround maybe some added texture in the backround to offset that, but overall this was a nifty idea here some really nice characters and poses.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that yellow guitar seems to mesh in the yellow backround maybe some added texture in the backround to offset that

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[Purpose]

Really nice

So this was some nice "WORK" I love all the details in this piece, seems like some added shine and even sparkle could have been pushed on some those detailed points, but a really good art piece here and shows off a sort of story even like she is on a mission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like some added shine and even sparkle could have been pushed on some those detailed points

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BoyPorcelain responds:

Thank you!

I'm glad to see the idea came through, i will keep that in mind next time i use light like that.. If you have the time i have more art pieces that could do with some crit. Would love whatever feedback there is! :)

[Ralsei]

Wow nice

So this was really cool a great work of art and beautifull character detail, that grid in the backround seems as if you could have made the purple lines glow more, I always enjoy seeing what the art portal has to offer, and it always seems to keep me interested and comming back, so this was a pleasent joy to see. It kind of reaches out and grabs at you in away as do special art pieces and this one just kind of pulls you in with a unique style and well detailed details, I like your style here, so keep at this and keep making these kinds of art pieces they are nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that grid in the backround seems as if you could have made the purple lines glow more

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