XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Merry Early]

A cute comic

So this was a rather "CUTE" comic, you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort, this was a good joke well executed and the artwork was notbad either I enjoyed this piece here.

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you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort

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BigEyedBen responds:

A fair analysis.

For one thing, I enjoy drawing like I did when I was 9 years old. I'd like to believe I could make more detailed artwork, but my cartoon character was invented when I was a child.

I usually choose the amount of frames based off the story I want to tell with them. I've occasionally, in the past, made some strips without dialogue to kind of emphasize the point that there's an awkward pause between scenes. If you wish to elaborate on their length I am more than willing to hear your input.

What sort of web comic would you prefer to see? A running series based on random events, or something along a plotline that takes place along a series of story-based events? I've had plans for both.

[Dragonair + Rapidash = Rapidair]

Beautiful

A really beautiful piece you have some amazing "TEXTURE" in this and the combo of the two mixes Dragonair + Rapidash = Rapidair was a really nice idea, You should make a series of art with more combos like this, but anyways nice work here and some beautiful artwork.

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You should make a series of art with more combos like this

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[Bug Family]

Color

I really love your use of "COLOR" love the vibrant colors here on this one and all the bugs is cool, I could see you making some sort of web comic with the great use of color you do, anyways nice design here and it was artistic with great color make more soon.

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I could see you making some sort of web comic with the great use of color you do

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[Mat Stubs]

Wow

Wow this was pretty "INTENSE" I like the "SHATTER" effect in this one love the green eyes too I think you could ad even a little more glow to the eyes too might give it a more intense view point, the face itself was pretty good a good art piece you have here.

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I think you could ad even a little more glow to the eyes too might give it a more intense view point

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[Fighter Uno 💀]

Really great character

So you have a really great "CHARACTER" here I love that "SWORD" too I think you should ad some extra shine and even some sparkle on the sword, but besides that you have a nice design here and nice details to go along with a brilliant character so keep up the amazing work.

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you should ad some extra shine and even some sparkle on the sword

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[Plasma]

Really nice

So this was nice You have some nice "NEON" and "GLOW" effects in this and in that case I think you could ad a nifty neon or glowing border and or frame to reflect all the glow points of this piece, you have a nice character and it really stands out well so nice job on this piece.

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I think you could ad a nifty neon or glowing border and or frame to reflect all the glow points of this piece

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gatekid3 responds:

Thanks.
It has a neon look to it, but I feel like a neon frame would just muddy things a bit. Not only would it take away from the face in my opinion, a neon boarder just goes against what i was going for i think. Like i said, it was one of those plasma ball things. Maybe darker boarders or background would help emphasize the light more, but I think light boarders wouldn't look particularly nice.

[Gosh and sloth]

Interesting

So this was an interesting piece here, kind of "FUNNY" and I found it very "AMUSING" and you braught some good humor wish you had made this longer but the joke was well executed on this, I would suggest some backround detail maybe even start a nice web comic from it, anyways nice entry here.

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I would suggest some backround detail maybe even start a nice web comic from it

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[Kantai Collection - Akashi]

Nice character

So this was a nice character very "ANIME" and thats ok, you have presented some really nice "DETAIL" in this one love all the extra stuff you added to here even the backround being bland was ok with this one as its focus on the main character, I have no tips on changes for this piece as you have presented it well, anyways nice work here.

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I have no tips on changes for this piece as you have presented it well

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[Hi There]

Very nice

Wow this was pretty good the character "ART" here is pretty amazing I love the paint style the striped lines are kind of a nifty effect, you do some very nice work here and a very nice visual point here this was just a beautiful piece and I have no tips of suggestions as I found this piece to be really nice as is, nice work here.

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I have no tips of suggestions as I found this piece to be really nice as is

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[Death DC]

Wow nice

Wow I really love this "PIECE" the "CHARACTER" was amazing the image behind here was just the perfect touch you should do more stuff like that for your backrounds, the girl her self was amazing love the shine points allthough some added shine wouldnt hurt either, a fantastic art piece here.

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love the shine points allthough some added shine wouldnt hurt either

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